Open Mics
Holocaust Claimed My Life
The Snatching [HOF]
A Letter To God Ft Jay Walker
Through Gods Eyes
Suicidal Thoughts Ft Eddy
Blessed Upon [HOF]
230 In 30 Ft Johnny Six Feet
No Escape Ft Math0s
Death Before Dishonour Ft Deviate
3 Stages Of Life Ft Deviate and Kost
What Lies Beneath Ft Issue
Like Me Ft Brixton
Last edited by Violent.; December 31st, 2005 at 05:37 PM
It was straight man... u just tried to force multies a lil but it was still coo.U had a nice starter and finisher and u spitted about a hot topic good shit. STAY UP PLAYER
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Niceee man, Finally cleaned up ya structure...
Couple hot lines, Couple forced multis... But wuz sweet.
you should try rapping it on a beat before finishing your rhymes cuz i rapped it to a beat and i found it difficult to understand and follow , the rhymes itself was good but the topic kinda turned me off , not fit for a song , more of a poem. it was still pretty good though
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Its not made for a song. Its an open mic. herb
I liked that it was sweat, nice topic
well sorry if i didnt know , im new hear , give me a break if i thought i was a song , u need to calm down nigga
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Hey man your shit is sick!! You had a tight beginnin' and end I can see that you got a lot of talent . Stay Real Playa!! Lata!!
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Up. and stealth i wasnt even reactin, i was jus sayin, so stay outta ma thread and stop freepostin
Yo good story/topic
You gave imagery and explained it well.. Hidden talent yo, keep expressing yourself homie.
Anyway I agree with the first guy, ya did try to force multis but it was good none-the-less.
Good work Sylentz... Keep making 'em so I gotz something to read.
Sylentz you did a good job describing what happened with the Tsunami disaster. The breakdown of the piece into Before, During and After was unique and gave it a chance to change pace (Calm-Tense-Calm).
Rhyme was tight. I wasn't concerned with flow cos the topic was on point ... but if you must know, the flow was inconsistent.
Vivid use of imagery and if anything I guess you could have described the 20 foot wave a bit more (making it a character in its own right - its the meat of you piece).
Overall a good drop. I'll be looking out for mo. pz
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Man stealth is better than you for one thing. He was tryin to give you some fuckin advice you dumb motha fucka. You need to take a fuckin chill pill and calm yaself nigga, take someone thats better than you's advice.
Boe, dont get involved man, just leave it too them
I liked this, I liked the before - druing - after part, and the fact that you wrote something based on this, which Im sure a lot of people would think twice about writing about.
One thing I dont like which is really a shitty little thing is the capital letter at the start of every word, it makes it that less easy too read but Im just pickin at it.
Solid drop
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