LLL SEASON 13
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LLL SEASON 13
Only check ins and verses are to be posted in your battle, do not post anything else.
verses due thursday 11:59 est
Regular Season - Semi Finals:
Minimum Lines = 10 Lines
Maximum Lines = 20 Lines
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boom
LOL
so you're Burden huh? lmao.
knockin off the rust. getting back in true form to crack noggins
it's a stretch for me. for you it's a pulled hamstring n' back problems
you're weak bitch. all that flippin n' bitin got you ducking mods
one punch'll have you power nappin so long you'll wake up as a fucking God
been buggin me all day. leave messages say you're gonna whore me
yeah your voicemail but that pussy between your legs tells another story
I'ma giant. big fists big knuckles watch you drop in a hard minute
bitch you've got such a tiny frame I couldn't put my avatar in it
fuckin fag. I'm comin with some fire you won't believe I'm on
you might leave your mark. but you'll end up getting back with steve or john
leave you on the lawn. speaking of which you need to trim it down
not sure if your mower maybe curly but you're the biggest stooge around
I'm winnin this comfortably. I told you not to fuck with me
kid your prime passed you by like you shoulda settled for bumblebee
you probably the type stuck to the TV all night fuckin up your eyes
forget big brother you better watch uncle $pit before I catch you by surprise
you gotta lot of growth to go through 'for you tighten those poor lyrics
n' I don't know what stage you're stuck on but I'd never perform near it
stab ya chest. when I'm finished you'll have to gasp for breath
with the all the crying you'll be doin seems like I loved the mag to death
good luck.
cute.
Look..
sigh. i cant stress it enuff that this dudes all lame.
opened for dj quick? yea, cuz u got 5 seconds tops before gettn bood off stage
u shuda dropd THAT wack shit vs a different writer.
dog. whose gonna quote any lines by a flipper/biter calling ME a flipper/biter
i WAS cutting gow some slack, im a clever guy but...
now i know Spits right. i peeped his verse like 'damn LLL needs better writers'
RB knows whats wrong with this lame surely?
Spitaculars the ONLY dude to get announced at shows as an up'n'comer.. aged 30
we battled before. i guess we been around together.
GOW said u aint what u used to be. i disagree, ur still as lame n played out as ever
know how i know only idiots think this heads tight?
hes the only guy in history to pay in to his own show to prove it to a website
actin like he made it really makes me wanna crack in ribs.
thought walls cudnt talk. then i seen allll the posts on his fb bout how wack he is
its a travesty if peeps vote for what that verse say dude.
yo i don't carrot was wack. <-- see faggot, i can drop terrible wordplays too
see da mag? the rate at which he bitches is hopeless too.
u Cry n u Cry n u Cry. dog, im waiting on Dagel to come in and vote for you
u live at home w. moms & good lord are ya fake man.
if she roll thru we'd see Spit clean the room quickr than Mike Jordan in Spacejam
BOOM
LOL
Its either a feeding penalty or let me drop a punch feeding off your verse. Decide.
knockin off the rust. getting back in true form to crack noggins
it's a stretch for me. for you it's a pulled hamstring n' back problems
pretty good
you're weak bitch. all that flippin n' bitin got you ducking mods
one punch'll have you power nappin so long you'll wake up as a fucking God
alright
been buggin me all day. leave messages say you're gonna whore me
yeah your voicemail but that pussy between your legs tells another story
nice
I'ma giant. big fists big knuckles watch you drop in a hard minute
bitch you've got such a tiny frame I couldn't put my avatar in it
nice..
fuckin fag. I'm comin with some fire you won't believe I'm on
you might leave your mark. but you'll end up getting back with steve or john
seen plenty of these lines but the wording was good
leave you on the lawn. speaking of which you need to trim it down
not sure if your mower maybe curly but you're the biggest stooge around
kind of a stretch to the get the word mower in..decent
I'm winnin this comfortably. I told you not to fuck with me
kid your prime passed you by like you shoulda settled for bumblebee
okay reference
you probably the type stuck to the TV all night fuckin up your eyes
forget big brother you better watch uncle $pit before I catch you by surprise
na
you gotta lot of growth to go through 'for you tighten those poor lyrics
n' I don't know what stage you're stuck on but I'd never perform near it
again..seen this type of line a lot..but wording made it hit
stab ya chest. when I'm finished you'll have to gasp for breath
with the all the crying you'll be doin seems like I loved the mag to death
eh..kind've dissed yourself along with it
vs
sigh. i cant stress it enuff that this dudes all lame.
