10-16 lines
due tonight
checking in
WhiteNoise
WizE 1
10-16 lines
due tonight
checking in
yo bro whos spittin first?????????????????????????
ok ill spit first bro
yo..........
this fool wants to battle me, surely this verse will provide me with an easy vitory,
he calls himself the Wize 1,
u couldn't get a girl unless u buy one,
i haven't even seen ur rhymes yet,
but mine r better, im a newb, but i spit like a vet,
i use my rhymes as a $100,000 bet,
and if u used urs u'd probly end up in debt,
this set will lave u without breath,
then they'll read urs, and it will lead them to death,
this is my chance to leave my mark,
and i did i ripped u appart like a great white shark....
where u at bro??????? i forgot about this and saw it and wrote mine in a rush.....u said it was due by last night and its not in............
u wack as a bitch dude
keystyle
verbally lyrically i'll dis order ur keyz.. seriously u gotta BE a jokin commin at me..
i aint even gotta drop a whole 16 to kill you, cuz to be honest.. not one of theze muhfucaz feel you
1st of all u wack,twisted, plained out simple abc-ish with ur flow
too slow to comprehend and go so im out
uppin............................................. come on people vote......
White noise got this because the other guy was just wack period...He put more effort than the other character and overrall has had previously better flow than the other...
Vote: WHITENOISE
whitenoise-verse was better your punches were decent,flow decent,strucure decent,personals none 4/10
wize-punches none,flow none,personals none,strcuture decent overall 1/10
v-whitenoise
Life Is 10% What Happens To You;
90% How You React To It.
uppin............................................. ....
white noise= effort, jokes, good structure, narrative imagery, topic focus, more lines, more punches, more points
wize= no effort, short rhyme, about 2 and a half punches,
both of yall were ok but whitenoise was good so
VOTE=whitenoise
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uppin............................................. ..
White, you had more and better structure also you had better punches
V/White Noise
lets get this thing closed...its been goin on for days..............
Uppin Again And Again And Again...................
i need some damn votes people its takin forever just to finnish this battle...........
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