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NEED VOTEZ ON MY BATTLE ILL RETURN THA FAVA
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=187874
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I spit so much, my lungs get SWELLED UP/
my tonsils get HELD UP/
as soon as you agreed to this shit, you just got your-SELF FUCKED UP/
Next time, I'll get more DETAILS/
for RETAILS, I ain't know Rapbattles was full of FEMALES/
INNOH..., you will have your chance, you will BLEW YOUR REVENGE/
and what I'll DO IF YOU WIN/
Is make you eat my shit THROUGH A SYRENGE/
With the SYRENGES blowing with the power of many ENGINES/
I blow past your flow in with TEN MENS and VENGANCE/
Hold up a dildo, like WHO'S IS THIS?/
It's INNOH.... what you USE TO KISS/
Im snappin, rappin, attackin like this was your CRUCIFIX/
Put up your written shit, I'll tear that JOKE TO A PREFIX/
yo that waz hotOriginally Posted by yo boy D
yo i need votez on my battle
ill return da fava
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=187874
Arrggghhh.. !!...
faggot you'll get ripped-son, 'your more of slide through' than a split lung
your shits dumb, hes 'next generation', because he'll never be anything in THIS ONE
when was this herb such a star?, i'll beat 'boy', like ABUSIVE FIRMS IN AFAR !..
i mean, god.. who loses to someone that rhymes the same word in a bar?!!
a nerds what you are, get off the act-d, i'll cut your FETUS TO SORTS!
intell they can't stand 'the sight of d' like GENIOUS REPORTS !
the meanest, ofcourse..his rhymes never manage, this guy isn't frantic
yea hes in the 'hood ya'll', hes a PART TIME MECHANIC !!!!
how many times has he panicked?..whaddu high with a fever, i'll beat this GUY WITH RECIEVERS !
then throw him high to the reeper, cuz it's 'loud in clear 'ds wack' like shovin his LINES THROUGH A SPEAKER !
blah..fuck it.
uppin
yo boy d gets my vote cuz he has better structure thats all im sayin
good verse tho innoh
V. yo boy
RTF DUN
spit so much, my lungs get SWELLED UP/
my tonsils get HELD UP/
as soon as you agreed to this shit, you just got your-SELF FUCKED UP/
Next time, I'll get more DETAILS/
for RETAILS, I ain't know Rapbattles was full of FEMALES/
INNOH..., you will have your chance, you will BLEW YOUR REVENGE/
and what I'll DO IF YOU WIN/
Is make you eat my shit THROUGH A SYRENGE/
With the SYRENGES blowing with the power of many ENGINES/
I blow past your flow in with TEN MENS and VENGANCE/
Hold up a dildo, like WHO'S IS THIS?/
It's INNOH.... what you USE TO KISS/
Im snappin, rappin, attackin like this was your CRUCIFIX/
Put up your written shit, I'll tear that JOKE TO A PREFIX/
Not really feelin this verse, It was actually week imo. You have alot of elevating to do.
Vs.
faggot you'll get ripped-son, 'your more of slide through' than a split lung
your shits dumb, hes 'next generation', because he'll never be anything in THIS ONE
when was this herb such a star?, i'll beat 'boy', like ABUSIVE FIRMS IN AFAR !..
i mean, god.. who loses to someone that rhymes the same word in a bar?!!
a nerds what you are, get off the act-d, i'll cut your FETUS TO SORTS!
intell they can't stand 'the sight of d' like GENIOUS REPORTS !
the meanest, ofcourse..his rhymes never manage, this guy isn't frantic
yea hes in the 'hood ya'll', hes a PART TIME MECHANIC !!!!
how many times has he panicked?..whaddu high with a fever, i'll beat this GUY WITH RECIEVERS !
then throw him high to the reeper, cuz it's 'loud in clear 'ds wack' like shovin his LINES THROUGH A SPEAKER !
