Brethren vs Axl Prose

[Nahlidge]

Check ins due Wednesday night.
Verses due Friday night by 11:59 Eastern Time.
Battles will be 10-20 lines, agree on it with your opponent.
Any swaying will deduct one vote per incidence of swaying.

[Clint Walkin]

Here. Who the hell are you ? We're doing 16.

[Brethren]

Who are you? Check

[Clint Walkin]

Who am I ?....lol

Hand ya ass to ya, you know that Quo is tighter man
Breth sports white stuff on his palms like Spiderman
Got him fuckin shook from the beatin, cryin to be breathin
I'll put more knots in ya stomach then Cub Scout Meetings
I'll wreck this fag, came in on a good tip and took the W in a bag
Kid's verse has more do's and dont's then his Cosmo mags
you want a tourny verse ? fuck it, i'll go off and kill this kid
picture perfect ? shit there's still negatives in Breth's development
Got ya coughin up, chokin nuts, and throwin up the blood, say
I'll flip out and disect ya name and take ya fuckin Breth away
Hustle it up see just how I'm bustin ya nuts B
I flow outside the box, so this square can't fuckin touch me
Insert some wit into ya shit, I read ya LLL spurt lucked
And it sounds like a regeratation of my verse when I sucked
But we won't go there, I'm sure you've heard it before
Your verses are more of a drag then Elton John's whores

..Now you know who the fuck I am kid.

[Brethren]

I slay this whore... but you'll get a vote... maybe more
Cuz this fuck has been forgotten, and you were on the day before
You're less than famous... I laugh when ya body hits the fan
Is it too soon? are you still crying over Hottie being banned?
He oddly is a man... dude's on the internet hangin with ladies
And I know ya punches are played cuz you still usin slang from the 80's
Mangle this trainee... spitting those weak metas thinkin it works
I'm searching for the sky when I'm trying to dig up his dirt
And this chicken'll hurt... Breth'll be rippin his spine up
We knew you were wack...but you had to go remind us
This cat tied up... and gag him cuz he just annoys this...
Quotient must be running out of lead... his shit was pointless
Give him choices... and wow... this fucking kid's a rebel
I'll have to destroy Axel like I was playing Twisted Metal
You get a medal for that guy... I laugh cuz ya paper is tender
Man... I did read your verse... and I can't say I remember

[Sergio...]

Hand ya ass to ya, you know that Quo is tighter man
Breth sports white stuff on his palms like Spiderman
---meh
Got him fuckin shook from the beatin, cryin to be breathin
I'll put more knots in ya stomach then Cub Scout Meetings
---lol
I'll wreck this fag, came in on a good tip and took the W in a bag
Kid's verse has more do's and dont's then his Cosmo mags
---lol
you want a tourny verse ? fuck it, i'll go off and kill this kid
picture perfect ? shit there's still negatives in Breth's development
---ok
Got ya coughin up, chokin nuts, and throwin up the blood, say
I'll flip out and disect ya name and take ya fuckin Breth away
---breth wordplay has been used quite a bit.
Hustle it up see just how I'm bustin ya nuts B
I flow outside the box, so this square can't fuckin touch me
---almost
Insert some wit into ya shit, I read ya LLL spurt lucked
And it sounds like a regeratation of my verse when I sucked
---hehe
But we won't go there, I'm sure you've heard it before
Your verses are more of a drag then Elton John's whores
---eh....




I slay this whore... but you'll get a vote... maybe more
Cuz this fuck has been forgotten, and you were on the day before
---lol
You're less than famous... I laugh when ya body hits the fan
Is it too soon? are you still crying over Hottie being banned?
---coo
He oddly is a man... dude's on the internet hangin with ladies
And I know ya punches are played cuz you still usin slang from the 80's
---no
Mangle this trainee... spitting those weak metas thinkin it works
I'm searching for the sky when I'm trying to dig up his dirt
---not feeling.
And this chicken'll hurt... Breth'll be rippin his spine up
We knew you were wack...but you had to go remind us
---ok
This cat tied up... and gag him cuz he just annoys this...
Quotient must be running out of lead... his shit was pointless
---almost..coulda been dope.
Give him choices... and wow... this fucking kid's a rebel
I'll have to destroy Axel like I was playing Twisted Metal
---ok
You get a medal for that guy... I laugh cuz ya paper is tender
Man... I did read your verse... and I can't say I remember
---eh....


hmm...if u look at the breakdown this is nearly a tie in my eyes....

lol's/coo's/ok's/hehe's= 4 a piece

almost=1 each...

not feeling/meh/wack=3 each....

basically....this sucks for me...ima go with Brethren....
since they were so close...i looked at opener/closer..and
felt brethren took those..

[KaZe.]

