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    "Metal Mulisha" ft. Ideph


    [[Intro]]
    March 23, 2004: 9:00 PM On Hott 93.7 Live Radio Show

    Buc Star (Dj): Yo Yo Yooo, Its Ya Boy Buc Keeping It Hot In CT... Today For Ya Enterainment Pleaser We Got None Other Then Ya Boy... Abstrakt!!!
    Abstrakt: Ayooo, Whaddup Fam... Its Ya Boy 860 Repping Back To My Home... CT One Love.
    Buc Star:Ya Ya Yeeeeah, Thats Right Never Forget The Home Town. So Wha-Whadup, You Gone Spit For Us Or Whaaaaat Man???.
    Abstrakt:Haha Of Cooourse No Worries I Got This... Gimmy A Beat I'll Tear It Up Before We Get Into The Interviews.
    Buc Star:Aiight Here Ya Go, Sawl You Play Boy.
    Abstrakt:Aaaw Shit, Straight Beat I Got This...
    What, What... Ayo,
    Abstrakt One Mic One Track To Lite Blaze To Suns Path...
    Coincide The Broke Glass My Life Whole In Tact? Ya Never Was That...
    Strickly Av's Beef Weed Tounge Quick When I Stand Like Deph On His Knees...
    So Many Fake And These Street Take To Kids Like Him, Pleeeeeease...
    Realest Ever Since 03, Know Me, Whole Preach...
    Like My Words Demo Faggots The Way I Ride I.D...
    Buc Star:Ooooooh Shit, Oh Mayn Abby Got It Go Off Now. Ayo So Who's Ideph? Fill Us In Whats Goin Down Homie?
    Abstrakt:Haha Was Waiting For That One...
    __________________________________________________ ___________

    May 10, 2004: 8:30 PM On 1075 WGCI

    Doug(DJ):aight you listen to 1075 WGCI..the hottest for hiphop and R&B,we got the hottest artist this year,Indeph in the building wassup
    Indeph:whats good Doug..waddup Chi-Town,waddup TC
    Doug:I'm coo man,but it don't seem too good with you,I hear you and Ab got some shit goin on,is it all rap or do you feel hatred for the dude
    Indeph:that nigga a bitch..go to barbershops for panty lining..
    skateboarders aren't rappers..a baords the only way abby grinding
    Doug:OOOOOOO..Indeph getting on the flow now..
    Indeph:you already in it abby..we cant settle now..
    cuz even beefing with you if bringing my level down
    fuck you..fuck your life..I hope you die..eyes open and all
    This not wax..I'ma crush you faggot..I'm focused and all.
    I'm out this shit

    Regular Text = Abstrakt
    Bold Brown Text = Indeph

    [[Verse One]]
    War Of Word Strechin Verse To Girth Of More...
    Weapons In Store Stressing Yet In Steps For Support...
    Under Oath Now My Brothers Mutter Anthems Of Coast Out...
    Prevoked Towns To Cities In These Sounds We Stand To Hold Down...
    Marching with support signs..to nails in baseball bats..and city's nation backed
    with bulls jersey's,and red bandanas..
    wrapped around there wrist..with fuck Conneticit Bannas..Chanting for there leader..
    recording the event with digital cameras

    In Fallow In Rage With All Of The Wethered Community Cuts...
    Like Imunity Up Fucked Is Not A Stage We'll Alow, Opportunity's Up...
    Days Ours For Taking Our Pacients Ageing To Scars...
    Art Making Our Greatest Have Tastes For Layin Crews Chared...
    both sides listen to there leaders lyrics..
    for motivation..ready for prison neither fearin..any of the other cases..left side chants Indeph,right side yells abstract..
    while both leaders just laugh at it..like what are they mad at


    [[Chorus]]
    New Head Hit The Studio Split Led To A Name Unknown...
    Rise Threw Ranks As Infalls The Same Unknown...
    Now Its Coastal, Chi-Town To War With All-a CT...
    Toy Soldiers On Wax As Heat Lets The Metal Mulisha Breath Free...

    [[Verse Two]]
    Final Strech Breath Hard Ech My Side Full Of Rep...
    Enemies Eyes Full Of Spark Our Hearts Sun The Stress...
    Ready, Steady Let Me Speak Final Words Rally The Birth...
    Give Way To Agressions Levy Ease The Burn n Gladly Gun First...
    mele weapons release..guns drawn..from handguns..cannons..
    as a moment of silence.surprises by.shots fired at random
    those hiding under cars..as those shoot the gas pump..
    both hesitate..sure silece..as neithr side stands up

    Just Then I See Deph Run As I Flea Left To Cetch Up...
    Speed Up n Jump, My Arms Around His Knees As I Get Struck...
    surprises and baffled..confused as I adjust,and I see stract
    got one hit to his jawbone..quickly intensly he hit me back

    Caught Him Wita Right My Left Off, Missed The Strike, "SHIT!"...
    Legs Tripped As I Lay, Deph Above As Blood Sprays From Tite Hits...
    take advantage of his mistake..throw my kicks hard to his face..
    slips of his lips..and I trip..we both down..with our fists made


    [[Chorus]]
    New Head Hit The Studio Split Led To A Name Unknown...
    Rise Threw Ranks As Infalls The Same Unknown...
    Now Its Coastal, Chi-Town To War With All-a CT...
    Toy Soldiers On Wax As Heat Lets The Metal Mulisha Breath Free...

