10 lines or however many we agreed on
due 30/ after we both check
no d/r
c/v
bitin
g/l
thug_E
Iniquitous
10 lines or however many we agreed on
due 30/ after we both check
no d/r
c/v
bitin
g/l
check.............................................
thug E
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When Ur On Top People Take Shots.........
chezch due 30 from now
Im dyin of w8in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thug E
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drop n ill drop imediately after.
nigga wanted me to spit first...still woulda brought an end to his dream
whats it like to be the whore of ur crew?? dick ridin every member of the A-team
i saw that O.M diss you did against young cash..frankly it wernt worth readin
now wonder you wanted me 2 go first..cus your only worthy wen feedin
what was the reason u got banned son?? free postin or for being wack??
at least you had a bit of dignity our ur way outt..im surprised you came back
i couldnt help but notice ur rec's unshown..arnt you confident bout ur game??
den again it isnt a shock to me..wen ur wackness is defined by the choice of ur name
im surpeised ur in a crew cus every rap of urs ive seen has yet to impress me
therefore i find it hard to comprehend the fact u think u good enough to test me
exceedin the time limit...dawg
How da fuk am i goin 2 battle u, i cant say ur name/
Dis battle aint even started n he's got his ed down in shame/
Ur bitches pulled out der pistols but shot dem selfs in da foot//
I slapped up ya mum so hard, CA$H was finkin she woz a slut//
But me,CA$H n BOB wer rollin around in my Lincoln/
We wer a mile from ya hood but we cud still smell ur verses stinkin/
Y even cum battle me//
Cuz ur da slum of RB//
Im wot all of UR bitches came 2 see/
Im like Game in hate it or love it,raps MVP/
Im da 1st one 2 kick dis guy of da site//
Im da 1st one 2 tell dis bitches he's shit//
i jus pulled dis shitty verses out mi ass real quick!!!!!!
drop bitch!!!!
thug E
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uppin.....leave links n ill hit em up...pz
bump.......leave links n ill hit em up
uppin 3.........leave links
iniquitous - Not your best work at all, did you have writers block or something? I felt like you kept doing the .... thing and I was expecting something creative and it didn't come. The opener was decent, but the rest was light jabs... like he's only good when he feeds..your surprised he came back cause he was so wack...aight, just could have been better.
thug - When you started talking about fucking his mom I knew it was all downhill. Don't talk about sex, gays, or stupid mama jokes, that shit isn't funny and isn't harsh. You also had a ton of self-glorification that wasn't anything special. As a whole, your verse was awful, you need to elevate.
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last up...leave links
Iniquitous
nigga wanted me to spit first...still woulda brought an end to his dream
whats it like to be the whore of ur crew?? dick ridin every member of the A-team
ok
i saw that O.M diss you did against young cash..frankly it wernt worth readin
now wonder you wanted me 2 go first..cus your only worthy wen feedin
ok
what was the reason u got banned son?? free postin or for being wack??
at least you had a bit of dignity our ur way outt..im surprised you came back
uhh
i couldnt help but notice ur rec's unshown..arnt you confident bout ur game??
den again it isnt a shock to me..wen ur wackness is defined by the choice of ur name
ok
im surpeised ur in a crew cus every rap of urs ive seen has yet to impress me
therefore i find it hard to comprehend the fact u think u good enough to test me
ok
overall: ur verse wasnt too great and it wasnt too bad. u shouldve reworded some lines around to make em sound better. ur flow was alright and there were some punches. not too bad. 6.5/10
Thug
How da fuk am i goin 2 battle u, i cant say ur name/
Dis battle aint even started n he's got his ed down in shame/
nah
Ur bitches pulled out der pistols but shot dem selfs in da foot//
I slapped up ya mum so hard, CA$H was finkin she woz a slut//
no played
But me,CA$H n BOB wer rollin around in my Lincoln/
We wer a mile from ya hood but we cud still smell ur verses stinkin/
once again, no
Y even cum battle me//
Cuz ur da slum of RB//
awful
Im wot all of UR bitches came 2 see/
Im like Game in hate it or love it,raps MVP/
uhh
Im da 1st one 2 kick dis guy of da site//
Im da 1st one 2 tell dis bitches he's shit//
rhyme...
overall: ur verse want even worth readin, it was horrible. it was completely effortless and was wack. sum shit didnt even rhyme, u had stuff played and lil lines and no vocab wuts so ever. 2/10
v/iniquitous- had a better verse with more punches, a better vocab, and less played
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