Mr. W.Rite v. kurrupt

[Mr W.Rite]

10-12 lines
i called out he responded
explained votes only
u spit sometime today
i will drop shortly after
good luck


out..

[Mr W.Rite]

this is my check in
i am waitin on u
to check in....

out

[kurrupt]

holla,
lets do this, il spit mine now, then u av 30min max to spit urs.
aight?
no ridin on my verse either.

[kurrupt]

mr.w.rite, u only wana battle a newbie coz ur lyrics are shite//
u find it hard to hang wiv the heavy weights//
ur only on RB dick ridin coz u aint got no real mates//
CALL A DOCTOR!! mr.rites feelin sick//
its been more than 24hrs since he ate his last dick//
im sick of these fake rappers claimin their from the street//
u mite aswell give up here bitch, and just admit defeat//
take that shit back dawg, its just the same old crap//
stop writin for pop music bitch, coz this is rap//
i pay for everything i brake so how much does ur back cost//
il end this shit now, coz its obvious that you've lost.

[kurrupt]

rite uve got 30 min from now to cum up with ur shit.

[Mr W.Rite]

note=read his check in...


these fuckin newbs...not on my level.......so i'll take a new course..
why would i feed...when its obvious my verse is better than yours..
Don’t confuse me with your weak punchlines...flows and wack bars..
I’d say its back to the basics........but I don’t think he made it that far...
And I heard you pack a mean punch.. but I say he’s better and taken hits...
He refuses to toss your salad....without ranch dressing and bacon bits...
Your just a wanna be...swinging hard...but punches seem to miss me...
Heres a reality check ...since your welfare doesn’t post until the fifteenth...
Thats it...the fights over...grab the ice pack and start the healing man..
And the sky’s the limit....
When he finally gets passed those ceiling fans...



votes please...

[kurrupt]

damn, sum good lines there. best of luck to ya!!!!

[KiLlEr EmCeE]

omfg......nice battle....damm yoo....kurruptz last line waz a killerrrr....i seriously say it waz a tie tho......
i wuld vote 4 one but i really say itz a tie.....
damm
yo both of yall shuld try out 4
" voice of tha streetz"
....vote: tie

[Young Savage]

ok battle....

Kurrupt-You had a good structure for ya verse...some ok punches...really no good personals...the flow was good in some spots but not in others...to sum it up ya verse was pretty simple...it was ok

Mr W.Rite-You had a nice structure...better punches but they still weren't that amazing...no personals...a better flow....your verse was better because of the harder punches to me...i was feel ya shit better i feel you put more into it....

vote-Mr W.Rite

please return the favor and vote on this

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109012

[Morbid Manner]

kurrupt kilt it his metas and personals were much beter
dis is some funny shit "ur only on RB dick ridin coz u aint got no real mates//
CALL A DOCTOR!! mr.rites feelin sick//
its been more than 24hrs since he ate his last dick"

rites verse wasnt good at all hus meta were rubbish and so was his flow but he did have one good line "I’d say its back to the basics........but I don’t think he made it that far..."
vote-kurrupt

vs dizzy hommel
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108195

vs d.liver.e
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109371

[Morbid Manner]

i voted for rite by accident instead of kurrupt could a mod chane it please.

[Razer]

mr.w got it i reckon. Good flows from both of you though

PE@CE

[Mr W.Rite]

dam i really hate frontlines..
first up i guess...

[Kaos Theory]

Pretty straight forward battle..
Punches Write dominated(bacon bits)
... Flow goes to him too.. I liked it
Kurrupt didn't have that much to offer..
You need to work on ya punches and make them effective

so

V/ Write

hit this up please... Its being slept on.. thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=109303&page=2

[Mr W.Rite]

come on guys lets try to get this shit over wit
2nd up i guess