Lowlife vs RAID-R

[lowlife]

10-12 lines
no crew
no d/r
no hate
no bite
no feed
blind spit
soon as u can

[lowlife]

After i KO this fool hopefully he might learn something
that im what he should aim to be..an that hes just nothing
just a stepping stone..a bitch who came to the wrong place
Should shift this piece of shit...cus hes jus wasting space
bitch wont even check in..you can see the lack of respect
jus a Punk..with no name..only known for gettin wrecked
Leave this bitch half dead..bitch pull yerself together
cus ur a joke..with a silly name..an thats the first error
go read the help forums its all there..all the Do's and Donts
dont self glorifie..an dont D/r....too late the 2nd ones already broke

[Raid-R]

U cant KO shit ,and Im not in the wrong place
Ur just to stupid to notice, U set at the wrong pace
Can't even tie ur shoe own lace, and ur a lazy eye
Can't even aim a punch at my face, And I dont respect mules
This bitch needs Mr. T on him, caz I pitty the fool
This cracker aint cool hes just a big fat joke
U buy 25 cent bubble gum and u already broke
This guy aint famous so why does he gloat
im a cut this guy up with the motor on the back of my boat
Dr. will then tell him he wont be able to move no parts of his body
This guy now cant move and stinks, hes the equivalent shit in the potty
And I will use the 11 and 12 for the fucken bonus
Caz from 1 through 10 ,I came and already own this

[Raid-R]

Checking in............sorry I fell asleep

[Garth Elgar]

damn raid-r thats different from what ive heard before from you...nice....
good structure...
ummm low life, you really need to work on your punches man, and just plain out rhyme scheme....

v/Raid-R

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[street_play]

^^agreed^^

not the usual shit i see from you raid..this was somethin better...both ya need to work on ya punchlines though try usin more multi's metaphors n personals...so ima have to v/ raid on this one

v/raid

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[tjesus]

good battle even grounds...ill give this battle to raid r for punches,even tho low life had good structure,n spittin first,tho raid rz come back just put him in front..
v/raid r

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[lowlife]

ur joking right this bitch was feeding off my verse like a leech?....

[lowlife]

over the line limit spit too late an those people d/r u all the time

[Born To Kill]

Don't think I'm not seeing the pattern develop, you guys...

Stop it.

[Ion Metatron]

After i KO this fool hopefully he might learn something
that im what he should aim to be..an that hes just nothing
Ehhh... You can come up wit a better diss then saying "your nothing"
just a stepping stone..a bitch who came to the wrong place
Should shift this piece of shit...cus hes jus wasting space
Not bad.. nice Keyboard flip
bitch wont even check in..you can see the lack of respect
jus a Punk..with no name..only known for gettin wrecked
*sigh* common son, you can do better
Leave this bitch half dead..bitch pull yerself together
cus ur a joke..with a silly name..an thats the first error
ok I guess..
go read the help forums its all there..all the Do's and Donts
dont self glorifie..an dont D/r....too late the 2nd ones already broke
What?

U cant KO shit ,and Im not in the wrong place
Ur just to stupid to notice, U set at the wrong pace
Ehh..
Can't even tie ur shoe own lace, and ur a lazy eye
Missed one?
Can't even aim a punch at my face, And I dont respect mules
This bitch needs Mr. T on him, caz I pitty the fool
lol.. this was weak but I loved mr T as a kid lol
This cracker aint cool hes just a big fat joke
U buy 25 cent bubble gum and u already broke
Bad "poor" concept..
This guy aint famous so why does he gloat
im a cut this guy up with the motor on the back of my boat
What boat?
Dr. will then tell him he wont be able to move no parts of his body
This guy now cant move and stinks, hes the equivalent shit in the potty
Bad flow & bad pucnh concept.. never do a Poop line again
And I will use the 11 and 12 for the fucken bonus
Caz from 1 through 10 ,I came and already own this
Never close with a Brag line unless it's REALLY REALLY Good & you know you owned your opponent

This wasn't much of an Impressive battle fellas.. niether had any "Great" Quotables or Highlights.. Low life had this one line:

just a stepping stone..a bitch who came to the wrong place
Should shift this piece of shit...cus hes jus wasting space- Low life

& Raid had this one I personally liked but other might not feel as much:

Can't even aim a punch at my face, And I dont respect mules
This bitch needs Mr. T on him, caz I pitty the fool-Raid


Both of you need to AIM me if your Trying to get your Multi's on point cause niether of you really blew the other out.. I read this battle over about 3-4 time not counting when I quoted the verses for judgement & it was more of a matter of who came less weak & that person was low life.. Sure he had a wack closer but his flow rarly fell off & his Space/Shift line was better then each & every line Raid dropped.

Vote= Low life

Raid R, You need to update your ability to deliver quality lines other then poop lines & Ryhmes like boat, broke, joke.. those are really simple.. you seem to have a grasp on Developing concepts but the concepts you come up with aren't good at all.. try insulting you opponents sigg, name & custom title to get more bang per line

Keep Elevating tho Dunny's


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[lowlife]

uppin

[Raid-R]

Ok hmmm 3 people liked my spit and I still have zero votes

Arent they suppose to vote on the poll

[lowlife]

they got dqed
uppin

[lowlife]

uppin