-Twisted- vs Pyro

[Rudy Ray Moore]

10-15 lines
30 mins
u no rules

[Ike Ill.]

checking in...... you drop first, Also No hate votes or dick ryding.....

honest votes please guys.

[Ike Ill.]

yo dawg 15 more minutes dont spit at like the last two minutes... that would suck ass lol.

[Ike Ill.]

Yo 10 minutes dont fucking no-show dawg!!!!

[Ike Ill.]

And...... you fail.

thanks for the bullshit dawg.

[Rudy Ray Moore]

Lets get this shit u got twisted straight who the best in this battle is up 4 debate
but its fate that ya name gone match the condition of ya face
see ya mind may be twisted, and ya rhymes realistic
but ya heart aint strong enough to take these ballistics
that’ll leave ya organs all mangled and ya intestines all tangled
or we could do all skool style and u could get straight strangled
or a plastic bag ova the head of dis fag tell his eyes dilate an its no need ta gag
or I could give u a clip and see if you could take the whole mag
no matter how u go in a black bag with a toe tag
or I just dissolve this basted in a bat of battery acid
and save his mother money on a burial casket

[Rudy Ray Moore]

sorry bout the 3 min time over told u i'm not a good typer

[Ike Ill.]

Look if I HANDED you a sledge hammer you still wouldn't be violent
Shut the fuck up, and I'll respect your right to remain silent.
Little pussy wouldn't be ill if you fucking coughed up blood
Elevate? You couldn't make it to the top if there was a flood.
Really your shit, I know *Downey bottles that are harder than that
You big? If you weighed more than Albert you still wouldnt be phat.
Have to be dim..you couldn't get bright on paper if you had a lamp
You Hard? Not even if you were Michael Jackson in an all boy camp.
Pyromaniac? You wouldn't touch the fire I spit if you fucking could
You wouldn't light shit up if you dragged your ass across the woods.**
"failures are the stepping stones to success" that shit can't be right
Because if it was true you'd be the best fuckin rapper on this site.
And it's aight if you wanna trip your record by trying to vs. pride...
'Cause no matter how you lose its always gonna end with "dick ryde".

and for those of yall who don't know:

*Downey is a fabric softener
** saying his "ass aint a match"


if you dont get it, dont vote.

[Southern Finest]

hit a link up in my sig yall
Pyro:

Lets get this shit u got twisted straight who the best in this battle is up 4 debate
but its fate that ya name gone match the condition of ya face
see ya mind may be twisted, and ya rhymes realistic
but ya heart aint strong enough to take these ballistics
that’ll leave ya organs all mangled and ya intestines all tangled
or we could do all skool style and u could get straight strangled
or a plastic bag ova the head of dis fag tell his eyes dilate an its no need ta gag
or I could give u a clip and see if you could take the whole mag
no matter how u go in a black bag with a toe tag
or I just dissolve this basted in a bat of battery acid
and save his mother money on a burial casket

Ok i cant comment on individual lines since they are all fuked up but ill comment on what i can understand.
Its an ok verse fuked to hell though on structure no real punchs i saw and wordplay was off a bit.

Faggot(i mean Twizted)

Look if I HANDED you a sledge hammer you still wouldn't be violent
Shut the fuck up, and I'll respect your right to remain silent.
Little pussy wouldn't be ill if you fucking coughed up blood
Elevate? You couldn't make it to the top if there was a flood.
Really your shit, I know *Downey bottles that are harder than that
You big? If you weighed more than Albert you still wouldnt be phat.
Have to be dim..you couldn't get bright on paper if you had a lamp
You Hard? Not even if you were Michael Jackson in an all boy camp.
Pyromaniac? You wouldn't touch the fire I spit if you fucking could
You wouldn't light shit up if you dragged your ass across the woods.**
"failures are the stepping stones to success" that shit can't be right
Because if it was true you'd be the best fuckin rapper on this site.
And it's aight if you wanna trip your record by trying to vs. pride...
'Cause no matter how you lose its always gonna end with "dick ryde".

you actually have structure but your still gay and i fucking hate you but i have to be honest and say who i thought won. anyway heres what i thought of your verse

You had punchs and you had rhymes and good wordplay. if anything you really didnt have to try much as pyro was really shit.

Vote/ Faggot aka Twizted

[Ike Ill.]

lmao.......... bitch go fuck yourself, im blacklisting you from every fucking battle in the future.

[Ike Ill.]

uppin for votes #2

[Ike Ill.]

More votes please kthx

[Black Samurai]

I Havee A Bigg Penissss

[Black Samurai]

i vote for twizteed cuzz hes twizteedddddd hes one crazzzy ass nggaa i sweaeaaaaaarr!!!! SUCK MY DICK PLEASEE I GOT A BIG PENISSS WHOA WHOA WHOA NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNIGGAAA O YA O YA OASDFSHG YAAAA

[Black Samurai]

so yeah.... here's what I think.

Twizted: good flow, good punches, good overall... "Pyromaniac? You wouldn't touch the fire I spit if you fucking could
You wouldn't light shit up if you dragged your ass across the woods.**" Nice..... his ass aint a match.. genius..... anyway 8/10

pyromaniac: okay punches... flow kinda was off... no hate but yours wasnt great...... 4/10

v/ - obvious to Twizted"