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Guess Whos Back
aight i'm back here i go
I'm cold hearted assasin with these lyrics i'm blastin
You tryin to rap battle but nigga in this thang you ain't lastin
Call you self drinx but you a phony like kool-lite to kool-aid
tha only thang you drink is nut when dicks in you mouth start to spray
but aint' gotta say you gay for you to no you stands no chance against me
I looked in ya profile in ya own hood nigga you has no history
Niggas say you be spittin but that just be but the nut you throw up
I might battle you again but like in ten years when you growup
You never stood a chance like kids thats to young to walk
Yo heard tha name corleone nigga now you outlined by chalk
Murda
come on its been like 20 minutes. i know i spit venom. but damn snap out of it. there will be other battles
sry didnt see it ill drop now
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Bastard guess what, ur my Target, my array of raps will literally take out ur garbage
im shitting on so many kids my verses come with their own rolls of charmin
my style is vicious while ya rhymes layin in the dumps, i got no flaw
u a pussy cause when it come to kombat ma words throw bullets like terry bradshaw
my punches keep landing..until u bruised n have the worst face
u'll always place 2nd..cuz u got no flow n cant rap in the first place
Fuck ya Roots, even ifu got help from biggie ull never have this vet shook
and as for this bitch,he aint eva gettin signed like stevie wonders check book
ur catchn the end of my rath, u must feel crummy...pretty damn bad
left this pussy bloody..hand him a tampon..cause he aint worthy of a PAD
Guess Whos Back
vote up people...................
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damn rock the vote
yo people.......start voten...u kno u want people to vote on your battles so start voten on mines...this is a nice battle to cmon people......
Guess Whos Back
this is ridiculous....
vote up people...................
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Ok both verses were gud
flow:Michael
punchlinesrinx
But in the end I must vote 4 Michael cuz he was a little bit better
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Guess Whos Back
This is just my opinion .....since I can't make it "official" vote
Mike's verse 's good points:
multis, good structure, flow decent voab:
Negative points: (work on these) just a suggestion
(punchlines , multis, wordplay, vocab, ) tune it up
Ironic your's is almost the opposite:
good points:
(flow, multis, decent meta, )
Iliked this line :
"Fuck ya Roots, even ifu got help from biggie ull never have this vet shook
and as for this bitch,he aint eva gettin signed like stevie wonders check book"
Tho the one before was kinda basic....
Negative points:
(structure, vocab, punchlines) tune em up
I see POTENTIAL in BOTH keep rapping , writing , freestyilng
I can't vote ......
(But if I could I'd have to say Drinx)
Mike should dealt a harder blow being he has more experience that's the final reason why in my mind after reading both and compare all above^^^
But AGAIN I CAN'T VOTE so
just looking out
JamesJr.
To basic..MichaelCorleone
I'm cold hearted assasin with these lyrics i'm blastin
You tryin to rap battle but nigga in this thang you ain't lastin
Call you self drinx but you a phony like kool-lite to kool-aid
tha only thang you drink is nut when dicks in you mouth start to spray
but aint' gotta say you gay for you to no you stands no chance against me
I looked in ya profile in ya own hood nigga you has no history
Niggas say you be spittin but that just be but the nut you throw up
I might battle you again but like in ten years when you growup
You never stood a chance like kids thats to young to walk
Yo heard tha name corleone nigga now you outlined by chalk
The outlined by chalk shit is so old
Everyone has used that ... its wack
Flow was decent, vocab was weak
Structure was good..Punches were soft
Personals were lacked.... overall....10/20
Drinx
Bastard guess what, ur my Target, my array of raps will literally take out ur garbage
im shitting on so many kids my verses come with their own rolls of charmin
my style is vicious while ya rhymes layin in the dumps, i got no flaw
u a pussy cause when it come to kombat ma words throw bullets like terry bradshaw
my punches keep landing..until u bruised n have the worst face
u'll always place 2nd..cuz u got no flow n cant rap in the first place
Fuck ya Roots, even ifu got help from biggie ull never have this vet shook
and as for this bitch,he aint eva gettin signed like stevie wonders check book
ur catchn the end of my rath, u must feel crummy...pretty damn bad
left this pussy bloody..hand him a tampon..cause he aint worthy of a PAD
Structure needs help
Flow was good.. punches hit decently hard
Vocab could use work, wordplay was good
Personals were decent, could use work..
Somewhat creative... didnt use weak concepts
Overall.. decent verse.... 14/20
V/DrinX
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