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roux
unXtatic
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no feedin
house rules
immediate check in
verses due by midnight (eastern time)
good luck
n also: no BS, Hate, Crew, or DR votes
checkin in.....
in. go on chump, drop one............................................... ..
"Gangsters and hoods, criminals and thugs, some of my friends sell records, some of my friends sell drugs"
-T. Armstrong
^whoa shit....aight son--gimme 30-45min
"Diss roux, the RB Rejct", i jus made this into a topical thread
cuz u MUST be jerkin off
....since there aint nothin but kid shit at the top of ya head
i'm droppin ya dead, sorta like cancer the way i break ya health
my punches'll leave u wit crooked teeth, bitch 'brace' yourself
got u sweatin bullets, but that wont help when u dissin, cuzz
to this battle, you're nervous about comin like u pissin blood
a winnin record fo u is ficticious, simply put--ya not vicious
leave the business, u wouldn't have a W if u was auspicious*
fah'real, u need ta' pac,man--take ya shit n git ya ass in retail
cuz jus like this foo.....^, ya game's simple n lacks graphic detail
ya callouts waste everyone's minutes, that should be an RB crime
i'ma disconnect ya vocal cord so u can't connect 'em phoney lines
i figure yo a reject cuz it seems that u fail 2 astound all
n my slickness durin the stairdown contributed to ya downfall
u dont make the grade, n shit, u had no sucess in the 12th
u the laughin stock of RB, n it's about time u invest in yourself
*yo, i wasnt talkin bout Auspicious the mod...think of W as double u
it's like alphabet soup when you type your text
letters all over one line to the next
are you rapping in English?, cause i don't understand
you need RB crib notes tattooed on the palm of your hand
UnX's talent and avatar are the same
neither exist and this light weight's to blame
i tried to read your text but it just made me sick
looks like the last Beat you heard was your palm on your dick
worms like you are the reason i write
i call this shit "practice" you call it a "fight"
do you know what battle means?, take a sec, look it up
i think Unx's mom got a cheap deal on some sperm in a cup
so there's my verse, sticking out ya chest like a Fork
you're "done" now bitch, change your name to "U Dork"
"Gangsters and hoods, criminals and thugs, some of my friends sell records, some of my friends sell drugs"
-T. Armstrong
aight uppin #2
Aiight...
Unxtatic...
"Diss roux, the RB Rejct", i jus made this into a topical thread
cuz u MUST be jerkin off
....since there aint nothin but kid shit at the top of ya head
lol aiight opener...
i'm droppin ya dead, sorta like cancer the way i break ya health
my punches'll leave u wit crooked teeth, bitch 'brace' yourself
Coo wordplay, weak punch tho
got u sweatin bullets, but that wont help when u dissin, cuzz
to this battle, you're nervous about comin like u pissin blood
lol
a winnin record fo u is ficticious, simply put--ya not vicious
leave the business, u wouldn't have a W if u was auspicious
Not feelin
fah'real, u need ta' pac,man--take ya shit n git ya ass in retail
cuz jus like this foo.....^, ya game's simple n lacks graphic detail
Aiight, whack wordin tho
ya callouts waste everyone's minutes, that should be an RB crime
i'ma disconnect ya vocal cord so u can't connect 'em phoney lines
lol chea nice
i figure yo a reject cuz it seems that u fail 2 astound all
n my slickness durin the stairdown contributed to ya downfall
Not feelin
u dont make the grade, n shit, u had no sucess in the 12th
u the laughin stock of RB, n it's about time u invest in yourself
Aiight closure.
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Roux...
it's like alphabet soup when you type your text
letters all over one line to the next
Whack opener...
are you rapping in English?, cause i don't understand
you need RB crib notes tattooed on the palm of your hand
Not feelin
UnX's talent and avatar are the same
neither exist and this light weight's to blame
Aiight personal n punch i guess
i tried to read your text but it just made me sick
looks like the last Beat you heard was your palm on your dick
Plaaaaaaaaaaaayed!
worms like you are the reason i write
i call this shit "practice" you call it a "fight"
Glorification
do you know what battle means?, take a sec, look it up
i think Unx's mom got a cheap deal on some sperm in a cup
Plaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayed!
so there's my verse, sticking out ya chest like a Fork
you're "done" now bitch, change your name to "U Dork"
Weak closure.
