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Thread: Jekyll Ft. Eddy -Brainstorm?

  1. March 31st, 2005, 08:19 AM #1
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    Jekyll Ft. Eddy -Brainstorm?


    Jekyll

    We brainstorm, like cerebral electrical storms
    Stay inside and cover your children ..
    .. A typoon is sweeping in fast, you have been warned!
    The streets are deserted, a perverted emptiness in the air
    You can either stand there and stare ..
    .. Or try to hone your natural flair
    Elemental forces – they are diametrically opposed,
    Somewhere in nature’s garden,
    Someone, just pulled the plug and condoned ..
    .. Millions of people to death,
    It seems that fate and fear are juxtaposed
    You will look me in my eyes ..
    .. And I at once become unclothed

    Switching y0

    Eddy


    So weak .. so weak .. whats inside .. inside my heart and brain?

    my being is just in a state of incongruity
    giving all i got .. everything i AM!
    without any gratuity.. of any kind
    the simple mind, will say its obvious
    you just took the wrong WAY!
    and just let it happen ..
    enclosed it in your broken heart and made it stay
    breaking my encephalon just too find out any kind of solution
    but even with all my wrongdoing
    i just needed too find the path of retribution
    i am, yes i am .. a prisoner ...trapped inside this collision of love and hate
    though i kept my faith .. i couldnt execute any actions for revision
    a chemical reaction from my own corrupt decisions resulting into visions:
    .. blurry and clouded
    those origins of life are just shrouded in mystery
    but i just fail too see .. the truth ..

    Theres this storm, inside my brain.
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  2. March 31st, 2005, 08:22 AM #2
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  3. March 31st, 2005, 08:29 AM #3
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    The two verses actually gelled surprisingly well.
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  4. March 31st, 2005, 08:49 AM #4
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  5. March 31st, 2005, 10:14 AM #5
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    Ed, that "you children" is actually supposed to be "your children."

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  6. March 31st, 2005, 04:17 PM #6
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  7. March 31st, 2005, 04:38 PM #7
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    Very dope piece fellas. Jekyll held it down, starting things off with dope imagery, and kept me interested. Suicide had a dope character voice and expressed a little more emotion which was pretty dope. Both ya had dope verses, both compliment each others. Jek, I see your using the half bar structure which helps alot when you need that crucial stop, I know eds been using it for ages.
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  8. March 31st, 2005, 04:40 PM #8
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    This had a great vocabulary and a vast ammount of content,but the rhymes seemed lacking somewhat.Just rhyme alittle better and more.
    poetically,this was great...filled with imagery and emotion,but since it was posted in open mic,I see room for improvement rhyme-wise.
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  9. March 31st, 2005, 04:43 PM #9
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    fucka good writiers... making my shit not look as dope...

    naw just playin.. this was good.

    jek mentioned that the verses gelled well, and i agree for the most part.
    prolly cuz they were really different in the style and approach, which made it interesting to read.

    this was cool guys.

    check out behind the music,
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  10. March 31st, 2005, 04:53 PM #10
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    This was cool. The styles were very similar. I could see this in the poetic scriptures section. Decent shit.

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  11. March 31st, 2005, 06:32 PM #11
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    Yeah - Sirus, I mentioned that they gelled well, because neither of us knew what the other was keying up, we just went off of the word "brainstorm," without too much of a plan. And they still came out kinda similar. Lol.

    & Wicked - I'll get at yours tomorrow, when I have a little more time. For now, upping.
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  12. March 31st, 2005, 07:43 PM #12
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    That Shit was fire but kinda short you left me hanging but it was still hot the verses sound good together
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    I rub your face off the Earth and curse your family children
    like Amityville drill the nerves in your cavity fillin
    Insanity's building up pavillion in my civilian
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  13. April 1st, 2005, 02:42 AM #13
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  14. April 1st, 2005, 06:57 AM #14
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    This was really good

    I prefered Jekyll's verse to Eddy's because it just seemed to catch my eye more. But both were dope. Flow was good in both but the creativity stood out more than anythin...

    Good work by both

    Can ya's both hit this up please: http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...03#post2240003
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  15. April 1st, 2005, 10:18 AM #15
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    thanks for replys

    quik collabbo's are dope .. good job Jek ..

    next time we will put in more time and effort .. ok

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