drop ya 10+ lines asap good luck.
Spit No Evil
Fel#ny
drop ya 10+ lines asap good luck.
Listen kid, to battle me your gonna need to learn how to play chess with words,
cos to be honest im better than most of these cowards, more than two thirds,
unlike MC Neat your gonna need more than a little bit of luck to make it through the nite,
see it aint easy to beat me cos the lyrics i spit are extremely tight,
to get any where near the level im at your gonna struggle,
it'll take more than ten of you cowards to match my hussle,
So bare witness on the way i be cuttin em down,
anyone who comes at me i be suttin em down,
i know theres no way you can match my display,
so theres only one thing i have left to say,
bow down on ya knees and to me respect you'll pay.
Hi there!.. I'm new too, but we're we're nothin' alike
I spit no evil, it's a crime when you grab the mic, aiight?
You can't measure up, you're a few inches shy
You can be my witness, as a I finish this right
Shit, I'll diminish this guy, he can't even stand up and face me
Bet he'll demand a "re-trial" when the jury's swayed to obey me
You should plead insanity, acceptin' this was crazy
You're a bad hand for humanity, I think I'll discard
I'm leavin' you scarred, Neosporin won't fade the cut
Felony's guilty as charged, three strikes and you're out. What?
now y'all seen the drops vote and review
Safe
I'm uppin' for some votes. Come on y'all..........
Alright neither verse was all that good.......but they were for newbs, decent.
Fel#ny, u didn't have any punches that i could see, maybe u should take lessons from the vets in the Elite league. The only thing u did was glorify urself, and the object is to diss the other guy.......so no, u don't get any props fa that verse. The only thing i can give u that was good was structure and rhyme scheme, everything else.......wack.
Spit, u had a better verse, cuz u actually had punches, not that they were very good, but they were there. U had some nice rhymin even though in some places, it didn't look like it rhymed but that's okay....this time. U bothe could use some elevation in my opinion, but ur structure was okay as well.
my vote=Spit no evil, cuz he actually threw punches....as this iz a BATTLE.
Battles:
Come and get it.
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Uppin'. Come on, can we get some more votes on this please so we can finish it?
COME ON ALREADY. Can some of you just drop some votes? .. damn. I know I can't vote yet but once I can I'll vote in battles of those who vote here. Uppin' #3.
...uppin' # 4. Can someone vote on this shit?.....
...uppin' #5. Come on y'all.
fel-ok flow, aight structure, weak disses.
spit-ok flow, ok structure, sum ok disses.
Overall spit had lil harder punches even though the flow got messy.
vote-spit
felony
Listen kid, to battle me your gonna need to learn how to play chess with words,
cos to be honest im better than most of these cowards,
wow... I have to read this 2 times to make check the flow... uh... WACK more than two thirds,
unlike MC Neat your gonna need more than a little bit of luck to make it through the nite,
see it aint easy to beat me cos the lyrics i spit are extremely tight,
uh... no... WACK
to get any where near the level im at your gonna struggle,
it'll take more than ten of you cowards to match my hussle,
So bare witness on the way i be cuttin em down,
anyone who comes at me i be suttin em down,
i know theres no way you can match my display,
so theres only one thing i have left to say,
bow down on ya knees and to me respect you'll pay.
OVERALL... WACK
dude... that wasnt tight at all... week rhymes... no good punches... nothin peronal... 4/10
Spit
Hi there!.. I'm new too, but we're we're nothin' alike
I spit no evil, it's a crime when you grab the mic, aiight?
simple but good punch
You can't measure up, you're a few inches shy
You can be my witness, as a I finish this right
Shit, I'll diminish this guy, he can't even stand up and face me
Bet he'll demand a "re-trial" when the jury's swayed to obey me
good punch... never seen that in a rhyme with a courtroom
You should plead insanity, acceptin' this was crazy
You're a bad hand for humanity, I think I'll discard
I'm leavin' you scarred, Neosporin won't fade the cut
Felony's guilty as charged, three strikes and you're out. What?
not bad... easy rhymes but good punches... 7.5/10
nothin was wack though which is GREAT compraird to above
V/ SPIT
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Meat
yo spit i am going to have to give this one to you you still need some practice but practice makes perfect but you did alright man and fel nys you was aight not the best ive seeen ill tell you that but just let the flow go man
but this ones is spits
You dont start no shit there will be no shit
You don't have enough posts to vote anyway.
uh i cant vote on this spit cause i aint got 100.. still thnx for votin n if i could vote here it would be for u because u atleast had punches other guy had none...
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