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Thread: {Sizzle..Master Of Multis & Wordplay}

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    Newbie .::$izzle::.'s Avatar
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    {Sizzle..Master Of Multis & Wordplay}


    .......Replied To.......
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=100692
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...02#post1016202
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...07#post1016207

    ..My Words Are Hard Boned...They *Date Back Longer* Than Tha *Rosetta Stone*...Elevation Stays Grown Holmes....Cuz Im Known In All Homes...Now A Known *Telemarketer Of This Net Shit*..Kids Blame Me Fa *Harassin They Phones*!!!
    ..Im Prone..To Dislocate Bones....Ive Shown I'll Hold The Throne..Doubt Me?...They Alwayz Agree...Then *Step To Me* But *Fall Down* Like A *Broken Porch*...I Blaze And Scorch...Cuz I *Carry More Meaning In My Fire*...Than Tha *Olympic Torch*!!!
    ..I Date Back To Tha Anglo's And Saxon's...Barely Try But Yet Im Askin... How All You Herbs *Stick To Bitch Posts*..Like *Articles* In *Maxim*!!....Bitches Just Waxin...Then Its They Face Im Blastin...Why?..Ha..Cuz Sizzle Gets *Charged For Rapin Kids* In 'Music' More Than *Michael Jackson*!!!!
    ..Yet they Taskin To Get Ended Yo...Herbs *Skill Is Groin*..Why?..Cuz They *Start At My Penis*!!....Rhymes Perfect With Cleaness...Cuz Anybody Than Can Defeat-This..Comes With Dickriding Delete-Shit...Cuz All These Kids On My Ass....*Stay Around Rank Shit*...Like A Fuckin *Hygenist*!!!

    ...Testing Wordplay...Those That Doubt..Are Silenced.....


    ..Sizzle vents-all-hits with 'words' INN-A-SENSE...Kids accuse but i maintain INNOCENCE...quick to dent-any-bitch...tha 'aroma' of 'victory' left IN-A-SCENT..I END-A-SENSE of me ever being IN-TO-CENT..(50)..So IN-I-SENT my defendant...But 'cheap shots' left me 'empty pocketed'..i wasnt being let INTO-CENTS....(wordplay of the year)
    ..Im spent-with-hits..the best-burned..'Cremations' shot 'east'..but i make the 'WEST~URN'(earn) at whats turned.....the rest-learn not to test-turn's...Newbs invest-in-words...But i 'DISEASE like NAZI's' and 'wreck-like-GERMS'...
    ..The tech-is-yearned...im through-this-shit...'
    ..My crew-is-sick..killin fake-queer's mistakes-clear...i 'rattle' 'rebelling tribes' with 'literature'..Sizzle known to 'SHAKE-SPEARS'...when you awake-fear stakes-near....scrape-ears and rape-peers...my 'logarithms' 'stay so platformed' kids say 'NAY-PIER'...*
    ..I say day-to-years..but years-TO-DAY are quick-to-happen...passage's left strict-to-trackin...Stay 'collidin' 'connections' over 'aol' till my 'scripts-IM-pacting'...
    ..Kids-retractin to send-pro's to they ends-yo...I keep 'title battles' like 'dell comps'..cuz i 'WIN-DOWS'(those)...come get bent-hoe's...i got ten-toe's to step on sent-foe's...
    ..Let enemie's surrend-yo...Kids ask Sizzle to be a 'rhyme' 'EDITOR'...but i leave the 'EDIT-TORE' caused by being a constant 'PREDATOR'..they 'PRAYED-I-TORE' they raps with 'METAPHORS'...But i 'MET-A-FOUR' after 'three votes' from 'HATERS'..but i leave 'HATE-TORE'(s) that come to 'arguments' as 'novice'..while i leave a 'DEBATE-TORE'..(debator)
    ..Tha ultimate rhyme 'PROCESSOR'...its PROCESS~OR rhyme till PRO(s)~SEE~SORE...No tellin of lying...Ancient scriptures from AZTECS and MAYANS...so AS~TECHS cause MY~END i revolt defiant...
    ..I 'SCREW' 'THUNDEROUS RECIPIENTS'...and 'BOLT' tha 'CLIENTS'...Kids say drop ASAP while i say PAS-A quarter G....Killing spree's-regress....So at 'REQUEST' of 'battles'..enemie's 'RE-QUEST' to get 'saddled'...
    ..Never get rattled...Went to 'New York' and saw 'TWO-KNICKS' wearin "TUNICS' they bought fa 'TWO-NICKS'...Im not through-bitch...i was born into the new-as-sick...ya crew-gets-hit when i spew-my-spits...
    ..Im not 'few'-'with'-'clits'...Hop on my 'IMAC' cuz 'I-MACK' at precise 'FORMATIONS'...Drop 'compound' 'scientific' 'structures' that 'FORM-AT-IONS' and 'INFORMATIONS'...I 'INFORM-NATIONS' to be 'IN-FORMATION' when enemie's come 'IN-FOR-MATES-ON' parole and probations....
    ..Masterbation?...Not-right but its hot-right?..ha!...Kids 'want' 'in' my 'SPOTLIGHT'..but are like 'blinds'..cant 'SPOT~LIGHT'...They not-bright...so i stop-they-fight before i might drop-the-dikes....
    ..Cops-are-iight? Nah!...I blur-they-names like 'black' words' in 'black' 'frames'...They Say Isabell Was An Ill 'HURRICANE'...Sizzle left that 'bitch' on 'leg-braces' and threw 'HER-A-CANE' till she 'said-graces' of 'words-in-vane' blessed at 'dead-faces'' that burned-to-shame.....

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    get rid of all the " ' - ... ( ) " other wise not a bad verse pretty good but done give up keep at it dawg.

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    ohh sorry i give this a 7 out of 10

    Good Luck!!

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    Using the hiphopdialect.com style / blah - this was wack, the multis and wordplay were forced and the punchlines were stupid.

    No quotables .1/10

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    Just realized that all of this was bitten - was snooping around and found this:

    http://www.hiphopdialect.com/forum/s...threadid=13467

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    Well Whoever he bit this off deserves a critique




    flow = 6/10
    structure = 5/10
    punches = 5/10
    entertainment = 5/10

    overal 5/10

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    it was a forced piece of shit and bittin

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    yeah I think this was biten also ......definantly not this fuckers work and well it sucks so homie next time you gonna bit .........bit some rap that is at least ok................3/10

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    are u the guy on HHD smoking those skinny ass joints??
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    the size of totthpicks??
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    lmao
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    damn i take my vote back if that shit was bitting then screw it.. learn to rap son.. if your gonna bite from people why sign up for this site.. pretty pointless there ehh.

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    ohh and, good looking there Ackusation .. another biter cought

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    lol^^
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