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Aiight, Unxtatic came wit some good wordplay and personal punches in here. Only bout 3-4 bars he came weak/whack on. Roux came madd weak n played thru it all, cept for his personal punch bout Unxtatic's A.V / Status.
Vote - Unxtatic.
Good Luck Fellas.
Return favor plz, links b up in sig. Word.
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On Vacation, Bitches.
aight uppin #3....i'll return the favor wit an HONEST vote...
wake ya fuckin ass up...quit sleepin on this shit...i WILL return the favor wit an honest vote....uppin #4
aight i dont kno y im even explainin this Unx took this easily, Roux's shyt was almost all played, im thinkin he tried way too hard, Unx had da punches, personals, wordplay, etc etc etc, am i forgetting ne thing, oh yea
vote-Unxtatic
return da favor, vote on a battle in my sig
I was here before RB died
- Micnificant
- MakeveliTrained
GrindHouse > BIYATCCHHHH
last up...make it count...if yall drop links, i'ma return the favor wit an honest vote
unXtatic-
"Diss roux, the RB Rejct", i jus made this into a topical thread
cuz u MUST be jerkin off
....since there aint nothin but kid shit at the top of ya head
Nah..
i'm droppin ya dead, sorta like cancer the way i break ya health
my punches'll leave u wit crooked teeth, bitch 'brace' yourself
Cool.
got u sweatin bullets, but that wont help when u dissin, cuzz
to this battle, you're nervous about comin like u pissin blood
Blah, didnt like it.
a winnin record fo u is ficticious, simply put--ya not vicious
leave the business, u wouldn't have a W if u was auspicious*
Ok.
fah'real, u need ta' pac,man--take ya shit n git ya ass in retail
cuz jus like this foo.....^, ya game's simple n lacks graphic detail
Didnt hit.. maybe if he was a frequent graphics visitor..
ya callouts waste everyone's minutes, that should be an RB crime
i'ma disconnect ya vocal cord so u can't connect 'em phoney lines
Eh.. decent.. lil played.
i figure yo a reject cuz it seems that u fail 2 astound all
n my slickness durin the stairdown contributed to ya downfall
Cool twist, weak punch
u dont make the grade, n shit, u had no sucess in the 12th
u the laughin stock of RB, n it's about time u invest in yourself
Nah.
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roux-
it's like alphabet soup when you type your text
letters all over one line to the next
No, and not true = whack.
are you rapping in English?, cause i don't understand
you need RB crib notes tattooed on the palm of your hand
Nope.
UnX's talent and avatar are the same
neither exist and this light weight's to blame
I see what you were thinking, but weak approach.
i tried to read your text but it just made me sick
looks like the last Beat you heard was your palm on your dick
Hell no.
worms like you are the reason i write
i call this shit "practice" you call it a "fight"
Lmao no no no
do you know what battle means?, take a sec, look it up
i think Unx's mom got a cheap deal on some sperm in a cup
so there's my verse, sticking out ya chest like a Fork
you're "done" now bitch, change your name to "U Dork"
*sigh*..
Overall, this was more one-sided than NBA vs little leagers. Seriously, roux, you need to elevate alot bro. Im not hating on ya, but you cant expect to win battles dropping like that. You been here a good amount of time, Im sure you know where to go. unXtatic, decent verse, came played at times, but I saw some promising lines and concepts. Keep it up, your gettin better.
Vote / unXtatic.
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rule broke it down perfectly...some of roux' lines were maddd played..he had some ok concepts and 1 or two hot bars but everything else was ass the fight line was ass and ur closer was wack...
unxtatic takes this with bette rpunches personals and an overralll better verse....good job to both...
ps roux is auspicous?
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UnX took this with ease, didnt have to try. His verse had more wordplay and actual punches that somewhat connected. Roux was wack, period, needs to elevate and think of some creative punches.
V/ UnX.
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