ok here the rules
10 bars max ( 2 lines = 1 bar
first to 5 votes wins hoever a 3-0 its a tko
No dikriding, hate, crew, or unexplained votes
Verses due tonight by 11pm et
Ok good luck
ok here the rules
10 bars max ( 2 lines = 1 bar
first to 5 votes wins hoever a 3-0 its a tko
No dikriding, hate, crew, or unexplained votes
Verses due tonight by 11pm et
Ok good luck
checkin in. im ok wit da rulz. u spit first............................
ok lets go chekin in'
I'll spit later on.........
soz man, but i cant reply till 2moz. ill reply though.......
lol already with excuses man, come on now
Wateva i'ma spit right now and ima give you tomorrow at 4pm as the deadline.
aiight. i might be able to spit earlier. i dunno..
Master Diminish Ripping, Crying your life when you Wept-Debt,
After I Finished Flipping, Cheq-Neq Has to Get Ya Neq-Cheq'd//
Like Im Meths-Wrecked, He couldn't show off if he Was-Nude,
What he Suggest-Inept,Just Like Where Wolly you Lost-Dude//
What I Concoct-Feuds, I got more chance Living for Eternity,
Than you Not To-Lose, After OnePunch Im Giving Emergency//
He got Reality Twisted, Cheq'Neq Is Screwing The Win,
Is this kid Tight Fisted? Nah this dumbfucks Imbuing Nothing//
Master Diminish Ripping, Crying your life when you Wept-Debt,
After I Finished Flipping, Cheq-Neq Has to Get Ya Neq-Cheq'd//
Like Im Meths-Wrecked, He couldn't show off if he Was-Nude,
What he Suggest-Inept,Just Like Where Wolly you Lost-Dude//
What I Concoct-Feuds, I got more chance Living for Eternity,
Than you Not To-Lose, After OnePunch Im Giving Emergency//
He got Reality Twisted, B'cos Cheq'Neq Is Screwing The Win,
Is this kid Tight Fisted? Nah this dumbfucks Imbuing Nothing//
soz missed out a word. Ma bad
Chek'Neq walks into the ring reads the verse, looks straight into his face............LMFAO!!!LMFAO!!!! he rolls on the floor laughing!!
Let one of the best show you how its done.
..This Dude 'Speaks Through His Feet' Similar to 'Soccer Debatin'!!
Ya 'Life'? the 'Doctors Beratin'! cuz chek made yuh 'Embrace yo Stomach' like 'Boxers Recuperatin!!'//1
...Ya 'Blessed by a Blown Gage'!..when the 'Clips Change ya Views of God' like a 'Jehova Witness's Home Page'!//2
..Recieve Tips on Ways to get Rob!.. when I 'Seperate ya Pulse' and leave yah 'Body to Part with the Throbs'!!....'Survival'?..Vis'll Stomp *Lottery Tickets in ya Chest*!..make ya *Heart Quit its Day Job*!!..//3
..Ya Lost 'Money from a Thin Salary'!..when I Pushed yu 'Over Hells Budget' like 'Costly Sin Rallies'!..I'll End your Dreams! so *Theo Ain't Seen Next Season* like a *Cosby Finale*!!//4
..Knives Inserted in ya Spine! leave Marks 'Stiched on the Inside' like 'Fake Shirt Designs'!..Beat 'Work into ya Mind'!--now *Theory Dead on Campus* like *Albert Einstein*!!
..Obtain Brutal Beatins from the Bars! when it Knocks ya Teeth in Hard!..//5
lets finish this dam sucka up
...Flames! make ya Feel the Heatin Scars!..till ya *Heart Jumps Out the Back* like *Sealed Greetin Cards*!!//6
CROWD SCREAMS KO, KO, KO,KO.
ok lets get this votes people,
make sure yall explain'em!
come on ppl. vote vote vote................................
Master Diminish Ripping, Crying your life when you Wept-Debt,
After I Finished Flipping, Cheq-Neq Has to Get Ya Neq-Cheq'd//
^^nice complexity to it and decent personal for the opener,
Like Im Meths-Wrecked, He couldn't show off if he Was-Nude,
What he Suggest-Inept,Just Like Where Wolly you Lost-Dude//
^^consistant, but the punch came a bit weak.. average
What I Concoct-Feuds, I got more chance Living for Eternity,
Than you Not To-Lose, After OnePunch Im Giving Emergency//
^^liked this punch, but the first half of the first line.. didnt like
He got Reality Twisted, B'cos Cheq'Neq Is Screwing The Win,
Is this kid Tight Fisted? Nah this dumbfucks Imbuing Nothing//
^^decent closer....
..This Dude 'Speaks Through His Feet' Similar to 'Soccer Debatin'!!
Ya 'Life'? the 'Doctors Beratin'! cuz chek made yuh 'Embrace yo Stomach' like 'Boxers Recuperatin!!'//1
^^stretched... n quite weak, tryna puttoo much in it
...Ya 'Blessed by a Blown Gage'!..when the 'Clips Change ya Views of God' like a 'Jehova Witness's Home Page'!//2
^^average... bad structure tho
..Recieve Tips on Ways to get Rob!.. when I 'Seperate ya Pulse' and leave yah 'Body to Part with the Throbs'!!....'Survival'?..Vis'll Stomp *Lottery Tickets in ya Chest*!..make ya *Heart Quit its Day Job*!!..//3
^^again way stretched,,, too complex, with a weak punch
..Ya Lost 'Money from a Thin Salary'!..when I Pushed yu 'Over Hells Budget' like 'Costly Sin Rallies'!..I'll End your Dreams! so *Theo Ain't Seen Next Season* like a *Cosby Finale*!!//4
^^average, ok wordplay
..Knives Inserted in ya Spine! leave Marks 'Stiched on the Inside' like 'Fake Shirt Designs'!..Beat 'Work into ya Mind'!--now *Theory Dead on Campus* like *Albert Einstein*!!
..Obtain Brutal Beatins from the Bars! when it Knocks ya Teeth in Hard!..//5
^^ok, but dont very direct
...Flames! make ya Feel the Heatin Scars!..till ya *Heart Jumps Out the Back* like *Sealed Greetin Cards*!!//6
^^not bad wordplay, but weak punch to finish up...
Master, your verse was short, but it was easy to follow and with some decent punches, quite consistant'ish. check, your verse could l;ooked pre-written.. it had good complexity, but lacked direction.. and punches.... going on the punching.... vote=master..........both could use work on punches
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lol i cant believe this, oh my god.. lol anyways uppin man... uppin. lol
uppin yall come on, don't sleep on this one here....
here it is
rappin yuor verse was ok, i thad sum good wrdplay but the punches were pretty weak. didn't do much at all. check u had a meta4 and simile galore verse, with allot of references not havin nuthin to do with the battle, it was ok, also looked prewritten and i don't kno who vis'll is? but overall with u;r structure and and disses, were more advanced and hit harder then rappin's...even though it sucked..lol you get my vote-check
look at my battle with snap..and vote!!
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