BomZ vs. Lyric

[BombZ]

10 Line Max
Blind Spit
No D/R
Crew Votes aren't allowed...
Good Luck

[Laureate]

Check

[BombZ]

No spaces for herb waiste, allow me to erase these lyrics,
Lord forgive me if its crowded, but here comes another spirit,
Back-space and clear it, he's back into medical attention,
Please doctor let it go, the tention, I'm getting to wired,
Not to mention, these lyrics are not required, dates expired,
Its too soft, not even an issue, fucking blow it like tissue,
Its BombZ if you forgot, niggah buckle ya' belt,
This nigga is so pussy I'm supposing he can fuck himself,
Fucking Demon child, meanwhile get rid of whateva remains,
His flow pops off on my street, like bikes with rusted chains,

[Laureate]

Your new to this shit kid...jus a fuckin newb like every other
I'm handing you ya first major L...
...Like the doctor to Big L's Mother!
Kid coming back after a long absence...Shit I wish you were still gone
Cause playing football with ya sis...
...Is the only way you droppin bombs
This is ya initiation into IJL, so I'll grit my teeth and say Welcome Back
Played rhymes have no effect...
...Like trying to strangle you and clap
Your verse is useless man, I mean Its fuckin weak, who are you dissing?
I didn't see ya punches...
...But I can feel the breeze of them missing
Fuckin herb battlin me, we in the same crew but got nothin but hatred
This fuckin schoolins free...
...Like poor kids education

[ILLunatic]

No spaces for herb waiste, allow me to erase these lyrics,
Lord forgive me if its crowded, but here comes another spirit,
Nice wordplay, Decent punch
Back-space and clear it, he's back into medical attention,
Please doctor let it go, the tention, I'm getting to wired,
Eh.. fell off
Not to mention, these lyrics are not required, dates expired,
Its too soft, not even an issue, fucking blow it like tissue,
Eh.. still not up
Its BombZ if you forgot, niggah buckle ya' belt,
This nigga is so pussy I'm supposing he can fuck himself,
Lol.. decent punch,saying "Nigga" could get you banned
Fucking Demon child, meanwhile get rid of whateva remains,
His flow pops off on my street, like bikes with rusted chains,
Eh.. decent, could be re-worded

Your new to this shit kid...jus a fuckin newb like every other
I'm handing you ya first major L...
...Like the doctor to Big L's Mother!
Eh.. sorta played
Kid coming back after a long absence...Shit I wish you were still gone
Cause playing football with ya sis...
...Is the only way you droppin bombs
Lol.. sorta funny, kinda weak punch
This is ya initiation into IJL, so I'll grit my teeth and say Welcome Back
Played rhymes have no effect...
...Like trying to strangle you and clap
Lol.. Decent punch, made me laugh
Your verse is useless man, I mean Its fuckin weak, who are you dissing?
I didn't see ya punches...
...But I can feel the breeze of them missing
Yet again, NICE punch, made me laugh
Fuckin herb battlin me, we in the same crew but got nothin but hatred
This fuckin schoolins free...
...Like poor kids education
Eh.. played!

Overall.. Lyric got this i think, he had a bit harder punches, and had a little more humor to his verse, which helped decide this. BombZ hasn't been here in a few months, he's kinda rusty *more than bike chains in his verse* but eh.. he'll get back into it.. Juss he dont got this one..

V/ Lyric

[4Fifth]

i would vote but it wont count.. rules state "no crew votes" im in IJL,.. but just thought i'd drop my 2 cents on this match up just for the fuck ov it
well overall, this was a decent round,.. judging by the potential yall both showed in ya verses i think y'all could've came harder but i'd have to say lyric took this due to the more complex use of lyrical content.. solid match up though overall.1

[ILLunatic]

Eh.. forgot to add link

ILLunatic v.s GUILTY (topical)

[Ace of Aces]

nice battle.

bombz- came pretty good. punches were decent. structure and flow were good. you lacked personals though.

lyric- you came just as good. not bad structure, good flow. punches were decent. but you did have sum personals

vote- lyric...personals, my fav.

hit this up in return plz:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=120367

peace

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[BombZ]

uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. ......

[Laureate]

uppin

[Laureate]

up 2

[ChriZno]

This one goes to lyric

Lyric had all around better punches you both had good flow, Lyric your structure wasent awesome, but your flow and punches made up for it.
i was feeling Lyrics verse a little more. all around wordplay was better alot more creativity then outa bomZ verse.

breakdown

Flow - Both
Punches - Lyric
Structure - BomZ
worldplay - Lyric
Creativity - Lyric
Enjoyment - Both

nice battle
Vote - Lyric

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[Godfather(2)]

I have to say that this battle was one sided Lyric took this one all the way

Bombz I wasn't feelin your verse that much but uu had a few good things in the i guess lol but u need to work on ur shit you could work on ur structure and stuff i don't have much to say on ur behalf

Lyric nice verse i was feelin ur whole verse i feel u came thru with hard hitting punchlines and nice personals and i was feelin that and thats what i love when u can come hard wit punchlines even dough u didn't have to come this hard.

Return the favor

Vote goes to Lyric

[Daffer]

I liked both of the styles

flow/Lyric had a gud flow with nice rhymes and a gud wordplay; Bombz also had a gud flow but I didn't feel the same thing as with lyric, I don't know what it is but I think it's your structure Bombz that got me confused, if your structure was betta you'd have a nice flow
punchlines/ Lyric had some hard punches and bombz....well......he had punches lets put it that way....I felt that Lyric's punches came harder.....
personals/ They both need to work on their personals, especially bombz cuz his personals were to played while lyric actually gave sum thought bout his personals
multis/they both had a lot of multis goin on, that made the battle more interesting

Overall vote: Lyric cuz his flow and punches were a little bit betta, return the favur man, check my battles in my signature, thx..........

[Slayer]

Flow - Both had consistent flow but fell off in places
Structure - Lyric your structure was good, so was bombz
Multies - Both had them, but lyric had better ones
Vocab - Lyric
Metas - Lyric had good metas
Punches - Lyric had some real funny punches in there

Vote lyric due to better punches

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