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DO NOT TRY TO CAHNGE THE RULES WITHOUT ASKING!!!
*10-15 lines
*blind spit
*you must drop by 3 PM
western time.
*no recycling
*no biting
*no hate votes
*no crew votes
*no d/r votes
*or any other bullshit
DO NOT TRY TO CAHNGE THE RULES WITHOUT ASKING!!!
I launch an assault of flames that aims at lames and weak scripts that must be burned//
Provin' to this rookie that vet tips must be learned//
Cause this kid's flow handicap even at bustin' sperm//
Rappin' at me with his rusty terms,that couldn't excite heads//
If they were foxy brown doin' the firm//(get it?)
Yet,I'm sick like scientist screwin' wit germs//
And this retard, simply weak like the muscles on a geek//
Now,I can bless you with feathers plus a beak//
And you still wouldn't elevate up to my peak//
The top you seek?,but I treat you like jill and proceed to push you off the hill//
But,in actually,only in non-reality,will you climb up and challenge me to battle,gee//
So why act supreme like thespians playin' the role of julius ceasar//
I'm the wizard,but not an old gizzard, just a young god//
Makin' this stupid b*tches tongue rot//
Rippin' him like his girls when dipped by my sprung rod//
keyed it in 5 min. dont feel like waistin a good verse on this bitch.
Im bout to through it up, from all the Henny sippin
your bitch is by my pool thinkin bout skinny dippin
Step on my S-Dots and you can get shot
Im kinda down to earth feelin like Chris Rock
It must be the way i got your bitch moanin
Cuz even this wack nigga is sendin me grills like George Forman
But imma keep grining she gotta like the way i stop at the lights and the rims keep spining
Im still on the block waitin for the grind wit 9 shots
Im hardheaded i aint learned from the time that Tony got
The D.A. know im still gettin that hershey
this playas cool u neva see me sweatin my jersey
Yea i read ya lyrics and im tired of that weak crap
But hey a bitch is a bitch thats why u stay in bitch slapped
uppin fa votes..lets go....lets get some votes in here
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ahh weak battle in my opinion.. genesis heres some advice.. its never good to talk bout your opponent in the second person throughout a verse cuz it seems like your not really going at THEM and it also takes away a little bit from the agressivness of your verse
however i have to vote for flows in this battle genesis you had nice wordplay no doubt.. but where were the disses at man? you barely had any disses in this battle.. thats what battles are all about disses.. next time focus on that more.. lines about being weak like the muscles on a geek will not get it done as far as disses go
now flows..lmao.. dog your funny but cut down on the filler in your verse.. dont rhyme bout how your getting "hershey" cuz thats not battle material.. you had some pretty basic disses in this battle but i felt like you won this battle because you at least had disses in the battle opposed to your opponent who was just offering imagery and wordplay
vote- flows2exclusive
nice nice battle for both, umm
genesis- sick wit it' you cam hard, in tha beggining , but at tha end it died down- you gotta keep it up. and punches came hard...
7.0
flow- sick verse, but this is front lines textuals, you needa battle not braga on yourself, next time try and say more than one thing about ur opponent... but sum prety hot shyt,, but since you didnt focus on genesis.. 6.7
vote: GEN
i vote for flows becuz when you ran yo mouf to me, and shit now im going to return the favor.
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Both came extremely weak, and played out. Neither had hard hitting punches. Genesis had some horrible structure, as wel did flows2exclusive but flows2exclusive had a bit better structure. his flow was also a bit better, even though both had pretty basic structure. pretty weak battle all out.... but i would have to say flows2exclusive got this, not by much... but he got this.. his punches seem'd to stick out a bit more, even tho they were played most the time. both need to elevate extremely.. but flows2exclusive gets my vote....
V/flows2exclusive.
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Genesis
no metaphors, and no creativity......he had about one "OK" linea bout muscles on a geek.....other than that, he offereed nothing.......flow was off and structure was awful.......never use //.....make ur lines even dude
Exclusive
no metaphors or similes either.......your whole verse revolved around his girl which are fake personals.....thats why i felt u came weaker,......nothing but lies.......your only OK line was the gearge forman........flow was better and so was structure.......but those gay girlfriend lines killed u
Vote: Genesis
please hit this up im tired of votin with no returns
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=124845
Thats a sweet ass tupac picture that u guys posted up there aiight peace niggaz
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