CarsonJet -v- Strait Ace

[CarsonJetX2]

10 lines
10 minutes
normal rules

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[Provoke]

Howdy Buckaroo
..............................................In.

[CarsonJetX2]

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[CarsonJetX2]

Strait ace....

Ace? Who? I aint even spell this herbs name right..
Why? to make an example...that summin's missin from tight
Check his AIM, "jet..drop wack..I wanna win" shits a sinch
fuk talent...he's more worried bout digits than Meryl Linch
Shit makes me cringe, Ace your even part of a Voting ring?
Yeh, Check the sig...Your part of a dislexic Edicuis Inc.
Askin for 10 minutes, shit it's obviouse u got pre-writtin's
Get ir right, girly...get outta here and in my kitchen...
It's only fittin...Your gettin your's due, Yes I mean clowned
The eye's in you avatar aint the only thing rolling around...

[Provoke]

Settle this case..& ill make it known son ur stupidddddddd..
8 d's why..?
Because i wanna make You last......as long as u did..
Nothin....guess what? a synonym for you is just that..
& nothin is what i expect..
But u'll beat the odds &..... wont live up to that..
So ha ha ha..at ur ass, see how simple text can be?
& yes u are..Far more simple then that...
But showin off is nothin to be proud of see..
Been waitin' Excuses & shit to stall..got to eat? get lost..
C://Windows/...
.........I'll do Rb a favor & leave ur Cookies tossed..
Avy pranks, real stunnin' there Kid..i mean yeah ur shit..
Just got in Elite..

By:Chrit
I say just add him
Kids been around forever.
If he comes weak boot him[/B]

So prepare to get kicked out of it!

[Jacent.]

I know this don't count...but...Carson dropped...well..not very good in my eyes....all he had going for him was good structure...Ace came good....opener was iight....cookies line was dope....thats all i can say...he basically took this

[The Beat Mod]

Truthfully...this was one close ass battle. Really good one...espically for 10 minutes to key this up.
v/ - CarsonJetX2

Why? Creativity in punchlines won him this battle. Straight Ace's were really good...espically the cookie line, but they can't compare to Carson constantly delivery of creative punchlines. For example...

"Shit makes me cringe, Ace your even part of a Voting ring?
Yeh, Check the sig...Your part of a dislexic Edicuis Inc."

Lmao. Is it me or is Edicuis backwards...spell Suicide! hehe, and dislexic...I know u guys know what that is.

"Check his AIM, "jet..drop wack..I wanna win" shits a sinch
fuk talent...he's more worried bout digits than Meryl Linch"

^Another creative one that hit hard and was good.


Very good battle but im going with Carson here for reasons explained above.

Return the favour and drop honest votes on my battles please.

^That was also another good one. Even tho I think you spelled Merryl Lynch wrong lol.

[Daz]

Im gonna side with jacent on this....and vote anyway to make up for the one jacent couldnt give..

Ace? Who? I aint even spell this herbs name right..
Why? to make an example...that summin's missin from tight
Ok...?
Check his AIM, "jet..drop wack..I wanna win" shits a sinch
fuk talent...he's more worried bout digits than Meryl Linch
nice
Shit makes me cringe, Ace your even part of a Voting ring?
Yeh, Check the sig...Your part of a dislexic Edicuis Inc.
nice but im sick of suicide inc flips..stop with the gay shit
Askin for 10 minutes, shit it's obviouse u got pre-writtin's
Get ir right, girly...get outta here and in my kitchen...
who gives a damn about your kitchen..dont u go to Mcdonalds? no
It's only fittin...Your gettin your's due, Yes I mean clowned
The eye's in you avatar aint the only thing rolling around.
ok...

Carson: you had the best and the worse in your verse...that opener was just gay..then u had some nice shit and converted back to gayness..

