A Trance Of...

[Endeva.]

Time’s a state of mind, with tricks and secrets confined
To deep quarters, lobes… where to access, is to bind
I mean past the clear waters, the air isn’t all bad
Some find what they never had… looming in the haze
Unplanned, images are clear, appear just like the day
Set in place by a trace of hallucinogen’s way
Poppin paper, smoking pipe or a drink that’s laced
And necking shrooms, all equate to the same higher place
A colourful world of wisdom where decisions have no haste
Are you listening, im christening acid reality’s break
Not to take is the mistake that a lot make… but not me
I take the t-bag, replace with dried caps, then my minds free
My own shaman, my own life to act how I feel fit to see
And that’s talking tree’s, walking fish straight outta the sea
Giant bee’s buzzing, by smoking spliff’s… without wings
Where birds don’t sing, they play guitars for their rif’s
Yes, to me it rings clear of the torment that life grips
Where I can drift and slip into a plain of self-belief
A domain of self-release, where to resist is to decrease
So to increase you need to relax and fully let go
So I do, hit the max, and sit back, then enjoy the show


...Jus Some Quick Shit

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=119044
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=119442

[Ace of Aces]

really nice. i enjoyed this read a lot. the flow came together really well, especially with those multies in them. the image of it was compelling. the topic itself isn't too common and even if it is, you potrayed it differently. it was nice. the vocab was anything but simple and the structure was flawless. this made for a good read man. keep at it.

plz vote on this battle in return:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=119510

i appreciate it.

peace

[Endeva.]

^^ill hit your battle later.....
.....as usual.. sleeping

[spokenoh]

Hmm... a piece about the hallucination of drugs, sounds like something that would come from eminem. The flow was good, imaginery was fine, some multies in there. You could really up your internals and rhyme scheme on this though.

[Endeva.]

^^yeah yeah... blah blah... read my other stuff

[Endeva.]

O.m Is Seriously Getting... Fucking Shit...

[Bigg E Z]

WOAHH....Talk About Bringin back memories of the good old days...

Nice man, Im not gon go into it too much...

But, that was fuckin dope man...lol

U kept it simple, But had allot of good vocab....Wich made it the way we like...lol

And the story/topic was un-original, wich makes a change of the herbish "My Bwoy Died in a drive by" wich is usually seen by herbs, who recently lost a DOG when a car RAN OVER HIM.....

Props....U know i mean it..!! =D

[Endeva.]

thx man... appresiated, least some dawgs got respect....

[Vis]

This was a very good piece, like someone else said:
It seem's a bit of Eminem-ish, with the drug's etc..
but you seemed to flip the concept, into a whole different thing -
causing it to be very dope..
Nice piece

Since I replied to your piece.
Please return the favor - http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?p=1261260

[Endeva.]

thnx man... ill hit yours now... jus remember,,, no sleeping on mine in the future,, OM, is getting shit... so lets keept it going man..... thx

[Freeman]

Cant relate to the drugs..

But as a piece of writing..

It was good, my man..

Not going into detail.. You know im lazy most of the time..

Lol.. Props though..

Hit my topical battle against SmokaJoka in Elevated.. 4-0.. Want it closed.. Please..

Thanks..

Pz..

[Endeva.]

^^ you lazy motha fucka....lol

[Endeva.]

upp...