KRAKKA T VS dub 0 se7en

[menolin]

10 lines
i set up
you spit first
usual rules
no crew votes
no d/r
etc etc

[kaotic~theory]

hey yo mr double o seven/
u a weakling ill spit hard rimes
at ya like u being attacked by bullets from an ak 47/
ill smoke ur lines all day 24/7/
then id get the munchies and eat ya like a bag of doritos from 7/11/
and then trow extra spits at ya like id hit the reazon/
u look scared now why u sweatin/
u look like you feeal threatined/
so come on back with ya weapons//

[menolin]

i aint got time for this battlin herb shit, but it like my watch is slow,
so i 'prickle' these 'herbs', clear weeds, just before i start to gloat,
u left in such a state of paralysis, than even doctors cant diagnoze,
like cancer, you want no battle, should leave my expertise for pros,
this krakka aint ready for this form of hated lyrical warfare,
but i try, im cruel to be kind, so pain, hes gon get his own fair share,
he like the white version of mister T, buecause his name like that,
if that the case, i only need to beat him blue, i hurt this cat,
i invade your personal space, like micheal and kobe bryant,
leave your fucked, and seeing sars like the belt of orian*


*orian's belt, of MIB

[TalentOne]

this was so onesided an weak its unbeliveable!!

dubs verse was more structured, had flow, punches an the whole nine!!!

VOTE DubSeVeN <<<<

[menolin]

uppin 1st time.................................................. .................................................. ................

[Dan_Da_Man]

com on 7 ur a vet guy, yeah u did this guy pretty easy with some bull shit, but what happens when u face a newbie with the likes of one such as myself, som on act like a vet and go all out all the time, yeah u slid by in this one, but what about next time, come on, play like u wanna win.

vote-seven

[menolin]

yeh, on the real i aint a vet, i think i beat a few vets, an thats bout it, he accpeted my challenge, not me his, so you cant go sayin i go challenin newbs

[D.Silver]

KRAKKA
hey yo mr double o seven/
u a weakling ill spit hard rimes
at ya like u being attacked by bullets from an ak 47/
ill smoke ur lines all day 24/7/
naw kid thats wack...
then id get the munchies and eat ya like a bag of doritos from 7/11/
and then trow extra spits at ya like id hit the reazon/
naw kid...
u look scared now why u sweatin/
u look like you feeal threatined/
so come on back with ya weapons//
blah

Cant lie kid, that was pathetic... no punch, meta's were lame and no personals(And no just havin his name in ya verse aint a personal).Keep elevating though, try readin some vets verses and understand how they put a piece together.

James Bond
i aint got time for this battlin herb shit, but it like my watch is slow,
so i 'prickle' these 'herbs', clear weeds, just before i start to gloat,
blah uppin yaself
u left in such a state of paralysis, than even doctors cant diagnoze,
like cancer, you want no battle, should leave my expertise for pros,
wordings blah, ya shit dont flow either
this krakka aint ready for this form of hated lyrical warfare,
but i try, im cruel to be kind, so pain, hes gon get his own fair share,
nah
he like the white version of mister T, buecause his name like that,
if that the case, i only need to beat him blue, i hurt this cat,
booooo
i invade your personal space, like micheal and kobe bryant,
leave your fucked, and seeing sars like the belt of orian*
1st line was ok, 2nd wasnt

Ok Ok ya saw ya foes verse and knew ya gonna win, still don't mean ya drop garbage fo us to read

V - 007


Honest votes on these please

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...postid=1064515
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...postid=1060300

I'll poll my vote soon

PiZ

[menolin]

the last punch, is ill, even if im being big headed, it not great but it got wordplay.
it supposed to say


i invade your personal space, like micheal and kobe bryant,
leave your fucked, and seeing STARS like the belt of orion,

micheal an kobe, you should know about,
they is both stars,
the belt of orion, is a astromical belt, which consists of starts



uppin

[kaotic~theory]

YO I EXEPT THE DEFEAT
AND THANX FO THA ADVICE
AND DOUBLE O SEVEN THANX FOR THE BATTLE
IGHT ILL GET BETTA AND COME BACK
PEACE

[kaotic~theory]

YO I EXEPT THE DEFEAT
AND THANX FO THA ADVICE
AND DOUBLE O SEVEN THANX FOR THE BATTLE
IGHT ILL GET BETTA AND COME BACK
PEACE


OH YEAH ILL BE BACK SON

[...Àû†øpšÿ...]

This Wasa A 1sided Battle 007 Took This Easily With The Punches,Vocab,Multi Use,Wordplay,Flow Etc....


Vote=007

Can You Vote On This??..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=105778

[kaotic~theory]

COMEON SOMEONE VOTE FOR THIS I KNOW I LOST BUT JUST VOTE SO WE CAN END THIS SHIT DAMN ITS LIKE A DAY OLD
.......PLEASE.....................

[menolin]

upin....................................uppin..... ..........................upin.................... .................................................. .................................................

[nolonger]

yo ite easy merk for 007.good flow didnt cum rly hard but he didnt need to nice punches................k man u gota cum harder with structure and punches................007 plz return the favor with an honest vote on my battle in f/l...................with gazeebo cus newbs cnt vote...lol........thx........pz