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    BTK throws heartfelt props...(much love!)

    From athletes to killers, rappers to actors…
    Singers and swingers, instigators of disaster.
    My admiration varies, the reasons all my own…
    It’s like a torch I carry; the respect is to my bones.
    So it’ll be known, Edward Kemper was hardcore…
    And his mom got the point…
    ............When he used her head as a dartboard.
    See, he killed college girls in a serial way too…
    But what’s a 6’9” henpecked mama’s boy to do?
    Cept lash out at the world; give it a wound like Nicole got…
    And then give justice a hurl, like Simpson and Pol Pot.
    A lone shot is said to have killed JFK in Dallas…
    But he was hung out to dry like Ron Jeremy’s phallus.
    Neither Oswald nor Ron, really ever looked the part…
    And though Lee needed help, they both perfected their art.
    But see, Lee was put down, bullets from Jack Ruby…
    While Ron’s still on the mound…
    .......................And occasionally between boobies.
    And when it comes to movies, the elite and good…
    I kinda tend to worship the one and only Eastwood.
    Dirty as Callahan, gunning as No Name or Munney…
    Coaching Baby’s worth millions or with an ape actin funny.
    Clint’s The Man twice over; shit…even three or four…
    So I know I’ll cry when he dies and can’t make films anymore.
    Then there’s the whore, the one never respected…
    I can’t say I did either, except as a kid needing sex ed.
    Then she’s a godsend, an angel willing to do it all…
    A temporary friend…
    .............Who’ll leave you chilling with empty balls.
    And curtain calls, I was sad to see em come from T…
    Cuz that Ice cold rapper is the one who inspired me.
    Now on TV, he moved on as horizons broadened…
    But when I recall his raps, I recall the most hardened.
    I’m starvin for more metal; I need an icon to grow…
    Into another Prince of Darkness…
    ..........................Cuz mine’s doing a reality show.
    But I swear, if you’d cared, about rock n roll back then…
    You’d wish for another Ozzy to be born and sing again.
    And when I need reminding, about what courage is…
    One man stands defining, always giving assurances.
    I call that man The Greatest, in and out of sport…
    And I was always so elated when he rhymed his retorts.
    Or stood up in court, refusing to kill for country…
    Bravely facing prison and a loss of career and money.
    But age took over and the ring passed him by…
    Slowing the greatest showman as Parkinson’s arrived.
    Shaking my strength’s foundation, forcing vulnerability…
    But he feels no lamentation, golden years supply tranquility.
    He’s what I wanted to be, my man, Muhammad Ali…
    Forever floating like a butterfly and stinging like a bee.
    He’d be the man I most admire, sitting above all others…
    The only one I’d call Dad, the rest are more like brothers.
    Strange but true, my admiration kinda scatters…
    From evil to good….and to only me this matters.

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    Gimme a bit...

    I'm kinda drained from this...

    I promise I'll edit those links, Credz...don't close this.

    Lemme recover, thanks.

    Peace

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    Damn, this was fucken dope man!!! I can really relate and appreciate this fucken verse. Great shit BTK, everything was solid in this. I'm kind of drained just from reading it, much props dog, you nailed it! Awesome shit here indeed!

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    Damn this was a crazy piece and I liked it no doubt. It had a crazy feel to it and i think thats what you were going for. But you did a nice job and it was real good.

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    Ill peice dog, long, but good. likes the wordplay, nothing really to criticize..just nice.
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    Return the favor and upp my flow reversion

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    wow, that's really al I have to say.
    I'm just going to nominate this.
    peep my piece too, even though,
    I didnt give u any indepth feedbacl
    like I normally do, Im just stunned.
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=169018

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    < Bows to you nice drop Legendary Nomination..........
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    Teach me to be you. What can I say. This was flawless. Nothing bad about it at all. You've got my vote, legendary piece. Keep doin your thing man.
    pz

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    Last edited by Born To Kill; February 7th, 2005 at 09:49 AM

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    Indeed.. ill piece, nothing else much to say, you came strong in all directions and didn't hesitate to say shit, I like that in a writer.

    Took a lot of name's and shots.. but hey, do what you got to do.

    There's nothing else to be said here, dope piece BTK.. *goes to nominate when Copy/Paste stops fucking up*

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    I know it's long...

    But come on! I threw well...

    READ IT!

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    No doubt that there content. The flow was good and it wasn't hard to read but towards the end I was just like readin just to finish it off oppose to tryin to get something out of it. Probably just to long or something...either way towards the end the flow kinda disappeared. Wheather it was just weak or to long either way the end wasn't that likeable. You started off strong though and it kept getting better till you hit the shit about Ozzy Osbourne.

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    Thanks for that critique...

    Yeah, I know it was a bit too long.

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    i was really feeling this

    the wording was smoothly done & the flow was butta, the content was deep but it kinda dragged near the end, could've been more effective if a few lines had been cut out

    but yeah

    good shit b

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    yeah this one was really a good piece i like your long pieces BTK i like the style and flow you bring to the piece i sometimes forget your even flowing it it just sounds like a story. I really did like this piece alot. The emotion you brouhg tin this piece also made it shine stay up can you please peep mine also its called would you die for me an old piece that i re did i think you peeped the first time in poetry section i posted it again but ive changed it alot though thanks

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