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No crew votes
you know the rest of the rules.
as for due date I know ur not on right
now and I won't be online until tomorrow
night...So due date tomorrow night should be
good. I will drop then...
peace
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No crew votes
you know the rest of the rules.
as for due date I know ur not on right
now and I won't be online until tomorrow
night...So due date tomorrow night should be
good. I will drop then...
peace
Aight...
Finally gettin to this...
I'm working a touch late so I'll be gettin home late.
But I'll try and drop tonight.
If not, tomorrow in the AM for sure.
Until then...
Peace
*Slips*
I was born to kill, Born To Kill, killing U with Double meaning.
head ringing…….snatch this old man’s Cain and Stick to my winnings.
Ur apart of the Week, which makes U a Veteran,…age makes u ancient
Born strapped on Jordan’s….but still couldn’t Kick it with the legends.
His skills are questioned? Ur showing battle record.
80 plus Loses are known,…Avatar Skeleton Shown
…So now you can say your -[Bad To The Bones]-.
Speaking of his age, Born is sensitive of it… Even voters will admit,
He gets ripped so much watch D/R say “ Stop dissing senior citizens”
Check his crew list. All youngens, even the crew leader Axiom just hit 18.
Born Ur sinning……. Just another Michael Jackson, into child Bonding.
Rapping these kids pathetic…….Now you battle the Chemist…Someone
More of Ur age…Hence Forward Ur played….rip U in six Decks,….and
pulverize with Spades…..In every aspect of a Card game.
And it’s dealt Yes I dissed Ur age watch him make a Thread and complain.
I've knocked you out before and you still drop weak shit...
Why call me out again when you haven't elevated one bit?
I'm surprised Joka hasn't cut you, he must like you a little...
Either that or he's fond of records that go down the middle.
Cuz now you're 50/50 and two of those losses are to me...
My win percentage against you is betta than yours against RB!
Damn, he's clowned and there's still so much more for him...
Considering he's only gotta couple of chances, fat and slim.
He's literally dumb like a vegetable, even scared of vegetarians...
But they should be scared of him, he wants ta become a humanitarian.
Things'll never get better for you so just chill and play some Madden...
Eventually we all find ourselves, but in your case you'll wish you hadn't.
Facing reality yet, Bio? Ya worthless! Now learn from this lesson...
Cuz kid, ya ain't brought shit to this site cept ya internet connection!
I'm not odd, so just deal with one extra line without swearing...
This ain't "Loser Leave RB" so ya musta opened with what ya wearing.
was born to kill, Born To Kill, killing U with Double meaning.
head ringing…….snatch this old man’s Cain and Stick to my winnings.
opener was weak in my opinion. I get it just wasn't feelin it.
Ur apart of the Week, which makes U a Veteran,…age makes u ancient
Born strapped on Jordan’s….but still couldn’t Kick it with the legends.
Not bad punch but where the fuck is the rhyme?? jordan and veteran? helped
His skills are questioned? Ur showing battle record.
80 plus Loses are known,…Avatar Skeleton Shown
…So now you can say your -[Bad To The Bones]-.
nice personal with the avy, the bones r a little on the cheesy side
Speaking of his age, Born is sensitive of it… Even voters will admit,
He gets ripped so much watch D/R say “ Stop dissing senior citizens”
they admit he gets ripped so much whatch d/r say...??? weak
Check his crew list. All youngens, even the crew leader Axiom just hit 18.
Born Ur sinning……. Just another Michael Jackson, into child Bonding.
ok punch, micheal jackson shit is played
Rapping these kids pathetic…….Now you battle the Chemist…Someone
More of Ur age…Hence Forward Ur played….rip U in six Decks,….and
pulverize with Spades…..In every aspect of a Card game.
And it’s dealt Yes I dissed Ur age watch him make a Thread and complain.
This was prolly most decent section of your verse. The hence forward was nice and this part flowed particularly well. Unfortunately the closer was weak.
Now.. Born to kill,
I've knocked you out before and you still drop weak shit...
Why call me out again when you haven't elevated one bit?
Personal with previous battle. nice.. he called u out and came w weaker verse..
I'm surprised Joka hasn't cut you, he must like you a little...
Either that or he's fond of records that go down the middle.
So so punch, rhymes too common
Cuz now you're 50/50 and two of those losses are to me...
My win percentage against you is betta than yours against RB!
check please
Damn, he's clowned and there's still so much more for him...
Considering he's only gotta couple of chances, fat and slim.
It worked ok but it seemed like filler to me and the fat and slim thing is played, punches are more effective when their ur own.
He's literally dumb like a vegetable, even scared of vegetarians...
But they should be scared of him, he wants ta become a humanitarian.
so why should they be scared?? might have been some meaning but not real clear
Things'll never get better for you so just chill and play some Madden...
Eventually we all find ourselves, but in your case you'll wish you hadn't.
