Hunting For Thrills (Canvas of a Madman)

[Bounce]

Hunting For Thrills: Canvas of a Madman

I bleed the eternal ink of tainted poetry as I think
Blink & this colonel's painted thoughts are fired to a beat
Retreat as my words bring death to life on a canvas of meat
Defeat’s the only option when evil’s pushed to its brink

Synced images of torture invade the idle mind when I rhyme
Crime scenes are blocked-off; on the spot body parts were lopped-off
Mock troughs are filled w/the entrails of swine from the pigs that I scoff
Coughs of red death spew forth as the squeals reveal the source of true grime

Nine mils of standard issue, no amount of tissue can clean face
A mean place where you’re just street waste in a rat race with Babylon
Babble on, as I dabble in your blood while the battle’s on
Prattle drawn & tight, your mindless dribble adds hue to a colorless space

Embrace the might of cold steel with surgical skill while ancestry spills
n’fills a blank canvas with your life’s creation, a true damnation
Realization comes at an orgasmic pace, a true climax of sensation
Presentation’s the key to my art, but a cops last grin's………………….
………..........what keeps the beat in my heart, when I’m hunting for thrills

[Bounce]

Replied to K's latest drop, something or another, and mental volcano and a bunch of other stuff I can remember.

[Edicius]

yea, i was feeling this .. someone who knows what sheme of rhyme i use! good immagery .. and the flow was dope due the inners you used, a well painted picture.

Nine mils of standard issue, no amount of tissue can clean face
A mean place where you’re just street waste in a rat race with Babylon
Babble on, as I dabble in your blood while the battle’s on
Prattle drawn & tight, your mindless dribble adds hue to a colorless space

word.

i enjoyed this ..

hit up ' system ..what?

[Deviate]

This was nice... Incredible imagery... Pretty gruesome though. You had excellent flow from the assonance you made use of... The vocabulary was excellent. There isn't anything for me to criticize to be honest. You consistantly drop intense, emotional, powerful and, generally, excellent pieces that I always enjoy reading. I hope now that you're helping out with this forum you'll write a little more... I know I look for your pieces.

Keep writing... This was good...

If you could check out one of the pieces in my sig I'd appreciate it...

Peace

[K9_THESHIT]

great piece Bounce...the imagery was done very nice,i liked it a lot.i liked your wordchoice and vocabulary...the flow was great due to many internal rhymes,multiple syllabes rhyming and multis.i like that every time you know where to put multis and internals man.great read...nice to see you and vets in general dropping more in OM.a lot has changed in the last week in OM...

Peace!

[Na~Ledge]

Another nice drop Bounce....I think the vocab and word usage were well above par. I also liked the rhyme shceme you choose to use in this verse, was ver oriinal and made the piece just that much more interesting. Embodied all the key elements of a good drop. One of the things I was most impressed with was your use of internal rhyme, which is something that I'm really trying to improve on. I think you provided a good exapmle of when to use it, and more importantly when not to use it. Nice drop as usually man.

Peace

[Bounce]

Thanks for all the replies guy's. I'm glad you liked it, I had a few minutes to spare so I decided to drop a verse. I will try to contribute more often to the forum now that things are looking better.

[Dan Dare]

Wow, this was a really great quick 16 line drop. Really impressive, morbid kind of imagery, & the wording hit the spot nicely. There's not too much I can say to criticise. The metas were really smart as well. It read fairly smoothly, some lines I had to read twice but it wasn't a problem as such, just me, I'm tired. I know this was a quick drop, but it was really well thought out nonetheless.

[Bounce]

thanks man, just got a ticket... you know...

[warchild]

This was nice son first thing i noticed about the piece was the structure its a lot different from most mcs which is always good i doubt many people would catch it. The imagery was raw and dark which is always good you used your vocab in the right way not just saying big words for the sake of it.
Like i said the structure was different but good the vocab was good the flow was real nice in parts so i couldnt hate on this piece.

Return the favour:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=186523

[Awaken]

Yeah yeah another dope read in the books from Bounce. Seriously, everything I read by you just makes me want to write. The flow was good, vocab was pure as always. The only thing I didn't like was the topic, or maybe its just me. Otherwise, good read good read.

[..IllThoughtZ..]

yo this piece was dope...it had everything: vocab, multies, nice concept, good rhyme scheme..the only thing it didnt have was the good structure. but nontheless your flow was still very easy to follow which made the read that much more easier. I noticed your good use of internals which show me that you know what you're doing whereas others just use internals where unneccessary. you used them at the right point. nice ...but dark concept kept me attached the whole way through.

Embrace the might of cold steel with surgical skill while ancestry spills
n’fills a blank canvas with your life’s creation, a true damnation
Realization comes at an orgasmic pace, a true climax of sensation
Presentation’s the key to my art, but a cops last grin's………………….

thats mos def my fav stanza..it was jus well worded and i liked your choice of vocab.

Nine mils of standard issue, no amount of tissue can clean face
A mean place where you’re just street waste in a rat race with Babylon
Babble on, as I dabble in your blood while the battle’s on
Prattle drawn & tight, your mindless dribble adds hue to a colorless space

lol nuff said...jus consistency is the key and you show it in all of your drops....keep writing im looking forward to more from you

[Bounce]

Thanks for taking the time people...

[Bounce]

up?

[Born To Kill]

Now see, man...

Motherfucker...

THIS is Bounce's thinking shit...that nasty shit that sets a mind all off.

Now I need that joint!

Great shit, real fuckin nice...much better than The Awakening.
Tight, complex rhyme scheme back in effect...dope!

Cuz, now I'm all wondering if ya cop killer, gang banger...or maybe both?
Or...are ya a lunatic, murdering bad cop?
It boggles the mind a bit. I'll have to reread this after my joint.

But dope shit...great, gory descriptions...inspiring...seriously...
Ya know I loves the horrorcore!

I'll check back in a bit.

Nice!