Settle this case..& ill make it known son ur stupidddddddd..
8 d's why..?
Because i wanna make You last......as long as u did..
Nice
Nothin....guess what? a synonym for you is just that..
& nothin is what i expect..
But u'll beat the odds &..... wont live up to that..
Nice
So ha ha ha..at ur ass, see how simple text can be?
& yes u are..Far more simple then that...
But showin off is nothin to be proud of see..
ok
Been waitin' Excuses & shit to stall..got to eat? get lost..
C://Windows/...
.........I'll do Rb a favor & leave ur Cookies tossed..
nice
Avy pranks, real stunnin' there Kid..i mean yeah ur shit..
Just got in Elite..
Quote:
By:Chrit
I say just add him
Kids been around forever.
If he comes weak boot him[/B]

So prepare to get kicked out of it!
Nope and never ever quote in your verse..ts gays and screws format

Pretty nice battle....however.....im gonna have to go with Ace for consistency on this one...Propz to both

[kaotic~theory]

yo yo yo
carson
punches:7/10
flow:8/10
structure:7.5
personals:7.5
not bad carson had a nice verse he had good flow and did pretty good in all categories
good battle...total score:30/40

ace
punches:7/10
flow:6.5/10
structure:5/10
personels:6/10
ace did ight but carson came better all around....ace's total score:24.5/40
good battle yo but ace u need to clean ya structure up a lil i coudn't really understand ya shit
but you did coo....good battle yo
vote:carson
since i took the time to vote on yall shit can yall vote on this thanx

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112614

Explain your votes better. Vote gone. -Token

[Provoke]

Shut up..
One ur a Dynasty Soldier..
Two thats not enough feedback
Three u dont get it, ur dumb.

[Cels]

Carsom

Ace? Who? I aint even spell this herbs name right..
Why? to make an example...that summin's missin from tight
Not a bad opening.. the personal wasnt that great cuz u planned it but it was creative
Check his AIM, "jet..drop wack..I wanna win" shits a sinch
fuk talent...he's more worried bout digits than Meryl Linch
[b]this was a good punch.. the aim convo thing was tight and the 2nd line wasnt bad either..[b]
Shit makes me cringe, Ace your even part of a Voting ring?
Yeh, Check the sig...Your part of a dislexic Edicuis Inc.
[b]an ok punch.. decent not bad[b]
Askin for 10 minutes, shit it's obviouse u got pre-writtin's
Get ir right, girly...get outta here and in my kitchen...
just ok.. i talk to ace all the time and remember having a convo were he said he only takes 10 mins to write verses.. 2nd line was good if what u told me he actually said
It's only fittin...Your gettin your's due, Yes I mean clowned
The eye's in you avatar aint the only thing rolling around...
lmao.. dope punch to finish this verse off..i liked it alot



Straight Ace

Settle this case..& ill make it known son ur stupidddddddd..
8 d's why..?
Because i wanna make You last......as long as u did..
lol.. nice opening.. i liked it alot, very creative
Nothin....guess what? a synonym for you is just that..
& nothin is what i expect..
But u'll beat the odds &..... wont live up to that..
lol.. another nice punch.. i was feelin this again, but ya rhyme wasnt that good
So ha ha ha..at ur ass, see how simple text can be?
& yes u are..Far more simple then that...
But showin off is nothin to be proud of see..
just an ok bar
Been waitin' Excuses & shit to stall..got to eat? get lost..
C://Windows/...
.........I'll do Rb a favor & leave ur Cookies tossed..
lol...creative punch.. really liked this
Avy pranks, real stunnin' there Kid..i mean yeah ur shit..
Just got in Elite..


By:Chrit
I say just add him
Kids been around forever.
If he comes weak boot him

So prepare to get kicked out of it!
dope... nice closer wit a great personal


overall - shit..this was the closest battle i have ever voted on in my life.. both verses were great and had some dope ass punches... i even went back and read this shit again twice... but overall ima have to go wit Ace.. you each had good verses but aces punches were all dope except for one... same with carson but he had 2 bars that were just ok... so overall ... this was close as hell but ace had 1 less none dope bar so he gets it.. i think u guys should have a rematch after this...that would be dope

[ILLunatic]

^Jocked my avy...
Had to change it..
FUCKIN CELESTIAL & CARSON

[menolin]

carson
Ace? Who? I aint even spell this herbs name right..
Why? to make an example...that summin's missin from tight
nice, not really a punch 6/10