opened for dj quick? yea, cuz u got 5 seconds tops before gettn bood off stage
nice
u shuda dropd THAT wack shit vs a different writer.
dog. whose gonna quote any lines by a flipper/biter calling ME a flipper/biter
feeding
i WAS cutting gow some slack, im a clever guy but...
now i know Spits right. i peeped his verse like 'damn LLL needs better writers'
na...plus it didn't rhyme
RB knows whats wrong with this lame surely?
Spitaculars the ONLY dude to get announced at shows as an up'n'comer.. aged 30
na
we battled before. i guess we been around together.
GOW said u aint what u used to be. i disagree, ur still as lame n played out as ever
worded and delivered better...but this type of concept is played
know how i know only idiots think this heads tight?
hes the only guy in history to pay in to his own show to prove it to a website
fake personal...not hard hitting
actin like he made it really makes me wanna crack in ribs.
thought walls cudnt talk. then i seen allll the posts on his fb bout how wack he is
ehh..if it was real it would've been alright..again more of a statement/fake personal
its a travesty if peeps vote for what that verse say dude.
yo i don't carrot was wack. <-- see faggot, i can drop terrible wordplays too
feeding a little bit i guess..but you're right..he does drop wordplay like that...just it's much better
see da mag? the rate at which he bitches is hopeless too.
u Cry n u Cry n u Cry. dog, im waiting on Dagel to come in and vote for you
na
u live at home w. moms & good lord are ya fake man.
if she roll thru we'd see Spit clean the room quickr than Mike Jordan in Spacejam
alright reference i guess
I hadn't seen spits first two battles this season..but this one definitely shows he's back to his 06-08 form..he came out with 5 dope punches in a row..and although the concepts fell off a little bit in the 2nd half of the verse..the wording was still sharp...orc came out with a dope line to start, and since I've never seen one of his verses before I was expecting dopeness throughout...however he quickly fell off..and also fed off spits verse a few times...
vote-spit
Scytsophrenia
I'ma giant. big fists big knuckles watch you drop in a hard minute
bitch you've got such a tiny frame I couldn't put my avatar in it
uckin fag. I'm comin with some fire you won't believe I'm on
you might leave your mark. but you'll end up getting back with steve or john
you probably the type stuck to the TV all night fuckin up your eyes
forget big brother you better watch uncle $pit before I catch you by surprise
vs
RB knows whats wrong with this lame surely?
Spitaculars the ONLY dude to get announced at shows as an up'n'comer.. aged 30
we battled before. i guess we been around together.
GOW said u aint what u used to be. i disagree, ur still as lame n played out as ever
know how i know only idiots think this heads tight?
hes the only guy in history to pay in to his own show to prove it to a website
nice play on his sig
its a travesty if peeps vote for what that verse say dude.
yo i don't carrot was wack. <-- see faggot, i can drop terrible wordplays too
cool lil battle.. spit came correct even his misses weren't bad.. Orc did kinda fed it seems but the rest of his verse was better, I got 3 quotes to 4. orc was more consistent imo.. so with that said
vote- orc
Orc merked this. Spit was pretty bland and used a ton of concepts I seen done before. alot.
The personal edge went to Orc easily IMO.
Orcs first 2 and the Ticket line won this
v/orc
lmaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaoooo
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knockin off the rust. getting back in true form to crack noggins
it's a stretch for me. for you it's a pulled hamstring n' back problems
Eh...aight opener...funny, but more like a punch for me!
you're weak bitch. all that flippin n' bitin got you ducking mods
one punch'll have you power nappin so long you'll wake up as a fucking God
Hilarious!
been buggin me all day. leave messages say you're gonna whore me
yeah your voicemail but that pussy between your legs tells another story
Cool...
