Weak battle indeed, but imma say iwillmerkyou wins
Only for the simple fact that he had disses in his verse.
Inermental, to me... seemed like he was glorifyin himself
Which doesn't do shit for your battle.
But make it look like you have an oversized ego
v/iwillmerkyou
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=169142
mods...please just close this battle so i can start new battles...
someone will have to take the loss...
and that will be gay to just give you the loss
aswell as the other kid, even tho IMO he did lose
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I show arrogance and elegance
But no tolerance for nonsense NICE
I bring violence im a nuisance
Intermental leaves no evidence NICE
Ive got brains and intelligence
But no conscience no innocence OK
We roll in the darkened silence
Represent us in any residence NICE
And i swing for your chin with no hesitense
Imma captain ya betta bring your regiments AWSOME
Im the real shit sit out in the audience
The whole world love me even more than the president NICE
Youre rhymes were so shit were dey even legitiment?
The whole world praisin me aint no coincident. AWSOME
OVERALL i am going to go with intermental. his shit was better overall. his pucnhes hit home harder than the other guys did. overall i am going to go wit intermental.
v/inter
INTER:
dude, you threw no punches... NON... all you did was rhyme little shit
good job, you have an okay rhyme scheme... BUT YOU FUCKING SUCK
NO PUNCHES
Iwillmerku
not a very strong verse... but you threw punches...and the shit/piss thing was funny
i liked that
so in the end, dude, you had an okay verse
some shit was played but NOTHING was bad
so yeah
v/ I WILL MERK YOU
ACTUAL PUNCHES, better structure
i'm goin for inter cuz i liked his shit betta and the otha guy is a fag
Honestly Kinda Weak battle. Intermental you had no big punches it was like poetry. IwIlLmErKyOu had a couple good punches that made me smile but some were weak such as the ending. work on your puches and elevate. Intermental use more puches and personals but your rhyme scheme is good.
V/IwIlLmErKyOu
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[b] This was an okay battle but i see that it was acually weak for the both of u i mean u both couldve done alot better there was a couple of good punches in there for the both of u Intermenatl work on ur structure a lil and ur elevatin.....IwILLmErKyOu u did good but not awsome u were good at elevating an a couple of good rhymes in there not bad
V/IwIlLmErKyOu
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