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    Newbie BaG oF SkILLz's Avatar
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    Story for my Brother

    Replied: Asylum by Born To Kill
    Cover by Penskills
    Max Payne by Antonio Banderas


    At the scene of the murder the chalk etched his carcass/
    Why wasn't anyone here earlier to stop this??/
    was I thinking when I didnt say good bye/
    Now my brother's in his grave and all I see in my mind is his eyes/
    A single mistake and his lungs lost his breathe/
    The doctor came out of the E.R and informed us of his death/
    My mother ran to me and cried on my shoulder/
    She ran into the room touched Charlies body but it went from hot to colder/
    His lips turned blue he was non existent to this world/
    He left a son a daughter and a soon to be wife, his girl/
    She was estatic in pain ...when she saw fragments of his brain/
    Splattered on the table the doctors wasnt able to save him from this life, not a medicine of knife could bring back my brothers life/
    He was taken into surgery but with a lack of urgency/
    The doctors took too long, thats why I wrote this song/
    My brother was a man who didnt bother anyone/
    Now its too late he'll never see the sun/
    He'll never see his kids when they graduate/
    Instead he'll their guardian angel there to set them straight/
    Charlie the world lost you too damn fast/
    But I hope you know I love you and you wont be my past/
    I'll see you when those lights open up in the clouds/
    Remember when momma told us to turn the music down/
    And our bet about the girl we were supposed to hit/
    Man we did some messed up shit/
    But it was all fun and games and now I'm all alone/
    But I promise to take care of ya wife and kids and make sure they have a home/
    So Rest in Peace dear brother cause I know you got my back/
    Cause your love is like a drug, we're addicted to that/
    Take care brother I'll be seeing you in a few/
    Jus me and you the two brothers with God in heaven Just us Two/
    Last edited by BaG oF SkILLz; January 6th, 2004 at 12:04 PM
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    Bmack
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    uppin

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    some deep lyrics there...feeling it..other than that what can i say on such a subject...keep writin ya stuff...meaning is good...pZ
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    shit was deep
    boi I don't take dis rap shit serious but I won't resitate 2 stop ya mothafuckerz tat take it serious quick bitchhhhhhh

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    young mike
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    yo dawg that was deep as i feel 4 u that shit was hot though hit up hail mary an down 2 ride

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    Bmack
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    thanks for feeling this...it means alot to me...i put alot of heart into this...(im bag of skillz too)....I appreciate all the feedback

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