You can count my vote or not, Quo won IMO. He had the cub scoutt, cosmo, picture perfect, and regeneration line . and Breth just had his opener and Twisted metal line. . .

V/ Ax to the L

[Clint Walkin]

Sorry about posting. No swaying. Thanks for the votes thus far. I did my verse in a hurry cuz I knew I'd be busy all day. I misspelled the word.. regergatation. That is all.. left out the 'g'.. typo obviously. Cool verse Brethern person.

[Boogie Man.]

Axl Prose...holla At Me

[Mystery~Murdera]

I hate to do this but I'm going to have
to swallow my words here. To be honest
I was like "lemme peep this thread and
see how bad Quo merked brethren". I read
Quo's verse and was thinkin... "what...?"
Quo didnt pack the punch like he used to.
Like he did when he beat me. I dunno y
but the creativity wasn't there. Maybe
it's because it was rushed like he said.
Brethren came witty and believe it or
not... upset of the year... I think he won.

He oddly is a man... dude's on the internet hangin with ladies
And I know ya punches are played cuz you still usin slang from the 80's

&

And this chicken'll hurt... Breth'll be rippin his spine up
We knew you were wack...but you had to go remind us

were probably the best in the battle and thats upsetting.
This battle should've been so much better.

Quo

Got ya coughin up, chokin nuts, and throwin up the blood, say
I'll flip out and disect ya name and take ya fuckin Breth away

...do not pretend you thought that would be original... oh well,
nice to have you back in the league. Makes things more interesing.

v/ Brethren

[Nahlidge]

Vote - Quo

He didn`t come as dope as I was expectin` .. But he`ll get it back soon .. But he still came with more consistency than Brethren .. Breth had the Axel line .. And the pointless line was aight .. The 80`s one was cooh .. But the rest I wasn`t feelin` .. Quo had the Cub line .. Mag line .. Development line .. And the square one .. The rest were cooh .. Only one I didn`t like was the suck line .. So overall Quo takes this in my opinion ..

[Vylint]

axl-

Hand ya ass to ya, you know that Quo is tighter man
Breth sports white stuff on his palms like Spiderman
r u serious? no.

Got him fuckin shook from the beatin, cryin to be breathin
I'll put more knots in ya stomach then Cub Scout Meetings
Decent

I'll wreck this fag, came in on a good tip and took the W in a bag
Kid's verse has more do's and dont's then his Cosmo mags
ehhh

you want a tourny verse ? fuck it, i'll go off and kill this kid
picture perfect ? shit there's still negatives in Breth's development
no. PLAYED

Got ya coughin up, chokin nuts, and throwin up the blood, say
I'll flip out and disect ya name and take ya fuckin Breth away
its ok

Hustle it up see just how I'm bustin ya nuts B
I flow outside the box, so this square can't fuckin touch me
no

Insert some wit into ya shit, I read ya LLL spurt lucked
And it sounds like a regeratation of my verse when I sucked
too big of word thru me lost.

But we won't go there, I'm sure you've heard it before
Your verses are more of a drag then Elton John's whores
W I G G I T Y W A C K !

Brethen-
" slay this whore... but you'll get a vote... maybe more
Cuz this fuck has been forgotten, and you were on the day before
heh

You're less than famous... I laugh when ya body hits the fan
Is it too soon? are you still crying over Hottie being banned?
....?


He oddly is a man... dude's on the internet hangin with ladies
And I know ya punches are played cuz you still usin slang from the 80's
lol ha

Mangle this trainee... spitting those weak metas thinkin it works
I'm searching for the sky when I'm trying to dig up his dirt
iffy.

And this chicken'll hurt... Breth'll be rippin his spine up
We knew you were wack...but you had to go remind us
oh yea?

This cat tied up... and gag him cuz he just annoys this...
Quotient must be running out of lead... his shit was pointless
...

Give him choices... and wow... this fucking kid's a rebel
I'll have to destroy Axel like I was playing Twisted Metal
lol yea thats dope

You get a medal for that guy... I laugh cuz ya paper is tender
Man... I did read your verse... and I can't say I remember"
Heh


Winner- Bre

close .

[Erupt]

wow... just wow...

i read the first line of quo's and i thought "this is going be a mauling" but then he sort of weakened out... not bad by any means but not like his opening bar....

then i read brethrens and i honestly enjoyed it more.... just being honest.... i thought the "you had to remind us" line was dope and the "slang from the eighties" was nice too.... the twisted metal line was OK.... but overall i think brethren got this...

upset vote brethren

[$pitacular]

Breth took this .... just came harder, not so much witty but def harder.... Axl aight shit but inconcistant, work on it you'll get it

pz

[God.]

Good battle, but I think that Axl Prose had stronger and wittier punches and was consistent with them Brethren was too, but at times he wasn't as strong.

Vote: Axl Prose