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    Still in the grave Johnny 6-feet's Avatar
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    Subliminal message

    Shadowsk8er- katie

    Sefton Blake- the sleeping cheif

    Test six at his best, bitch you're running the gauntlet
    Here's my two pennies dropped at full weight and dauntless
    Eviserating cats like the Ka's evil twin
    Holy thoughts reign supreme and stay speeding to win
    Ignorance is evaporated with supersonic beams
    Doubtlessly left submerged in potent tonic dreams
    Don't test, don't stress at the back of the race
    Energy quadruples when you slacken the pace
    Nostradamas philosophies, the armageddon
    Many years from now or maybe minutes left to wet 'em
    Enough with the bullshit, i'll take my charge
    Superspeed 'round mars with electric guitars
    Seeding knowledge in fertile minds that open
    Averaging out at brilliance key'd with an old pen
    Generously distracted, royally released
    Each and every criminal wronged impeached
    Intellectualism is a dying movement
    Soundlessly perishing wherever the groove went
    Improvement is necessary like incenduary
    Lashing through mediocraty i'll send for free
    Leanience is lost, lets expand the narration
    Neo-societies, lets build a planned nation
    Evidence is collected and placed in vestiges
    Souped up correctly so you wouldn't mess with this
    So can you cats tell me what the hidden message is?


    (edit)- thanks for the feedback fella's. since i dont wanna up this again i'm posting here. here's a hint for the people who haven't worked out the "hidden message" yet.



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    do you see it?
    Last edited by Johnny 6-feet; October 24th, 2004 at 03:42 PM

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    rofl - this was "ill" - flow in the first half was sick - second half had some iffy spots - but I guess it depends on where you pause at, etc - nice word choice throughout - and just throwing out dope thoughts - cool beans - keep at it

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    ya flow was definitely better in the first half like smz pointed out....it was crazy ill tho...imma listen to sum ya of ya shit on soundclick soon....i liked ya piece bout tha 18 year old friend dyin too.....holla at me man....pz

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    Still in the grave Johnny 6-feet's Avatar
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    uppin' this once. cheers for the feedback fellas. thanks lethal, for reppin 2 of my pieces, rest assured you're getting a rep on the next piece you drop.

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    aight u "cheeky bastard" (lmao)
    that was sick
    actually I can't tell u the hidden message
    but u had sum sick vocab in there nice shit
    I think ur flow depends on pauses and beat...was hard for me to get it
    the line I didn't like was:"Superspeed 'round mars with electric guitars"..well wuteva
    but the line I liked most was:"Seeding knowledge in fertile minds that open"

    all in all well done...sick but creative
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    This Piece Was unique...

    Got your message out somewhat good.
    Flow was there topic wise was ok...
    was pretty interesting.Nice structure
    vocabulary was pretty good, using words
    to express oneself...didnt really dig the style.


    Over all pretty good open mic...

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    Really enjoyed this shit yo...ya Flow was on point...liked the concept..it was unique.....Good delivery.....and structure was okay

    Overall=B

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    i really liked the flow to this.. was on point and right. the vocab was superb too. really throwing hints and nice rhymes to let us know what the 'hidden message' is.. lol even though with all of that i still don't know what it is. but anyways.. overall good shit, man. keep it up.
    Say goodnight to tha bad guy..
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