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    Don't Go Where I Cant Follow



    Go anywhere in the world but don't go where I cant follow
    Turn your face away but never leave the place in my heart hollow
    Give me something I could hold onto forever, more than a smile
    I will do anything for you in the world even go that extra mile
    The day that I met you was when my heart began to melt
    You have never been able to see the look in my eyes or the way I felt
    I was left to fight the battle all on my own to feel the subjection
    It isn't easy to feel intense love for you only to feel your rejection
    Each day starts afresh but for me the sun isn't meant to rise
    I always thought with my mind but when it came to love I was unwise
    Falling in love with you has taught me how to hold on but not how to let go
    You turning away from me has made me weak and my heartbeat slow
    What can I say you abandoned my friendship and just fled
    Leaving me with tears in my eyes to which my heart bled
    I guess our meeting each other just happened by chance
    We met as strangers so why did my feelings enhance
    Maybe it was because the times were hard me needing to confide
    From all the troubles of this hard life I just wanted to hide
    You came into my life so suddenly you made me blind
    I turned towards you with open arms leaving everything behind
    You didn't even come close enough to listen to my heart beat
    Holding your memories close to my soul I often wonder the street
    I hold close to my heart your bright beautiful smile
    Which will make my heart beat for more then just a while
    I guess you have given me a special memory
    This I will hold for more then a century


    ~PEACE~

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    Nice piece here....I liked this....had a nice meaning to it....liked the way you described things at parts during the piece, really into the love stuff, dont ask me why lol just the way i am haha...Nice way to end the piece, thought it was nice...had a nice opening bar...Liked the title of this, one of the reasons why i read it....Overall a nice piece, enjoyed it.

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