Yep 10-12 lines due in a half hour *yawns*
WhatTheFuck
...Keystyle...
Yep 10-12 lines due in a half hour *yawns*
Artificial Intelligence
Check............................................. .............
Artificial Intelligence
yo...bitch you think you a great MC this is only tha start of ma killing spree gimmie tha spot now N juss flea this battles gotta lock and i have the "key" i kno everythin this bitch could say against me...yea i am a newbie....no shit g but ima fuck you up like i did to "ByTheTree" i didnt juss call you out i called out three cause i could take you all out that i guarantee juss quit and leave this thread you wont come out alive but dead...i kno cause thats what "god" said to beat you bitch its more lika duty notta wish... you couldnt win this battle if it got served to you ona dish you rhymes juss fucken stink worse than raw fish i kno you wish...this wasnt for tha elite list yo shitty rhymes didnt kno they could exist its horrble yo wack ass bout to get back smaked...cause you aint nuttthin but sum one to laugh at youza class fag...but your lyrics are rap whack face fact that you cant back that.
Out.
LOL, at this kid, i dont know where to begin
Kid so dumb, he drops his verse before he even checks in
You have alot to work on,but ill bang ur head till it ruptures
Even ur usernames sayin WhatTheFuck...is up wit ur structure
I coulda sworn this was a battle, guess were in English today
Cause this kid jus dropped fire...in the form of a class essay
what the fuck are u here for, ull never be good on any occasion
When u joined u added a +1..................to the herb population
Im done clownin this fool, so now ill proceed to smack the whore
But his flow is groundbreaking.....cuz no ones came that wack before
Artificial Intelligence
HAHA THIS LINE MERKED HIM..."LOL, at this kid, i dont know where to begin
Kid so dumb, he drops his verse before he even checks in" THATS A CLASSIC RIGHT THERE....ALSO HERES WHAT I HAVE 2 SAY.....whatthefuck...NOW IM ASKIN U WHAT THE FUCK WAS THAT? i mean for a herb not bad...but Key just rapped ur ass...the thing is his punches were personal and his flow and structure were on point....he made me laugh thats what battles suppose 2 do not always bout killin and shit...THAT WAS GOOD if i was a biter id bite from key cause his shit is simple and its easy read and understandable...alot of kats try 2 use words they cant even pronounce so they cant use it in a sentance to fuckin MAKE A PUNCH LINE...key good job...
CHECK THIS BATTLE OUT IF U GET TIME...VOTE HONEST...OR ELSE...
GANGSTA NATION VS DYMOINK
OR
GANGSTA NATION VS WICKED
ITS IN FRONT LINES RIIIIIIGHT NOW.......
battle was ight "wat da fuck" had a lil sumthin but dats word lik key say it lik u wrote a essay wtf could hav had harder punches
key had a ight flow n harder punchez he attacked wtf defended
if i could vote it wood b key v/key 1
Up................................................ .......
Artificial Intelligence
You have alot to work on,but ill bang ur head till it ruptures
Even ur usernames sayin WhatTheFuck...is up wit ur structure
what the fuck are u here for, ull never be good on any occasion
When u joined u added a +1..................to the herb population
vs.
nothing.
eh, one sided battle really.
WhatTheFuck's verse was sloppy with structure and flow, lacked punches and witty concepts.. really weak overall, and nothing that stands out.. sorry.
Key's verse was decent, he didn't really try .. but he didn't need to. A couple alright punches and decent concepts.. much better structure and flow.. just a better verse overall.
v/ ...Keystyles...
Please return the favor here:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=173579
Been a real one.
Dammit, sorry for posting twice.. I left the link to Key's other battle with Gucci^.. lol.
Here:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=175231
Thanks.. peace.
Been a real one.
yea, good game.
Key wins.
You have alot to work on,but ill bang ur head till it ruptures
Even ur usernames sayin WhatTheFuck...is up wit ur structure
vs
alot of nothing.
Wtf... you need to learn how to battle before tryin to get on the elite list.
& key, lol... you had some good ideas, poorly put into punches. but u got
this.
well people as an official voter i'll will post what i think honestly and in depth iight
WTF:i really can't say anything about you cuz your verse was not even average you were jus all ova the place and i couldnt really pick up on anything that was hot cuz there really wasnt nothing your stucture was off like a muthafucka cuz you made it seem like you had lines start'n in lines the rhyme scheme was iight wasnt nothing to brag about ya kno there were very weak punches in ya verse well honestly ya verse was garbage you really need to elevate and change that you could've did better and im sure you will next time.........hopefully
Key:you had a good opener, bodied verse , and a good closer you really didnt have to come hard 4real althoh you came alot harder then your opponent a very well elevated verse with a good 2-2-2-2 line structure and thats what gave you a good rhyme scheme you pretty much had a personal or a punch in every line or two to some it all up it really was a waste of you time it was sort of a mix matched battle......
v/goes to Mr.Key
Where the fuck was I fore they found me?
Floatn in a meadow, dragonflies all around me
Seeded in a ghetto, smokin cigarellos
Stress oceans try to drown me
Walking on water like when Christ did, glidin
Mic in my plam like the trident in the hand of Poseidon
lmao, sorry for posting again... everybody forgot to poll so far, including myself until just now.
damn, that sucks man.. POLL YOUR VOTES IF YOU VOTED!
lol, holla.
Been a real one.
what the fuck:
weak punches, horrible structure and flow. elevate a lot on that.
Mr. Key:
weak punches, yet they were connected. good flow aand structure.
i can tell u didn't try on this verse, don't worry, i don't think u suck.
v/Key one sided
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Celestial
{whatthefuck}
ur structure wack, rhymes wack, punches wack, thats about it for you, elevate dawg, no beef
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{mr.key}
u had ok lines, burned him in a couple of um.....more like all of them,
this one i liked- "You have alot to work on,but ill bang ur head till it ruptures
Even ur usernames sayin WhatTheFuck...is up wit ur structure"
but if whatthefuck was good then we'd have a real battle, mr.key u took it easy in my case..
vote/mr.key
LOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!
Hit this, will ya...A battle...
You have alot to work on,but ill bang ur head till it ruptures
Even ur usernames sayin WhatTheFuck...is up wit ur structure
I coulda sworn this was a battle, guess were in English today
Cause this kid jus dropped fire...in the form of a class essay
Im done clownin this fool, so now ill proceed to smack the whore
But his flow is groundbreaking.....cuz no ones came that wack before
VS.
That line where he bit from Em...the "I know everything he'll say against me" one. Yeah, that one...that bitten line was the best it got...seriously...no fuckin shit.
Key with ease.
Peace
Last edited by Born To Kill; March 4th, 2005 at 05:27 PM
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