Woah, that reply sucked. = /
Anyone want to actually give me indepth feedback on this piece ?
Woah, that reply sucked. = /
Anyone want to actually give me indepth feedback on this piece ?
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Nice Spit Man ~
^ Take a look at my post before yours .. = /
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i gotta go with the ppl on this...you show'n some real tallent here.....very nice peice....aight....nuthin more to say really that aint already been said....lol...pZ
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thats was tight man good flow and wordplay.
I liked how it was written keep postin playa really enjoyed.
props
This didnt have wordplay in it, try actually reading it next time you reply ..
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Man, fuck this .. why do my threads always get the bullshit repliews by fucking morons who dont even bother to read the damn thing?
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Its different, and very descriptive... overall a decent rhyme
Ya imagery was spot on through out this you really painting the picture well, sorta felt super human.
Ya vocab was nice and for the most part this flowed well though somerhymes threw me off a bit.
Nice to read something original instead of the usual shite that gets posted on here.
Return the favour and check my soon to be posted "Drifter".
Ms Dynamite
The same gunmen that cry about surpression
Of the white man and his racist oppression
Go a church and give god his confession
Gun in his pocket and crack in his possesion
Guru:
Lemonade was a popular drink and it still is i get more props and stunts than Bruce Willis
Spearhead:
It seemed strange to me was it strange to you
Brothas on the street and everyone is scared of ya
So how can ten Africans Represent America (Dream Team)
Bullshit! it diddn't mean a thing
Cos in the same year we saw Rodney King
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