A Million Miles

[Jo-JO]

That was really good there was a couple of lines that I didn't think flow as well as I would have preffered but it had alot of heart. Can I ask you a personal question you said that the girl had one arm is that a metaphor or truth. any ways that was deep Good one can you check out my Forever My Homie

[rule]

yup thats for real man..she only got one half of her arm..and one full one...but she still a hotty..uppen this pz

[-uski-]

that was a Tight Piece.....i could feel ya in that.......u could of doen a lot betta Jokez LoL.......ill give ya 8/10

aiight Peace Out Kuz

[rule]

fuck you....that one arm thing wasnt a joke....pz

[f-gee]

pretty good kid
structure and flow was nice...liked thta
although some of the follow on internal rhymes seemed a bit forced at times and the word choice was a bit meh
however i liked the content was well written on the whole
some nice imagery
piece

[Endeva.]

i agree this was pretty tight, some nice vocab......good structure....nice rhyming......some did seem a little forced but on the whole i liked it....good drop.......Pz

[rule]

thanks fgee and devo thats apreciated