    [[Verse Three]]
    Something Happend When Swinging,Scrapping, Attackin I Lost Red...
    Saw Clear Head Straight Paused n Saw This Action Was Not Best...
    The People That Suffered Evils Pasted They Didnt Even See Who They Smothered...
    All For Me Now I See Another Task Creep Hold, Stop This, Let Music Play Loves Clove...
    My compation for the fans and there situation..its my fault
    what kind of example I'm sending when even I faught?..to think people died..all there feeble lives..this is wrong
    and while it was goin on I didn't even mind..
    I didn't even try

    The Fuck Is This Doing? I Gotta Get Up, Moving, Stop All This Fueding...
    My FANS! Shit, They're Falling Got Shot This All Just Such Shit, What Am I Doing...
    Stagger Up Grab The Cuff Of The First Man I See n Get Battered By Bats...
    NO ONE HEARS ME! FUCK! My God! A Shot Rings As Bullits Shattered My Grasp...
    I run outside,my awarness is all lost..one of my shoes falls off..to call off the war..that we all caused..I stand on a station waggen..yelling to save the damage..but bad aimed just happened..I get shot to the pavement rationed..


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    It's a good read but.....If this is what a good rhyme look like I will never be good because I don't like the structure at all and the rhye scheme was too nas-ish( a fuckload of nouns and no sentences)


    I guess it all comes down to what the emcee like before he decides what good is. We all have a different opinion of good and to me this rhyme was not that exactly. I am a huge J.R writer fan or royce da 5.9 fan ya know
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    I've Heard I Write Like Nas Alot...
    Ya, Its Prolly Actually A Coast Thing...
    By The Sounds Of It You're All About West Coast...
    Im From The East And Love That Style Of Rhyming...
    Na Actually, West Has Tech Rap Aswell Though...
    I Dunno, Its Just All Personal...
    Thanks For The Feedback...
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    Upping For More Responses...
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    peoples tries 2 fade me.. HyaLine's Avatar
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    i liked the scheme actually, i like how it flowed, love the back and forth

    like the whole concept in general

    nice multis, overall just everything seemed to fall into place

    real crazy story
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    Aesthetic Values.
    If you don't know what it means, Fuck You.

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    kk, i gotta disagree w/ carlos prolly cuz im also from tha east
    good flo, as alwayz, rhyme scheme wuz good as wuz tha vocab
    jus keep writin.......n we need 2 get a topic 4 our collab as well
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    Sup fam? Yeah, I read this once before.

    Att :: Okay, everything about your works are sick. EVERYTHING. Flow, lyrics, everything.

    Deph :: I don't like your structure, it's hard to tell where the rhyming words were, but the lyrics were hott.

    Best part of the whole OM was the hook. That was mad hott.

    Keep up fam.

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    im feelin the shit definitly.... u r similar to nas.... u came pretty tight on this i was feel the lyrics definitly, differently, i like how u was comin at it..... ya'll did this on radio???????? flow seems to be solid as rocks for you.... shit was tight like me gal pussy ya know..
    the next cat came pretty hard too, it seems like he comes a fare bit faster then u do.... Im guessing like BTNH something likwe that... flow was solid... lyrics was felt too..

    overall shit was a dope peice fo realzz god looks dogg

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    wow, a really great collaboration, do you guys know each other?
    like in real life, cuz each line flowed perfectly off the line before it
    Abstract, your flow is crazy, way too good, to be a text head lol.
    Deph, your part was real good, shit flowed nice, everything on point
    nothing really flawless bout this piece...
    hope tos ee some more from ya guys, peeacceee

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    Yeh, i was feeling this...

    You both came strong, and indeph's verse was nice not bcoz u have 2 look for the rhymes, its just the fact if you say it... They're ther

    Nice drop

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    Thanks Alot Everyone...
    And Na I Dont Really No Him, We're Just Tite From Rv...
    We Were Both Known As Two Of The Best O.M. Writers...
    So We Started Writing Collabs Together...

    And That Wasnt A Real Radio Thing...
    I Wanted To Put It In There To Make The Story Better...
    Upping For More Feedback...
    .One.
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    If the radio thing wasnt real man, you got some wicked imagination jus to think of that, nice work

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    Peeps Will Bitch Of The Structure But They Forget There Is No Guidline For How A Structure Has To Be I Think Everything Came Nice On This Everything Was Perfectly Placed And Well Laced
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    Yo this was crazy hot!!!The whole radio station thing was Hotttttt!!!!like your imagination dogg...and you guys verses came really nice every line was hot...good collab peeps...be nice to see another one from u two...keep it up

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    i was feelin this. definately some nice multi's goin on. and i didn't have many problems with the overall structure, but i did think one or two lines were overstretched in the beginning. but it didn't really take away from the piece, cuz i'm assuming if you spit it as you writ it, it would sound nice, i'm prolly just not reading that line right. so overall at least an 8/10. also the text was too small, even if it's gonna make a long as post leave the default text, it's easier to read dawg. but be easy, nice drop. and hit my shit up:
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=167281

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