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    "Our World" Prt 2 - Problem Child

    The killing of a killer, it happens everyday in democracy
    Because these idiots fail to see, that its all hypocrisy
    Ending lives for the sake of peace, I have to disagree
    There must be less violent ways for us all to be free

    Nobody has the right to end a life, let the lord decide our fate
    Get rid of all guns from our streets and all knives from estates
    We need to rebuild and create, without ever having to wait
    For people spreading this hate, for people throwing their weight
    For people acting as bait, for people wanting to be great
    For people wiping our slates, for people telling it straight
    For people who suffered so much they cant wait to reach heaven
    And reunite with their children who died at the age of seven
    Because of governmental mistakes, ignorance, power and greed
    There are people who cant read and people fearing to plead
    For the right to sow seeds, and the devine right to exceed
    And never having to bleed, for the devine right to succeed

    The killing of a killer, it happens everyday in democracy
    Because these idiots fail to see, that its all hypocrisy
    Ending lives for the sake of peace, I have to disagree
    There must be less violent ways for us all to be free

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    uhm another one wher im concerned about rhyming so many lines in a row.. it just gets a bit boring i think.. ur def not the only one who does it..neway


    good message tho feelin that fo sho
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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

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    this was iight nothing special but a nice read.......stay up and keep spittin!

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