I called out for 10 - 12...
He answered.
Due in about an hour...
Good luck.
Bio*Chemist
Born To Kill
I called out for 10 - 12...
He answered.
Due in about an hour...
Good luck.
It's funny how u always let people know at the beginning of a thread that they requested this.. makes me laugh anyway.. lol.
<table style=filter:GLOW(color=black)>IJL & DWI</table>
God speed born...This is my check ************************************************** *********************
Him...
Birthday: June 26, 1978
Age: 25
Crew: -IJL-
Biography: Professional Drawing Artist
Location: -In My Lab-
Interests: My Pencil
Occupation: Accountant, Drawing Artist
Show Battle Records: No
An accountant and an artist, neither one makes any cents...
Cuz Bio can't draw on intellect and is doomed ta lose his balance.
Sayin he loves his instrument, and he loves it so much it's sick...
Cuz when he says his interest is his pencil, he means his pencil dick.
Bio a sane scientist? That thought alone is a crazy notion...
Cuz if this kid was really in a lab, he'd just invent a better hand lotion.
And despite that, his feminine side overpowers, he's a pussy up front...
Cuz when I spun him round and kicked that ass, I lost my foot in cunt.
Then he went and wished me Godspeed, but it's Bio that died today...
But even the Creator hates ya rhymes, so you'll be going the other way.
*coughs*
Mr. Born is Hideous Come on he didn't Show a Facial Pic
When He came from his Moms Womb her last dieing wrds
were "damn u were" -Born To Kill- a b*tch...
Decision to battle me..Puts U and Ur record in Double Jeapordy
Because I kill with Warfare By-Ologicaly..Ur avatar shows Ur skull
openings for messing with My Chemistry...
U beating me?? please...Lock Ur Fingers In chains and even if U
Manage to break loose U still couldn't text Frees...I punish with
Ease, when U hit The X on I.M ciphers is.....
The only time you Aim To please..U spec of a Vet, Just another Herb
From Houston Claiming He can -Tex-..Even if U did typing while nuttin
on ur words U still wouldn't be a -Textceeds-
uppin..******************************************* **************
No sleeping ....get some quick honest votes
good battle Born
umm...this was a good battle in a way
B2k had nice and original punches not to
mention nice personals(tha balance was tight)
had a good flow..and nice quality wordplay
Bio..came aight..i've heard most tha stuff he spit though
he a couple stretched bars too..which threw off ya flow
so
v/ B2k
hit this up with honest vote please...it needs it...thanks
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yea.. nice attempt by bio, heres the breakdown:
punches - btk: came harder than bio, nice job by both tho..
flow - btk: like wise said, bios line were stretched and threw him off of his flow, btk was very very nice..
multis - bio: btk didnt have any..
personals - btk: very nice, won with ease, but i liked bio's '-tex-' line..
structure - btk: easier to read, period..
opener / closer - eh.. btk: liked his closer, better than his opener and bio's opener and closer..
nice battle, bio came ok but btk came a lil harder..
vote - born to kill
return da favor:
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^being mad slept on and we both upp'd 5 times
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yo Bio - you're opener killed him.. and you would have took it IF you didn't have one of the worst structures ever... a difficult read is not an enjoyable read. The verse was good but not good enough
B2K- consistant with personals as always - and I am big on personals, so for me, that made all the difference. What's a punch without a customized sting? Personals are what makes a battle.
vote = B2K
Bio - your opening was nice..but it was stretched as fuck. your structure was shit... it was impossible to tel where each line ended and started... i saw some ok and decent punches...but not enough to take this battle...ya personals werent good, they would have had to been witty to hit em, cuz ya btk personals are all old..and the new ones werent good. So overall..ya verse was just an ok verse..nothin special
BTK - ya verse was good like always..you kept a constent flow and never fell off...ya punches were there and hitting through out the whole enire verse...especially since they were jam packed wit personals..that really killed him....
V/ BTK...he came harder with punches and personals and he had an overall better verse
An accountant and an artist, neither one makes any cents...
Cuz Bio can't draw on intellect and is doomed ta lose his balance.
Sayin he loves his instrument, and he loves it so much it's sick...
