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    Mike Tyson raps from the heart...

    Mike Tyson says......

    I used to be feared, and females said a hottie...
    Back when life was in gear and I used to be somebody.
    Now I'm rotting, been dead but still breathing...
    Cuz wins started stopping, and boldly began retreating.
    Lately I've been left senseless, stumbling for balance...
    My defense proven defenseless as they attack with malice.
    The Borealis is what I'm seeing, stargazing a bunch...
    But not the ones at ringside, these are from his punch.
    That's why I'm hunched, head's no longer high...
    Cuz I feel economy's crunch, and it often makes me cry.
    Considering the millions I used to earn a night...
    For filling pavillions everytime I stepped to fight.
    Fury's what I used to abuse and contuse with...
    But anger's confused and subdued when ya get rich.
    It gets thick, hard to see through, so reasons get blurry...
    And since I felt bulletproof, training ended in a hurry.
    Seems once I hit thirty, losses formed a foundation...
    Only once in my twenties did I face that devastation.
    I can't deny 4 failures in a single decade, can I?
    They've marked me forever as a target in a man's eye.
    If I could only turn back time and relive my prime...
    I'd try and cherish it more and be glad it's mine.
    I'd train harder than before and talk ten times less...
    About Razor Ruddock's lips and that Lewis' kid mess.
    I'd have never married Robin, or fucked that other bitch...
    Would've never let King come mobbin, or ever had a prison stint.
    I'd have never copped a 2nd loss or bitten ears for a third...
    Lewis would have fallen and Williams'd still be unheard.
    But that's not reality, fantasy time must end...
    I must face my own mortality, and my lack of friends.
    No romance without finance, so I'll never marry again...
    This is how this boxer lives cuz he took life on the chin.

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    Last edited by Born To Kill; February 25th, 2005 at 05:00 PM

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    lol...Nice drop man. Ill pieice well written. I lmao. Thought it was a good story/topic. Funny how dude fell off...I think he has another fight comin up soon. Anyway nice. Always enjoy reading your stuff. Uppin ur next piece. U get a chance check out one of the drops in my sig. Would enjoy getting some feedback from an experienced writer.

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    I liked this shit.....Born still got it...nice flow....humorous concept...nice content...nice wording...the usual..i was feeling it..and it's shit he needs to say...for real......i miss mike..heh..
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    Born...nice piece... its very hard to criticize this. Usually on your pieces, whether i like it or not depends on whether i liked the topic or not...you seem to be that kind of writer... you will do any topic justice, but if i have no prior knowledge of the topic it doesnt make sense to me. in this case, I liked it.. great job..nothing more to say.

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    Ill Is All I Must Say..

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    nice vocab...
    decent drop....
    stayed on topic....
    its flowed... overall nice peace...

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    Bumpity...

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    Nicely written homeboi...Keep more of it cumin on the real...That was an ill drop so much respect

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    Really good piece, definatly different

    Good topic and sorta autobiographical (dont think I got that word right). Anyway, flow and everythin else was really good as usual....keep goin

    Can ya hit this up please:

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    Hey dude, it's been awhile!

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    man i really felt this nice piece

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    My Bad I just had to comment and bring it back for everyone to see THAT SHIT WAS FIRE

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    i liked it was real funny and nice lyrics keep writing.

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    Re: Mike Tyson raps from the heart...

    cool piece i liked this, funny content good lyrics i really like the perspective you went for!
    Last edited by luke illestry; October 14th, 2009 at 06:26 AM

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