10 lines minimum.
12 lines maximum.
No dick riding
No crew votes
No hate votes
No biting
No feeding
No recycling
No swaying
Cheaking in; i'll be awaiting your's doesnt matter who spits first.
Un x Pected
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10 lines minimum.
12 lines maximum.
No dick riding
No crew votes
No hate votes
No biting
No feeding
No recycling
No swaying
Cheaking in; i'll be awaiting your's doesnt matter who spits first.
chec kinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
I'll give you talent lectures; your not ready; my wins expected,
looking for another easy win; well ill leave you standing corrected.
Cleared your slate once; isnt it ashame you'll be doing it again,
2 losses is 1 to many, expecially with that pretty record to defend.
Anb - reincarnated?! the 1st attempt fail with that pathetic crew,
well we all no 2nd is only the best in kindergarden and pre-school.
Is there something to hide;names not legible, not ready to shine,
only respectable thing for you is the many herbs in your win line.
Wont show your first loss; ill make sure to leave a scar to remind,
that line WILL be showing vets; under your loss column, starting with mine.
dawg i got work so ill drop soon man
nice verse but i dont want ti a no show honestly on ym break ill drop
aite im out tho....ill try to drop now u came hard so idont wanna to go to waist shud be a good abttle but give me time i got work in teh city
i gpot tiem my bad im droppin now
i got time igot time i got time im droppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
peep my otehr battlesd
Lol; sounds like an excuse to me; just face it like a man and drop a verse, you have to lose sometimes; and if your just making up excuses thats pretty pathetic; you see how long it took me to post that? Right after your cheak in I started writing.
Ohh ok so your gonna post now.
Good - didnt feel like waiting for your verse.
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Like I stated in bitch slapped; the time limit is 12 am; so if you dont have your verse in 20 minutes from now your DQ'd.
Nice flow dwag
l;iked it alot, just werk on ya punchlines and similes, use more aight this is text bro, nice vocab also, keep it up
Yo man while u waitin please his this up, thanks dawg
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=81929
FUK U
not cyrp but the kid thats battlyn me stfu bitch
im droppin keep ya panties in a bnuch
IN a sense" i think you should just throw in the towel, wouldn't get it right "vanna white" flipped you a "vowel"// shitty ass spits going down to the lower extreminies of the bowel, my flows comin deep like a root canal// you come weak, i seen more heat comin out an air conditoiner// you couldn't "drill" me if you was a dental practitioner, got you in "check" as if i was a bank commisioner// With 3 blunts cashed You Thought Enough Writs Could Suffice to Hurt-Me//
It's Unearthly, Believed if ya Wore Lakers 42...that You'd Actually be WORTHY//
This is a ferocious beating i'm provoking horror like ATROCIOUS//
you tryin to use big words well here, supercaliFrAGilisticexpialidotious//
You been whispering behind our back, its about time you talk//
Your another homicide of X, reason your out lined in chalk//
Alright; both verses up, let the voting begin.
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Damn Orbit Took This In All Aspects
No Comparrison, The Other Guy's
Structure Made It To Hard To Read His
Verse. . .
Vote - Orbit
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83 K.G.C.
Thank you; just for some reference to my verse, Un X Pected's name was in all black so you couldnt read it, thats where your 'name isnt legible' line comes in.
Uppin for some votes people.
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Vote=Un X Pected
Pucnhes: X
Metas/Similes: X
Flow: Orbit
Thats how i see it
Orbit ya only had flow dawg, Yo X Werk on ya punchlines dawg make them more complex, fix up ya flow and structure too, make it easier to read cuz it through me off, u win this jus cuz ya punchlines
Peace, Hit htis up please, and Ims till waitin on Zany if he wants u in his crew aight
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=81929
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