Cuz when he says his interest is his pencil, he means his pencil dick.
Bio a sane scientist? That thought alone is a crazy notion...
Cuz if this kid was really in a lab, he'd just invent a better hand lotion.
And despite that, his feminine side overpowers, he's a pussy up front...
Cuz when I spun him round and kicked that ass, I lost my foot in cunt.
Then he went and wished me Godspeed, but it's Bio that died today...
But even the Creator hates ya rhymes, so you'll be going the other way.
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aihgt this was coll,had good creativity,and personals were inflicted much more appropriete and such,nice flow and werdplay was good and well overall good battle verse i`d say 9/10 so yea nice job yo keep that shit up and yea merk fools and shit
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Mr. Born is Hideous Come on he didn't Show a Facial Pic
When He came from his Moms Womb her last dieing wrds
were "damn u were" -Born To Kill- a b*tch...
Decision to battle me..Puts U and Ur record in Double Jeapordy
Because I kill with Warfare By-Ologicaly..Ur avatar shows Ur skull
openings for messing with My Chemistry...
U beating me?? please...Lock Ur Fingers In chains and even if U
Manage to break loose U still couldn't text Frees...I punish with
Ease, when U hit The X on I.M ciphers is.....
The only time you Aim To please..U spec of a Vet, Just another Herb
From Houston Claiming He can -Tex-..Even if U did typing while nuttin
on ur words U still wouldn't be a -Textceeds-
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aight well i felt that ya struc was off messed up ya flow a bit
but overall i would say that the verse was prety good and ya shit was straight
although ya personals was kinda misdirected in a sense and ya punches was ok
but i would say you did ok but you lacked some wittyness i beleive but 7/10
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yo born2kill hit up one of my battles in my siggy ok man,peace out everyone
vote/born2kill
yEAH i NEED HELP ON MY STRUCTURE MAD HEADS KEEP TELLING ME THIS....bUT UHH YEAH WHAT CAN i SAY .....
uPPIN...Excuse the caps my pc sucks...
Someone didn't do their job with the voting...
So, drop the last one, will ya...
Someone...
Anyone?
But of corse...Originally Posted by Born To Kill
An accountant and an artist, neither one makes any cents...
Cuz Bio can't draw on intellect and is doomed ta lose his balance.
lol, nice personal(s)
Sayin he loves his instrument, and he loves it so much it's sick...
Cuz when he says his interest is his pencil, he means his pencil dick.
the set up had me waiting for a bomb, but it didn't come...this line was ok, i guess
Bio a sane scientist? That thought alone is a crazy notion...
Cuz if this kid was really in a lab, he'd just invent a better hand lotion.
eeeh, kind of weak
And despite that, his feminine side overpowers, he's a pussy up front...
Cuz when I spun him round and kicked that ass, I lost my foot in cunt.
blah@this
Then he went and wished me Godspeed, but it's Bio that died today...
But even the Creator hates ya rhymes, so you'll be going the other way.
ok
I've seen you come a whole lot iller than this. Punches weren't as hard as normal. It just wasnt up to your usual standards.
Mr. Born is Hideous Come on he didn't Show a Facial Pic
When He came from his Moms Womb her last dieing wrds
were "damn u were" -Born To Kill- a b*tch...
eeh, ok
Decision to battle me..Puts U and Ur record in Double Jeapordy
Because I kill with Warfare By-Ologicaly..Ur avatar shows Ur skull
openings for messing with My Chemistry...
nope
U beating me?? please...Lock Ur Fingers In chains and even if U
Manage to break loose U still couldn't text Frees...I punish with
Ease, when U hit The X on I.M ciphers is.....
didn't catch a rhyme...wierd lines
The only time you Aim To please..U spec of a Vet, Just another Herb
From Houston Claiming He can -Tex-..Even if U did typing while nuttin
on ur words U still wouldn't be a -Textceeds-
nope'
structure threw off some rhymes and this lacked strong punches. Not a very injoyable read. Work on that structure f'real
Overalll B2k got this because of the opener, personals and stronger bunches...This was pretty much a blowout.
Vote: B2K
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