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[center[[font=tahoma]iight here we go
10 - 15 lines
no d/r votes
no hate votes
due today
40 mintues to drop after checkin
IF I GET 3 VOTES I GET INTO IJL[/font[/center]
hehe...2 votes and your in buddy...checkin in...g'luck
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3 votes to get in to IJL? Kid you must be dreaming now
If you get 1 it'll be D/R...
...Thats why you always take a bow
You think your fuckin dope dawg? Givin yourself too much credit
Had to borrow some to set this up...
...But man it's a losing bet, shit
I looked at your first post, and realized what a herb you are
[whored] you trynin to be gangsta?...
...rhymes more played then gangsta avatars [/whored]
Fuckin herb couldn't be dope, even if he bit all my lines he had to
Not sayin that I'm whack...
...but he's prolly use the ones from this battle
Dissin himself for me man, your verse reveals your shit skills
We know you games a quack...
...Thats why you avoid bills
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come on kid tryna battle me i'm loaded with punch's in each sentence so bring all your hench-man and watch my lyrical tension
its my intension to bitch slap some prick who's act'n all tuff like he roll's deep in the hood but Lyric is misunderstood as he only popped a bonet 'n' stuck his head in the hood
i'm like stevie wonder out thieving some cunt cas i got "lyrics" that'll have u robbed blind for even tryna frunt
i'd say smoked like a blunt but thats means i'd be dropping old like this ass so i'll just switch the play 'n' say like some night class
as you dont want this beef kid just stick to fish 'n' chips Lyric cas i fail to feel your skill bitch even if it was written in brail or engraved in my brain
i've everything to prove to hold my respect on this forum but you've nothing to lose like a homeless man on the booze
i make moves thats impossible come possible when tossing punch's thats unstoppable so that shows you'll only go toe to toe when you giving me a peticure
as i leave your name in the dirt cas i grab mic's like a gat as i aim to hurt and eat this bitch like dessert as he could'nt be sick even if he was a sexual pervet
got him sweating like a rapist wishing he had'nt challeneged me but you aint shit but plane(plain) kid thats why i've got you bound 'n' gagged as your lines gave me jet lag
just start waving your white flag as i got you shitting more skid marks then race day at daytona your name aint Lyric now kid you've just been pronounced dead thats why your family mourn ya
nobody's warned ya how your lifes over before it started as your carears down the drain like a outa work plumber so go take up rock 'n' become a fucking drummer
your a washed out bummer who's just been made street from bars 'n' punch's thats layed you out on the concrete
i hate to hand out defeats but splitz you lyric so much crap i bet it's written down on a toliet paper sheet....
um ok let me be the first...
VOTE LYRIC.......
reason
Lyric....you came with expected hotness.....flow was there...and your punches merked him.....vocab and multis lacked but punches make battles....
Rapid.......stick to the newb crews homie......Lyric is on a different level then you....your punches lacked...and your structure and flow was so OFFFFFFFFFFFFF POINT.....learn to fix all that and you will elevate
so there you have it folks
vote LYRIC
uppin....drop a link
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Lyric: Punches were decent from throughout the verse... didn't seem like you tried to hard, but definitely enough to take the battle...
Rapid Fire: Verse was kinda forced... no real flow because of a lack of structure... need a basis to your verses... just not strong enough to take the battle
Vote - Lyric
Return the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=130011
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Look at em cheer - the crowd, I've been tame as I spit it to you
Everything from here till now has been strained and then given to you
- Brethren
I seriously don't think you are gonna get three votes...
Lyric had a few decent punches and his flow was on point.......Good Job :thumbsup:
Rapid, you flow was off and none of your punches were connecting at all. You need a little more practice before you go challenging people who have been on here for a while. You'll start to notice how to change your structure around to where it is easier to read and the flow stays consistent.
Vote - Lyric
Hit this up with an honest vote when you get a chance.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=129584
Thanks...upp
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I just have a question. What the fuck structure does Lyric have? It feels so fucking forced when I read it.
Lyric had punches, one personal, metaphores, and some okay wordplay.
Rapid had the structure, even though that was still warped, he didn't take too much else except for vocabulary.
Not too much of an explination, battle wasn't that hot I don't think, not at all. One had a warped structure and the other had no punches, so naturally the one with the punches wins. Rapid you were pretty much filler and a lot of it was unnecessary.
Keep elevating.
(Why do I need 100 posts to vote? If I can't vote I can't get points, if I can't get points I can't battle, fucked system.)
Just for some sort of sentimental value Lyric, you get my vote.Don't you just love me?
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You need 100 posts so people dun make alias' and vot on them...thanks for the feedback man
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Right, I forgot the password to my old alias. Dammit.
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I dont see Lyrics style as forced at all...
but that's just me, I guess..
Lyric- dope as always.. came hard, but only one of your mediocre verses, but clearly enough to od the job... nice ok metas.. nice flow.. punches were hard... overall pretty good verse from you
rapid- no.. not 3 votes.. not 1.. but keep at it trying, you have some talent, but your words were way too small.. you clearly tried to force too much into your verse trying to make sure you threw enough at Lyric.. but in the end that always turns out to just be not good.. fix up the strucutre and don't try to over-do anything
vote- lyric
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