The Melody

[Vikkie™]

chorus:
i kno im never home and
ur mom always invites other man
to hang out in her room
but ill be home real soon

verse1:

my tension is beyond its point...u need to realize
that i die everyday fightin for our dreams of a better life
ive seen ur tears but im hardly ever home long enough
to see how u really feel deep inside about daddys friend Smugg
well he helped us out of our drought in imperial beach slums
so we could be up on the surface and live in the I.B. Palms
he gave me a chance to be a real man..wit deep pockets
deep enough to make sure water is at home n we have sockets
see no one at ur will understand how you really became the Queen
others claim to be the one to run I.B. but ur mom fought fa her street
so i stopped by her house she asked me to come in n speak
about our future so i layed down n thought and thne u came in a dream..

chorusx2


verse2:

i never doubted the fact that u were the one
that could make me be calm and stop husslin
the block like i was the numbah runna of Cali
but then i was brought down by the demise of Keli
he was hit...and it brought me into a state of mind
where there was no God or people but sinister time..
to become the man of the moment and make everyone proud
to be a friend or relative to me and speak my name aloud
instead of ina whisper...like i knew u called me a thug
but everyday u said u loved me n gave me a kiss n a hug
that kept me goin so i put away the guilt and became who i am...
today like Dr.King said We are men not juss beast or darker ants
nothin to be described specifically but i promise to stay alive
and if ur listenin just know i will die for u and ull neva starve in my strive

chorusx3:




outro:Young I...ill always be by ur side even if i die tonight ur mom nor u will be unkept or mistreated because i have u in my soul n heart..i love you

[Mistral]

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

[Vikkie™]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=165526
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=165578

there ya go man sorry ill keep up next time

[Da Professor]

Life, It's an Earthquake, makes my body shake,
My mind quake in fear,
The echoes from the within my heart ,
draw ever near,
Things like this make our families corrupted,
Intervals of time, like life interrupted,
Sometimes Life at the beggining leads to a new end,
What you get is not what you intend,
It's a game of chance, it's a game of life,
Start a family, with a few kids and a wife,
Take that away and there's nothing left,
Sometimes the easiest isn't the best,
Play the game until your last breath,
Live your life until your death.

It's short,but how is it!!!!

[LA4Lyfe]

dat was sick, you put ur words together real nice
tribute songs are alwayz touchin, im bout ta cry right now, naw
im jus kiddin
real good dogg, keep it up

[Vikkie™]

thanks La and Hot Sizzle that was nice i saw what u were doin if u want you make ur lines longer so you can express more feeling...
uppin for feed