I'ma giant. big fists big knuckles watch you drop in a hard minute
bitch you've got such a tiny frame I couldn't put my avatar in it
Hilarious again...
fuckin fag. I'm comin with some fire you won't believe I'm on
you might leave your mark. but you'll end up getting back with steve or john
Nice...
leave you on the lawn. speaking of which you need to trim it down
not sure if your mower maybe curly but you're the biggest stooge around
Very nice...sharp wit...
I'm winnin this comfortably. I told you not to fuck with me
kid your prime passed you by like you shoulda settled for bumblebee
Eh...kinda funny, but really just ok...
you probably the type stuck to the TV all night fuckin up your eyes
forget big brother you better watch uncle $pit before I catch you by surprise
Sounds like you're trying to rape him...
you gotta lot of growth to go through 'for you tighten those poor lyrics
n' I don't know what stage you're stuck on but I'd never perform near it
Eh...
stab ya chest. when I'm finished you'll have to gasp for breath
with the all the crying you'll be doin seems like I loved the mag to death
Ok closer...
vs
sigh. i cant stress it enuff that this dudes all lame.
opened for dj quick? yea, cuz u got 5 seconds tops before gettn bood off stage
Eh...aight-ish...
u shuda dropd THAT wack shit vs a different writer.
dog. whose gonna quote any lines by a flipper/biter calling ME a flipper/biter
Ok-ish again...
i WAS cutting gow some slack, im a clever guy but...
now i know Spits right. i peeped his verse like 'damn LLL needs better writers'
Doesn't make sense or rhyme...
RB knows whats wrong with this lame surely?
Spitaculars the ONLY dude to get announced at shows as an up'n'comer.. aged 30
Catching age jokes, Spit? How the worm turns!
we battled before. i guess we been around together.
GOW said u aint what u used to be. i disagree, ur still as lame n played out as ever
Ok, but not really accurate...
know how i know only idiots think this heads tight?
hes the only guy in history to pay in to his own show to prove it to a website
Eh, good personal...but eh...reaching too...
actin like he made it really makes me wanna crack in ribs.
thought walls cudnt talk. then i seen allll the posts on his fb bout how wack he is
Eh...coulda been better, but still ok...
its a travesty if peeps vote for what that verse say dude.
yo i don't carrot was wack. <-- see faggot, i can drop terrible wordplays too
Funny...best punch from you so far...
see da mag? the rate at which he bitches is hopeless too.
u Cry n u Cry n u Cry. dog, im waiting on Dagel to come in and vote for you
Again, funny...and clowning for Dagel...nice double shot...
u live at home w. moms & good lord are ya fake man.
if she roll thru we'd see Spit clean the room quickr than Mike Jordan in Spacejam
Uh...I don't remember that scene...
Well...really nice battle...I'll give it that...
And Orc put up a good fight...
Still lost, but put up a really tight verse...a couple of really hot lines brought.
But vote: Spit...he was pretty relentless, almost every punch landed. That stooges line was best of battle, I think...
Peace
knockin off the rust. getting back in true form to crack noggins
it's a stretch for me. for you it's a pulled hamstring n' back problems
you're weak bitch. all that flippin n' bitin got you ducking mods
one punch'll have you power nappin so long you'll wake up as a fucking God
been buggin me all day. leave messages say you're gonna whore me
yeah your voicemail but that pussy between your legs tells another story
fuckin fag. I'm comin with some fire you won't believe I'm on
you might leave your mark. but you'll end up getting back with steve or john
leave you on the lawn. speaking of which you need to trim it down
not sure if your mower maybe curly but you're the biggest stooge around
I'm winnin this comfortably. I told you not to fuck with me
kid your prime passed you by like you shoulda settled for bumblebee
you gotta lot of growth to go through 'for you tighten those poor lyrics
n' I don't know what stage you're stuck on but I'd never perform near it
vs
sigh. i cant stress it enuff that this dudes all lame.
opened for dj quick? yea, cuz u got 5 seconds tops before gettn bood off stage
RB knows whats wrong with this lame surely?
Spitaculars the ONLY dude to get announced at shows as an up'n'comer.. aged 30
we battled before. i guess we been around together.