Check his AIM, "jet..drop wack..I wanna win" shits a sinch
fuk talent...he's more worried bout digits than Meryl Linch
lol, not too bad 6/10

Shit makes me cringe, Ace your even part of a Voting ring?
Yeh, Check the sig...Your part of a dislexic Edicuis Inc.
nice personal, 8/10

Askin for 10 minutes, shit it's obviouse u got pre-writtin's
Get ir right, girly...get outta here and in my kitchen...
not too bad, 7/10

It's only fittin...Your gettin your's due, Yes I mean clowned
The eye's in you avatar aint the only thing rolling around...
nice closer, 7/10


overall 34/50





strait ace
Settle this case..& ill make it known son ur stupidddddddd..
8 d's why..?
Because i wanna make You last......as long as u did..
strong opener, 7/10

Nothin....guess what? a synonym for you is just that..
& nothin is what i expect..
But u'll beat the odds &..... wont live up to that..
nice an creative, 7/10

So ha ha ha..at ur ass, see how simple text can be?
& yes u are..Far more simple then that...
But showin off is nothin to be proud of see..
not too bad, 6/10

Been waitin' Excuses & shit to stall..got to eat? get lost..
C://Windows/...
.........I'll do Rb a favor & leave ur Cookies tossed..
nice, very creative, 7/10

Avy pranks, real stunnin' there Kid..i mean yeah ur shit..
Just got in Elite..

Quote:
By:Chrit
I say just add him
Kids been around forever.
If he comes weak boot him[/B]

So prepare to get kicked out of it!
nice personal closer, 8/10


overall 35/50

[CarsonJetX2]

Check his AIM, "jet..drop wack..I wanna win" shits a sinch
fuk talent...he's more worried bout digits than Meryl Linch
lol, not too bad 6/10

carsonjetX2: who's meryl lynch
doubs o0o se7en: lol
doubs o0o se7en: i dunno
carsonjetX2: so how can u vote

.......I swear english people......

[Freeman]

iight...

Carson

Ace? Who? I aint even spell this herbs name right..
Why? to make an example...that summin's missin from tight
Not bad... Not good either... 5/10
Check his AIM, "jet..drop wack..I wanna win" shits a sinch
fuk talent...he's more worried bout digits than Meryl Linch
Lol... Funny... 7/10
Shit makes me cringe, Ace your even part of a Voting ring?
Yeh, Check the sig...Your part of a dislexic Edicuis Inc.
Decent personal... Good... 8/10
Askin for 10 minutes, shit it's obvious u got pre-writtin's
Get it right, girly...get outta here and in my kitchen...
Haha... Made me laugh... Although... Id rather my girl be in my bedroom than my kitchen... Good though... 8/10
It's only fittin...Your gettin your's due, Yes I mean clowned
The eye's in you avatar aint the only thing rolling around...
Nice... Good personal... Good closer... 8/10

Overall... 36/50


Ace

Settle this case..& ill make it known son ur stupidddddddd..
8 d's why..?
Because i wanna make You last......as long as u did..
Good opener... Decent punch here... 6/10
Nothin....guess what? a synonym for you is just that..
& nothin is what i expect..
But u'll beat the odds &..... wont live up to that..
Nice wordplay... Good punch... Liked this... 8/10
So ha ha ha..at ur ass, see how simple text can be?
& yes u are..Far more simple then that...
But showin off is nothin to be proud of see..
Didnt really hit in my opinion... 5/10
Been waitin' Excuses & shit to stall..got to eat? get lost..
C://Windows/...
.........I'll do Rb a favor & leave ur Cookies tossed..
Lol... Nice... Creative... 7/10
Avy pranks, real stunnin' there Kid..i mean yeah ur shit..
Just got in Elite..

By:Chrit
I say just add him
Kids been around forever.
If he comes weak boot him

So prepare to get kicked out of it!
Nice closer... Was stretched out because of the quote... Put the flow off... But it still hit hard... 7/10

Overall... 33/50

v/ Carson... On points...

Pz...