holla at yo mans
7one
MR. Spits
holla at yo mans
aight man im checkin in holla at yo mans and good luck
Woops I started a thread too lol.. You're up first playa cuz you are the challenger, I'll be waiting.. Check check..
warm up
MR. Spits is still at it/ its like i went to rehab for ninety days and came out still a crack attic/
so ya better fill up ya wine glass fast/
cause thats the only shot you taken wit ya wonna be mc ass/
merkin time
you reppin boston and im reppin jackson aka jack/
and im not from kentucky but im still wilen out like a wild cat/
so im just gonna end ya life here wit a hallow tip blown threw ya chest and expose'd ya back/
and i got rockets the size of yao minge so im rap battles biggest contender / so im knocken you of the spot cause ya aint even a regular season so use just a prontender/
so ya better get a pencil and paper and take down notes/ to studie ya chalengers play book and how you didnt get any votes/
but 9im the peyton manning so im callin all the shots/ so ya better audible ya game plan cause use just got merked on the spot/
im alittle rusty its kinda a week spit but hurry up nigga and holla at yo mans aight peace .............
This kid want 20 lines, I’ll take ya virginity in 6 to 8,
The battle’s consensual, but I’ll still probably get hit wit rape,
I hope the kid escape before his face meets my keds,
‘Cuz the chances of him becomin’ hot are like Sharpton becomin’ Prez,
Better do what 7one says, or my punch will knock ya gut in 6 inches thinner,
But you can fill back up by suckin’ my dick for lunch n’ tossin’ my salad for dinner,
I tear inta vests, leave reddened chests, ambidextrous, deadly with both hooks,
This pussy Spit’s so soft, I said fuck battlin’ and beat him to death with his notebook,
You a newb and you have no chance of masterin’ 7’s ways,
And I’m the King of Queens so you can call me Kevin James,*
But actually I dunno what I’m up against, I never seen ya disses cuz..
I never seen ya spit, but I know the Mrs. does,
You should go check out the tutorials or even a fatter lecture,
That way in 2040 you can show ya battle record,**
Fuck this battle its over, stick a fork in it,
I don’t even care about this win like Mother’s Day at orphanages,
And if that wasn’t enough for ya, how bout some broken ribs,
Cuz I just dropped this kid literally like broken cribs……..
*He says hes from Queens
**He doesn't publicy show his battle record
sorry all I knew about the kid from his info lol
PACE… UPPIN FOR VOTES!!
yo, real good battle, both cam wit some hard punches, but I think 7one got tha whole battle goin wit his opener. Yo, I like readin battles dat make sense an are witty an intelligent.
Spits~ I didnt like ur structure at all, too spaced or somethin, maybe somethn was worng wit ur comp, but screw it no excuses. A few of ur punches were good like ur opener, peobly woulda been better if worded different... an ur close wasnt real great.
7one~ yo punches were on point an they all hit (hard) i thought a couple of ur lines coulda been better, but u came harder an structure was better. A rapper wins battles wit his opener an closer an u def took both.
Based on structure, punches, flo, open, an closer... my vote goes to 7one! But good luck to both of u.
Malice
yeah my vote goes to 7one also because his spit was better
Jammin you have to give a thourough explanation and post in the poll for the vote to count, please redo it.. thx for the votes.. UPPIN!
Structure - 7one, not as spaced dam spits what was with the long spaces.
Personals - Spits, just had more personals.
Punches - Spits, Felt his punches hit harder 7one didint rilly land much of his punches.
Flow - 7one, Structure made it flow better, Spits your sturcture was just too whack to make it flow nicely
Wordplay - Spits, Thought spits had more cleaver creative wordplay.
Overall - Spits got his point across with less lines i felt 7's verse but it was just too long and i got bored halfway through
my vote - Spits
Vote Removed..i highly doubt u read both verses.
-Eddy
Last edited by Edicius; February 21st, 2004 at 07:59 AM
hit up my battle with an honest vote
Chugs4Life ~vs~ Set Ignorance
Uppin.............................................
CHUGS by the way.. I just re-read MR. Spits verse and I didn't see ONE personal or ONE use of wordplay.. what was your vote about, cmon man?????
Is it outside the realm of possibility that he read it and liked it more ?????
Stop FREEPOSTING
-Eddy
Last edited by Edicius; February 21st, 2004 at 07:58 AM
fav line from 7one:
fav line from spit:Better do what 7one says, or my punch will knock ya gut in 6 inches thinner,
But you can fill back up by suckin’ my dick for lunch n’ tossin’ my salad for dinner,
I tear inta vests, leave reddened chests, ambidextrous, deadly with both hooks,
you reppin boston and im reppin jackson aka jack/
and im not from kentucky but im still wilen out like a wild cat/
so im just gonna end ya life here wit a hallow tip blown threw ya chest and expose'd ya back/ [/quote]
PLEASE RETURN TEH FAVOR IN MY LINKS IUN MY SIGNATURE PLEASE AND THANK YOU
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