GOW said u aint what u used to be. i disagree, ur still as lame n played out as ever
actin like he made it really makes me wanna crack in ribs.
thought walls cudnt talk. then i seen allll the posts on his fb bout how wack he is
its a travesty if peeps vote for what that verse say dude.
yo i don't carrot was wack. <-- see faggot, i can drop terrible wordplays too
see da mag? the rate at which he bitches is hopeless too.
u Cry n u Cry n u Cry. dog, im waiting on Dagel to come in and vote for you
this battle was epic. serious fire from both but i feel SPit slightly
edges it. Orc did borderline feed off that 'mag' punch but thats for the mods to figure out. very close battle tho. good shyt from both.
v. spit
Last edited by KnowP; August 18th, 2010 at 12:43 PM
knockin off the rust. getting back in true form to crack noggins
it's a stretch for me. for you it's a pulled hamstring n' back problems
meh
you're weak bitch. all that flippin n' bitin got you ducking mods
one punch'll have you power nappin so long you'll wake up as a fucking God
ok
been buggin me all day. leave messages say you're gonna whore me
yeah your voicemail but that pussy between your legs tells another story
nice
I'ma giant. big fists big knuckles watch you drop in a hard minute
bitch you've got such a tiny frame I couldn't put my avatar in it
oj
fuckin fag. I'm comin with some fire you won't believe I'm on
you might leave your mark. but you'll end up getting back with steve or john
lol
leave you on the lawn. speaking of which you need to trim it down
not sure if your mower maybe curly but you're the biggest stooge around
eh
I'm winnin this comfortably. I told you not to fuck with me
kid your prime passed you by like you shoulda settled for bumblebee
nah
you probably the type stuck to the TV all night fuckin up your eyes
forget big brother you better watch uncle $pit before I catch you by surprise
no punch here
you gotta lot of growth to go through 'for you tighten those poor lyrics
n' I don't know what stage you're stuck on but I'd never perform near it
nice
stab ya chest. when I'm finished you'll have to gasp for breath
with the all the crying you'll be doin seems like I loved the mag to death
ok
vs
sigh. i cant stress it enuff that this dudes all lame.
opened for dj quick? yea, cuz u got 5 seconds tops before gettn bood off stage
ok
u shuda dropd THAT wack shit vs a different writer.
dog. whose gonna quote any lines by a flipper/biter calling ME a flipper/biter
if hes a flipper/biter then this'll hit
i WAS cutting gow some slack, im a clever guy but...
now i know Spits right. i peeped his verse like 'damn LLL needs better writers'
wait what?
RB knows whats wrong with this lame surely?
Spitaculars the ONLY dude to get announced at shows as an up'n'comer.. aged 30
lol
we battled before. i guess we been around together.
GOW said u aint what u used to be. i disagree, ur still as lame n played out as ever
nice
know how i know only idiots think this heads tight?
hes the only guy in history to pay in to his own show to prove it to a website
LOL nice
actin like he made it really makes me wanna crack in ribs.
thought walls cudnt talk. then i seen allll the posts on his fb bout how wack he is
lol
its a travesty if peeps vote for what that verse say dude.
yo i don't carrot was wack. <-- see faggot, i can drop terrible wordplays too
lmao
see da mag? the rate at which he bitches is hopeless too.
u Cry n u Cry n u Cry. dog, im waiting on Dagel to come in and vote for you
meh
u live at home w. moms & good lord are ya fake man.
if she roll thru we'd see Spit clean the room quickr than Mike Jordan in Spacejam
ok
Spit you had some nice punches but you weren't as consistent as Orc. Orc you had one bar that was like wtf? but you were still consistent throughout the battle.
Vote Orc
Meta.Convicts
The Refugees.
I'ma giant. big fists big knuckles watch you drop in a hard minute
bitch you've got such a tiny frame I couldn't put my avatar in it
fuckin fag. I'm comin with some fire you won't believe I'm on
you might leave your mark. but you'll end up getting back with steve or john
vs
sigh. i cant stress it enuff that this dudes all lame.
opened for dj quick? yea, cuz u got 5 seconds tops before gettn bood off stage
RB knows whats wrong with this lame surely?
