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Thread: The Best? Then Get away.

  1. December 7th, 2003, 01:05 AM #1
    Dios de Hip Hop
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    The Best? Then Get away.

    Its Open Trickery That Sparks No Questionings
    Seems To me With Gun Powder? No Label Openings
    Even though Im Using Pistol Perscision Its Tragic
    Life Rejects it Cuz He Usin a Gun On Automatic

    Take a glance at my life cuz ive Stared My eye Balls Off
    Its Amazin How Sight is Rejected If u dont Got it All
    Some Say That Im Another Daily Out Break
    But Daily Critics Say "Not a Rb Legend Okay?"
    Minus the Fuckin Pleasentrys the Truth
    If The evidence dont Fit u aint Got Proof
    A Constant Hate or Love in peoples Response
    Corespondonce In Open Mic Constont
    Almost To A point where Seein My name
    In this thread is played like me and the Rain
    Cuz Lately Thats my Only Treat As I Fetch My Mind
    Everyday Writeing but I Everyday I Get No Shine
    Just Tainted Lime Light reflectin off the "Signed"

    Its Open Trickery That Sparks No Questionings
    Seems To me With Gun Powder? No Label Openings
    Even though Im Using Pistol Perscision Its Tragic
    Life Rejects it Cuz He Usin a Gun On Automatic
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  2. December 7th, 2003, 01:12 AM #2
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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=96987
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=96720
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...820#post967820

    and the title of the thread is title of the peice.
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  3. December 7th, 2003, 03:50 PM #3
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    uppin..
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  4. December 7th, 2003, 03:54 PM #4
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    u came at this topic a lil differently

    its cool and as always good vocab

    i have seen a lot better from u but its not a battle

    keep it up man.

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  5. December 7th, 2003, 03:59 PM #5
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    Yea this first verse depending on the feedback
    i get mabey a second verse will come
    that aint such a half ass attetempt
    thanx for feedback.
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  6. December 7th, 2003, 04:28 PM #6
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    This was okay.. I didn't see nothing that stood out at me.. It had a repetitive flow.. Theres wasn't no multis Nor no inners.. So the flow was pretty useless.. No hate.. The meaning behind the concept was the main thing that kept this good.. I saw attempts at metapjors but they didn't get pulled of too well..

    In this thread is played like me and the Rain

    .. Stay Up.. Pz
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    And this faggot got Butterflies in his stomach the size of Mothra

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  7. December 7th, 2003, 04:37 PM #7
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    lol cool imma just have to spit something that isnt
    off the head
    :\ imma bust a 2nd verses for u guyz.
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  8. December 8th, 2003, 01:21 PM #8
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    its like you're making a poem
    not a rap
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  9. December 8th, 2003, 04:28 PM #9
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    yeah you went to indept in your mind and not enough offence attacking the listeener but this was far from wack just needs a lil re read and fixing
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
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