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    Staying Home

    Far beyond these walls that shelter me,
    these walls that surround me and keep me from harm,
    the night sky is set ablaze:
    A litany of shooting stars
    is raining down from heaven's brawl.

    I don't see the sudden sparkle
    I don't gasp in pure delight
    I can't grasp this simple pleasure
    As all I do is sleep at night.

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    I liked this alot.
    my interpretation:In the safety of the home one is unaware of terrorist attacks,murders and whatnot,and simply sleep through such corruption.
    Anyways nice poem,hope you reply to my stuff again sometime.
    -peace

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    shot and right to the point... this was an okay poem...

    I don't see the sudden sparkle
    I don't gasp in pure delight
    I can't grasp this simple pleasure
    As all I do is sleep at night.

    ^^Nice shit man... i wanna see you drop more shit

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