10 lines
due today
Yep!
10 lines
due today
Yep!
u spit first
shit just saw this... alright'... quick key, Lets Go!
i'll let you try to beat me, but I didnt say you could,
fuck killin your block... i'll just destroy your whole neighborhood!
you dont want me if your comin' with dumb keys,
fags love large things... so i'll pass the bannana like you wuz a monkey!
my punches hit more witt quick swords to flip boards,
i'll catch you witt an (e)L... like you stole me from a thrift store!
takin' yeah breath when im shakin you off like dead skin ima veteran,
El'z fuckin' this kid up... like a corrupted reverend!
im clever 'n leave you shook when yah walkin',
when im done bendin' yah head to the ground.... we'll let yah foot do the talkin!
Man that verse was pure dookie so imma chase it like a groupie
After I demolish this rookie imma take his ladys cookie
Break ya nose,heart and arms wit nothing but lyrics,skillz and charm
No I dont love large things, thats why Im - avoiding ya momz
So bro prepare to hear the laughter and the loss thats coming after
Break into you like a hacker and leave you white like Marshall Mathers
To see me kid u must be physic wanna cry but try to fight it
Ya verse my tounge will ignite it so no one hurts tryna recite it
Face youve been dismatled, mutaled, and manhandled
Change ya name ya fuckin pick Seseme Street has been cancelled
Writers block....
Pleaze Vote, Uppin,
Both were kinda weak, but here goes:
i'll let you try to beat me, but I didnt say you could,
fuck killin your block... i'll just destroy your whole neighborhood!
block usually = a neighborhood, that was pretty weak and wack
you dont want me if your comin' with dumb keys,
fags love large things... so i'll pass the bannana like you wuz a monkey!
Wack punch, and looks like it would sound forced
my punches hit more witt quick swords to flip boards,
i'll catch you witt an (e)L... like you stole me from a thrift store!
decent punch
takin' yeah breath when im shakin you off like dead skin ima veteran,
El'z fuckin' this kid up... like a corrupted reverend!
Weak punch, and who shakes off dead skin?????
im clever 'n leave you shook when yah walkin',
when im done bendin' yah head to the ground.... we'll let yah foot do the talkin!
iiight
YOUR SCORE: 3/10
Man that verse was pure dookie so imma chase it like a groupie
After I demolish this rookie imma take his ladys cookie
Extremely wack
Break ya nose,heart and arms wit nothing but lyrics,skillz and charm
No I dont love large things, thats why Im - avoiding ya momz
Funny, i liked that punched
So bro prepare to hear the laughter and the loss thats coming after
Break into you like a hacker and leave you white like Marshall Mathers
Decent
To see me kid u must be physic wanna cry but try to fight it
Ya verse my tounge will ignite it so no one hurts tryna recite it
iiight
Face youve been dismatled, mutaled, and manhandled
Change ya name ya fuckin pick Seseme Street has been cancelled
Humorous
YOUR SCORE 5/10
Both were weak and need work but lil tra pulled it out wit humor and one personal, elmo had no personals. Not hatin, jus tryna get ya to step ya game up
Artificial Intelligence
iight uppin baby
im going with lil tra here he ripped on u elmo the closer was the shit and his structure was strong vote lil tra
El'z fuckin' this kid up... like a corrupted reverend!
v- elmo or w/e
he atleast tried to write punches
"leave you white like marshall mathers" ?
terrible
v- other guy, not tra
Elmo wins easily..
Fucka 'white like marshall mathers', or that gay ass seasame street line..
Tra is wack as fuck..
Nuff said..
Elmo needs elevation and a new name, but nonetheless..
VOTE - ELMO DA CRACKUR
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lil tra dq'd for having more the 3 active battles
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