Twni vs. Twixn

[Twin]

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I'll spit first

[Twin]

Ima destroy you it's your fate...I gotta sacrafice you for..gods sake....
So i'll BOX you up...just IN CASE..cause i took you name and made it great(twin-twixn)....

So i'll make you no...mo-sp-aeking*...like you culture....
So take it this way dude..i'll make like an m16..and assult ya**...

make him die of OVERDOSE and im not talkin.....not PILLS....
Cause when i spit it like maximum strength twin...cause my spits are ILL...

Wanna dont risk-it..if wanna get merk get line heres ya ticket....
Cause the only time you win against me....is if we were playin cricket***....

my hot shit melts ya frozen lines....You the casheier so take the DIMES/
my punches put your lights out like your a store and it's ~closin time~/




*His user title says "last of the mohicans"
**M16=assult rifle
***His friend "DeMiurgiC" told me he plays cricket

[Swift Death]

lets battle you talk so much shit about and cant back it up...wats wrong now?

Nothings wrong, n’ even if I talked and out came shit…
It would still be enough to stomp your weak spit
Gave this kid a chance to prove he’s above sub par…
And he coulden’t even unravel one dope bar…
Twin seeked out elevation but that trip quickly ended
He Put one foot on the ladder…
And it actually got offended
honestly kid you where threw before you posted it’s a shame
set up the battle and you miss spelt your own fucking name
so you could say this is the end of the rope…
cause compare twin to twix
and the result... half as dope

[Swift Death]

lol i dont play cricket you fucking cracker... uppin..

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[Twin]

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twin:
your verse was ass, nothign special about it some weak punchlines no creativty what so ever in it..im just not feeling the verse you had, the stucutre made my eyes bleed the vocab was weak, i just wasnt feeling it at all yo. really work on your punchlines more ight. but keep doin ya thang you'll get the hang of rap ight pz

twixn
way bettter verse by far the punches were hella dope, nice stucutre, some nice creativty, nice personals, i was feeling ya drop. keep doin ya thing, ight. this was a 1 man battle by far twixn you got this dog. peace

RTF in my battle with DVL links in the sig. pz

[>Inertia>]

Not a good battle.

First kid dropped horribly. Stretched as fuck lines, shitty concepts..nothing was hitting, and a horrible structure.

Twixn. didn't drop hard either, but he didn't need to in order to win this battle. At least his punches were hitting, even though they were rather weak.

/v Twixn, easily.

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[Swift Death]

last up.................................... drop links.

[Spoken Deity]

twixn is my favorite guy to read on RB by far
BUT
this is not a neutral vote
TWIN, you got merked
you had some good attempts like opener
but the shit that twixn put out was a lot better
the LADDER and the OFFENDED part was kind of gay
but SUB PAR and NOT BEING ABLE TO DROPE ONE GOOD BAR
was pretty damn funny to me... not a lot of compatition if you ask me
V/TWIXN
for better punches, less whack

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[Twin]

hhhhhhhhuuuuuuuuuuhhhhhhhh......do i smell dickriders?

[Travisty]

twin...


Ima destroy you it's your fate...I gotta sacrafice you for..gods sake....
So i'll BOX you up...just IN CASE..cause i took you name and made it great(twin-twixn)....
self glory naw dude
So i'll make you no...mo-sp-aeking*...like you culture....
So take it this way dude..i'll make like an m16..and assult ya**...
weak
make him die of OVERDOSE and im not talkin.....not PILLS....
Cause when i spit it like maximum strength twin...cause my spits are ILL...
no
Wanna dont risk-it..if wanna get merk get line heres ya ticket....
Cause the only time you win against me....is if we were playin cricket***....
so ur sayin he could beat u in something
my hot shit melts ya frozen lines....You the casheier so take the DIMES/
my punches put your lights out like your a store and it's ~closin time~/
everyones shit is hot....literellay..shit
u suck



twixn.....
Nothings wrong, n’ even if I talked and out came shit…
It would still be enough to stomp your weak spit
iight opener
Gave this kid a chance to prove he’s above sub par…
And he coulden’t even unravel one dope bar…
lol
Twin seeked out elevation but that trip quickly ended
He Put one foot on the ladder…
And it actually got offended
meh, not feelin the last part of the second line
honestly kid you where threw before you posted it’s a shame
set up the battle and you miss spelt your own fucking name
HAHAHA, kinda played but it was funny
so you could say this is the end of the rope…
cause compare twin to twix
and the result... half as dope
iight closer

easy v/ twixn

[DaTrusHurtz]

Twin - Not feeling your verse man. Lots of attempts to be createive and use wordplay so that's good, but none of your shit was in the form of an effective punch. Like he could beat you in cricket...okay, that's an insult to you kinda. The closer was just a filler that didn't hit him. The M16 line was just nothing special and the opener was just about yourself... nice try but nothing really was that great in this.

Twixn - The line about the ladder was kinda funny. The closer was pretty decent. The rest wasn't anything special but basic punches that were easily enough to take this battle for you. It really doesn't look like you tried very hard against this opponent after seeing his verse. You easily take this for harder punches.

Vote - Twixn

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