Spitaculars the ONLY dude to get announced at shows as an up'n'comer.. aged 30
know how i know only idiots think this heads tight?
hes the only guy in history to pay in to his own show to prove it to a website
its a travesty if peeps vote for what that verse say dude.
yo i don't carrot was wack. <-- see faggot, i can drop terrible wordplays too
u live at home w. moms & good lord are ya fake man.
if she roll thru we'd see Spit clean the room quickr than Mike Jordan in Spacejam
orc took this easy n no this is not a hate vote
spit had some horrible wordplays n orc called him on that so that line HIT hard for me
also there was some played shit too that made ya verse seem bland n old
also ya closer was too simple......orc had some funny shit.....opener was nice
overall orc had some cool personals n took this consistency
v/orc
knockin off the rust. getting back in true form to crack noggins
it's a stretch for me. for you it's a pulled hamstring n' back problems
Wasn't entirely keen on this as a concept. Decent attempt.
you're weak bitch. all that flippin n' bitin got you ducking mods
one punch'll have you power nappin so long you'll wake up as a fucking God
I really liked this as a concept, Maybe waking up as a god is a little too positive though.. not sure
been buggin me all day. leave messages say you're gonna whore me
yeah your voicemail but that pussy between your legs tells another story
Pretty cool. Simple, but i got a smile.
I'ma giant. big fists big knuckles watch you drop in a hard minute
bitch you've got such a tiny frame I couldn't put my avatar in it
Not bad
fuckin fag. I'm comin with some fire you won't believe I'm on
you might leave your mark. but you'll end up getting back with steve or john
Lots of these concepts are dropped day in day out but i've not seen this varient yet, so alright.
leave you on the lawn. speaking of which you need to trim it down
not sure if your mower maybe curly but you're the biggest stooge around
Aight. felt a little forcey to me
I'm winnin this comfortably. I told you not to fuck with me
kid your prime passed you by like you shoulda settled for bumblebee
Cool idea.
you probably the type stuck to the TV all night fuckin up your eyes
forget big brother you better watch uncle $pit before I catch you by surprise
I liked the idea but this came off quite corney to me
you gotta lot of growth to go through 'for you tighten those poor lyrics
n' I don't know what stage you're stuck on but I'd never perform near it
not bad
stab ya chest. when I'm finished you'll have to gasp for breath
with the all the crying you'll be doin seems like I loved the mag to death
didn't like this much.
Vs
sigh. i cant stress it enuff that this dudes all lame.
opened for dj quick? yea, cuz u got 5 seconds tops before gettn bood off stage
Aight, decent personal
u shuda dropd THAT wack shit vs a different writer.
dog. whose gonna quote any lines by a flipper/biter calling ME a flipper/biter
Didn't really feel this. Points for the personal though
i WAS cutting gow some slack, im a clever guy but...
now i know Spits right. i peeped his verse like 'damn LLL needs better writers'
Too simple imo
RB knows whats wrong with this lame surely?
Spitaculars the ONLY dude to get announced at shows as an up'n'comer.. aged 30
The rhyme was off bad.. but ok idea
we battled before. i guess we been around together.
GOW said u aint what u used to be. i disagree, ur still as lame n played out as ever
Again, simple. Fairly effective though
know how i know only idiots think this heads tight?
hes the only guy in history to pay in to his own show to prove it to a website
Meh
actin like he made it really makes me wanna crack in ribs.
thought walls cudnt talk. then i seen allll the posts on his fb bout how wack he is
Meh
its a travesty if peeps vote for what that verse say dude.
yo i don't carrot was wack. <-- see faggot, i can drop terrible wordplays too
lol
see da mag? the rate at which he bitches is hopeless too.
u Cry n u Cry n u Cry. dog, im waiting on Dagel to come in and vote for you
Your best bar so far
u live at home w. moms & good lord are ya fake man.
if she roll thru we'd see Spit clean the room quickr than Mike Jordan in Spacejam
Mehhish
Not a bad battle here. I guess i'm going against the grain but I think $pit took this. I don't know if I just dislike your style, Orc, but I didn't feel much here. Cant quite put my finger on it...
Anyway, Orc took this battle on personals but spits humor was more of a pull factor for me.
Vote - Spit
vote Spitacular even though it was close the feeding off spits verse really losts this for you orc in my books, Spit had some good humor punches, and orc was going for all the personals in the world to beat him... unfortunately even if ur setup bar is short if your 2nd line is stretched like most of yours were...to me it's like your whole bar is strtched and i've never been a fan of stretched bars