TheUnderRated vs. LilpimpD

[TheUnderRated]

10-12 lines
20 minutes
blindspit
no crew/hate/d/r
checkin and lets start keyin one...

[TheUnderRated]

you gon check in for this one kid?
go ahead all you do is say check and then i start keyng thats how it works....

[TheUnderRated]

ok well i'm gonna key it up then no biting if you don't blindspit..due within a couple of hours or i'll just say fuck it and close the link one..

[TheUnderRated]

Your only 15, welcome to the RB i'm here to greet ya....
To elevated vocabulary...confused? ask ya teacha..
Pimp from Ohio? yet gets cash.. works in fast food?...
maybe one day you can even try the register dude...
I thought only retards worked at Bk nowaday...
stay in school Kid and try to up your fuckin GPA..
Devoting the rest of this verse to skull fuckin PimpD..
tragically chose to battle me 4 years can't handle me..
1 L in my record cause my punches hypnotize em..
the best punchline you got...want me to supersize em?..
lowly yet you get high off my lines, stop sniffin it all up..
competitors open there eyes and find fights over and there fucked..

[TheUnderRated]

explo...he been rappin since 11 but he's only 15 ...4 years ain't enough..
he works in fast food...eheh take that out your bio jsut a suggestion..
this is his first battle as you can see....
vote when he drops his..

[lilpimpD]

You call yourself underrated/
More like overrated/
you need to get out of the rap game/
your rhymes so week nobody even knows ya name/
ill put you out of misery ill pull out my 45 and aim/
nobody will miss you cuz ya so damn lame/
dog you dont stand a chance againts me... this is my battle/
I spit the shit that makes ya fuckin brains rattle/
you should just give up now/
you wanted to battle me shit you dont no how/
hurry up somebody throw in the towel/

Im use to writing more than 10-12 lines but there ya go...

[TheUnderRated]

alright well we'll get votes now...you should go to the emergency center just so you can figure out what people on this site look for maybe...either way man not a bad first battle...you came alright lets get some votes...

[TheUnderRated]

uppin this one.. lets let the votes roll in so this kid can get to getting other battles c mon now..

[lilpimpD]

good battle bro, i think you took this one but lets check what the voters think. This was my diest battle im better when im Just writing for fun the writing against some one.

[TheUnderRated]

i understand thats kool i'm the same way and have a happy holiday 100 cahracters is gay la al al al de al al al

[TheUnderRated]

uppin this for some votes y'all this is this kids first battle let em know what you thought give him some feedback..

[TheUnderRated]

Yawn..we need some votes on this drop your link and i will poll on your shit if i think you won ....which is not always so vote muthafuckers vote!!!

[Silverwolf]

Every category: Underrated

not even funny how lopsided this was...keep elveating u guys

1 L in my record cause my punches hypnotize em..
the best punchline you got...want me to supersize em?..
^ 1 word ill

dog you dont stand a chance againts me... this is my battle/
I spit the shit that makes ya fuckin brains rattle/
^this was ur best bar...keep elvating

[#1_Stunner]

cyril common u have to take up my challenge
set up a battle for us two common--------------------------------------------------

[TheProphet777]

heres the breakdown......
complex:under
Flow:under
Structure:under
Personals:under
Punches:under
overall vote-under

Ok my vote is under....

up my battle under it being slept on!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=97328