www.soundclick.com/bands/8/rapidfiremusic.htm should be the one on the top..
The begining is a bit warped...especially on lo fi...I'm rappin over machine guns...and the machine gun sample was bad quality...and I guess bad quality on lo fi is just horrible...the song has good quality tho I think..lemme know what u think..PLEASE don't judge the lyrics b/c I purposely focused on guns and didn't use great lyrics in this piece...
peace
I.J.L.
grr..u fucking sleepers...
I.J.L.
the voice is aiiight..the delivery was awesome as was the flow.. the chorus was catchy.. overall I like it.. its a good track
thanx...
peace
I.J.L.
this track is pretty good, flow is straight, delivery is ok, lyrics are kinda basic like you said but there still good enough, the hook is good too. overall nice drop.
peeping... good beat... you got a decent flow, you fall off at points maybe cause you trying to fit to many words into a bar... Ok delivery... lyrics is kool nothing special.. I like the hook... second verse is better then first... well nevermind three verse you bring it better then the first two... if you rap like this with that energy you would surpass most these net cats... much respect for having a full song. I aint gon rate you cause I aint no one to be rating you na mean? But this was a good track...
crazy intro
uh oh!! some thug shit!
delivery was cool-laidback but hard at the same time
beat was tight
keep doin your thing
yea man, I wrote the first 2 verses a few months ago..I wrote the 3rd verse the day I recorded it, which would explain why the 3rd verse was best...was u saying I should put more energy into it? and thanx for the props...
peace
I.J.L.
you know i wouldn't sleep on you fam=)....I liked flow was on point nice delivery better voice then you usually use......good lyrics overall nice beat and shit like that...yep yep...good song fam...now i might even buy the album....p.s. i heard you redid your shit on the IJL collab for some reason =).......7/10..pz
INSANE JOKA LYRICIST
I have redone it yet, but I'm gonna redo it...my verse sounded like ass lol, and then when I heard ur verse I was like "fuck man I can't get outshone on my own cd.." I'm not changing the lyrics or anything, I'm just changin my voice on it..it was annoying lol..
peace
I.J.L.
congradulations, you have reached optimal WHACKNESS.
^ and who the fuck are you, and why are u dissing my shit?
I.J.L.
yo, just work on your flow and delivery you sound like you are
too excited try to sound more relaxed, like if you have done this
forever...your lyrics are nice so all you need is flow and delivery
and you will be a decent dude to spit on
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=122168
hit me back up
who am i? i'm an asshole, an asshole who speaks the truth. Werkonit.
Flow was way to basic. Thats the feedback I offer.
Im one who doesnt give net-gangster rap a chance.
But your flow was horrible.
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