Filler
Facing reality yet, Bio? Ya worthless! Now learn from this lesson...
Cuz kid, ya ain't brought shit to this site cept ya internet connection!
Off beat and filler again
I'm not odd, so just deal with one extra line without swearing...
This ain't "Loser Leave RB" so ya musta opened with what ya wearing.
weak closer, didn't get it
There's a sayin that goes somethin like, "If you can read something with little effort, great effort went into writing it"
That's why my vote goes to Born to kill. Bio I had to reread some of your lines multiple times to figure what the fuck u were saying and you're flow was off. Born I was feeling your flow and you had harder punches than bio. Both could use more complex rhyme schemes, but to me it's all about the sound of it, it's clarity and coherence. I'm not one to bitch about structure cuz it's not important unless u r fucking ee cummings so I guess thats it. Vote Born to Kill (ditch the avy though, that one's just asking for it)
Oh and Born- you hit up one of my pieces but I don't think u polled (battle w .44)
I used my time so i would appreciate some of yours. hit up my links
Peace
good battle.....i expected more from chemist though......
chemist- had a weak verse....your punches didnt hit him hard at all......and your personals didnt hit either...work on those........flow was off and so was the structure...shoten your lines.....work on some stuff cuz this verse was weak...
work on it and elevate
born to kill- had a good verse...some were filler but most was good. The punches hit hard but some were on the soft side....personals also hit hard.....and i liked the about his record...flow was good and the strcuture was a bit of.....shorten your lines a bit too...but good verse...keep it up
AGE PUNCHES AGAINST BORN TO KILL ARE PLAYED!!!
STOP USING THEM!!!
v/born to kill
return the favor......in the sig against se7en
Pretty good battle my brothers!
Alright lets see . . .
BioChemist you had a pretty ill verse homey. You had some good structure and you were on flow. Creativity was pretty good aswell. Vocabulary was alright. Room 4 elevation in that field always. Punches and personals were ok but not all that potent. Generally you had a pretty good verse but you gottah come at it harder. Seemed like you put nothing into it and thats where your gonna get eaten alive. Star line was this. . .
More of Ur age…Hence Forward Ur played….rip U in six Decks,….and
pulverize with Spades…..In every aspect of a Card game.
And it’s dealt Yes I dissed Ur age watch him make a Thread and complain.
^^^ good stuff man! Pretty original! Although id steer clear of the whole rb intergrated insults...
Born 2 kill as always you had solid flow & structure! Delivery was goin' well throughout the verse. Originality and creativity were satifactory. You came pretty hard with punches, but personals were strangely absent. All in all you had a pretty dope verse i'd say. Good openers and closers too! Heres your star line. . .
I'm not odd, so just deal with one extra line without swearing...
This ain't "Loser Leave RB" so ya musta opened with what ya wearing
That shit will probably put the kid 2 sleep! lol born tone it down 4 the rookies.. lol jokes.
Vote B2K
Opinions ...bleh...
*drops*
Uppin......and my opinion I took it...but yeah just an opinion...Born nice battle I suppose...end this ish with votes...
Bio, ur flow changed suddenly at that one part for a bar, u barely even rhymed, only had two lines i was kinda feeling, structure fucked up, a bit of wordplay which was pretty good. Weak opener, below average closer, soso personals
B2K, i didn't really like the opener, alright closer, i liked your second half a lot better than the first, the punches hit harder in that, there was no wordplay really, you still came harder, and had some nice personals, i've defintiely seen better battles from u.
my vote goes to born to kill, please hit up the battle in the sig, it's three months old, so i would really appreciate it, just needs one more vote
good battle but as already stated im not sho i like da opener fo bio creative but not hard enough ya kno....bio was mo consistent with da flow and metaphors definatlry go to bio. i liked da way born used real examples doe adn his multis helps his flow but all in all i thikn bio got dis one
Aiight alotta Tag along Voting
Bio::::::you had some nice personals...really Caught my eye with them....Flow was on point and ya vocab was there also....wordplay could use some work.....and add some multis......Nothing TO WOW about this verse!!!!!
overall:::::::::::::7.5/10mics
B2K:::::: you had some nice VOCAB.....multis lacked...and your personals were simple....add some wit and creativity to it and you would elevate....Flow was on point and your punches lacked alil......NOthing WOW about this either
overall:::::7/10mics
VOTE::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::BI O*CHEMIST
*Coughs* Should be 4-2 to bad other emcee cyn can't vote...
Uppin...keep it coming with HONESTY
Come on, peeps...
One more...
Fork it over or I'll start editing ya rhymes and make you look whack!
^^^^ I remain fuckin funny as a motherfucker!
Peace
Ha HA! Even if u edited my ryhmes I still wouldn't b wack!
... U know I took u in this battle. Good battle anyway...
Peace!!!!!!
If someone doesn't close this real soon I may end up going stab happy...
Help a dude out.
Peace
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