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Thread: Life (Off The Top)

  1. February 18th, 2004, 12:05 AM #1
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    Life (Off The Top)

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    Never know where life leads...until U walk its path
    Noone to hold or console u...noone got ur back
    So many befriend u...just to turn their backs
    In the end it's just u...when ur foes attack
    U battle back wit battle raps...swing and U get em back
    Dismantle cats...set up traps...kill em and it's a wrap
    It's a trap...set up for failure and u fell right in
    Back to where u started...thinkin that u reached the end
    Reach within...tryna to get the strength u need
    Bleached wit sin...u can't repent...ur in to deep
    U feel a surge of rage...feelin that ur in a cage
    Knowin life is a story...but wishin u can turn page
    U reached a phase...thinkin life's a conspiracy theory
    Knowin the odds r against u...got u fearin them simply
    Cuz u see no way out...can't think of no way how
    U can break the cycle...and turn ur life about
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  2. February 18th, 2004, 12:21 AM #2
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  3. February 18th, 2004, 12:25 AM #3
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    nice piece.. you had good vocab but it seems your rhymes were simple.. throw some bigger words to rhyme with or multiple words to rhyme with.. you know? But overall good piece
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  4. February 18th, 2004, 01:30 AM #4
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  6. February 18th, 2004, 01:58 PM #6
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    It was alright. I think it could have been better. You used "back" three times as you word to rhyme with. Traps twice...but I think you feel what I'm saying. Overall the subject was good towards getting your feelings across. One
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  7. February 18th, 2004, 10:18 PM #7
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    not bad.....u rhymed to much the same words
    but nice
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