A Letter 2 Heaven

[NeoBaby]

Dear God...I know that faith is believing without seeing//
I'm down on this earth and its only death and hatred I'm seeing//
Mothers broken hearted, cuz thier sons and daughters is dearly departed//
From the Middle East back to these urban streets lives are unguarded//
Now days its live by the gun or die by the gun, kill or get killed//
Steal or get stoled on, your soul gone, cuz your cap got peeled//
Its a shame how it is in my community, there's no unity//
Everybody beefin, don't know who's the next, you are me//

[L.I.]

Decent drop...basic really...but a little bit of emotion was there....flow was good....really basic though....with a topic like that u could have written more in depth....jus try to be more complex with your ish and ull elevate....give it a 4/10

[Mistral]

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.