Overall this wasnt to bad of a verse, Nice punces, Need to work on your flow tho.
V/ Inno
uppin
yo boy d had betta structure than inno but yall both did good
but YBD had also harda punchez
v/YBD
votes and feedback
just for reference "not bad" beats "ok"
I spit so much, my lungs get SWELLED UP/
my tonsils get HELD UP/
-- so??
as soon as you agreed to this shit, you just got your-SELF FUCKED UP/
--not part of the rhyme flow
Next time, I'll get more DETAILS/
for RETAILS, I ain't know Rapbattles was full of FEMALES/
--not too bad
INNOH..., you will have your chance, you will BLEW YOUR REVENGE/
and what I'll DO IF YOU WIN/
Is make you eat my shit THROUGH A SYRENGE/
--ok
With the SYRENGES blowing with the power of many ENGINES/
I blow past your flow in with TEN MENS and VENGANCE/
--ok
Hold up a dildo, like WHO'S IS THIS?/
It's INNOH.... what you USE TO KISS/
--hehe
Im snappin, rappin, attackin like this was your CRUCIFIX/
Put up your written shit, I'll tear that JOKE TO A PREFIX/
--ok
vs.
faggot you'll get ripped-son, 'your more of slide through' than a split lung
your shits dumb, hes 'next generation', because he'll never be anything in THIS ONE
--hehe nice
when was this herb such a star?, i'll beat 'boy', like ABUSIVE FIRMS IN AFAR !..
i mean, god.. who loses to someone that rhymes the same word in a bar?!!
--nice
a nerds what you are, get off the act-d, i'll cut your FETUS TO SORTS!
intell they can't stand 'the sight of d' like GENIOUS REPORTS !
--not bad
the meanest, ofcourse..his rhymes never manage, this guy isn't frantic
yea hes in the 'hood ya'll', hes a PART TIME MECHANIC !!!!
--hehe
how many times has he panicked?..whaddu high with a fever, i'll beat this GUY WITH RECIEVERS !
then throw him high to the reeper, cuz it's 'loud in clear 'ds wack' like shovin his LINES THROUGH A SPEAKER !
--not bad
so basically, overall I think InnOhVashun took it
if you can vote, can you hit my battles? cheers
I spit so much, my lungs get SWELLED UP/
my tonsils get HELD UP/
as soon as you agreed to this shit, you just got your-SELF FUCKED UP/
--Eh okay, but kinda screwed up your multie on the last line.
Next time, I'll get more DETAILS/
for RETAILS, I ain't know Rapbattles was full of FEMALES/
--Okay.
INNOH..., you will have your chance, you will BLEW YOUR REVENGE/
and what I'll DO IF YOU WIN/
Is make you eat my shit THROUGH A SYRENGE/
--Not really a punch.
With the SYRENGES blowing with the power of many ENGINES/
I blow past your flow in with TEN MENS and VENGANCE/
--Not a punch.
Hold up a dildo, like WHO'S IS THIS?/
It's INNOH.... what you USE TO KISS/
--Could've used some wordplay or vocab here. Okay I guess.
Im snappin, rappin, attackin like this was your CRUCIFIX/
Put up your written shit, I'll tear that JOKE TO A PREFIX/
--Okay.
vs
Arrggghhh.. !!...
faggot you'll get ripped-son, 'your more of slide through' than a split lung
your shits dumb, hes 'next generation', because he'll never be anything in THIS ONE
--Hahahaha, nice personal at his sig, good wordplay.
when was this herb such a star?, i'll beat 'boy', like ABUSIVE FIRMS IN AFAR !..
i mean, god.. who loses to someone that rhymes the same word in a bar?!!
--Nice.
a nerds what you are, get off the act-d, i'll cut your FETUS TO SORTS!
intell they can't stand 'the sight of d' like GENIOUS REPORTS !
--Good.
the meanest, ofcourse..his rhymes never manage, this guy isn't frantic
yea hes in the 'hood ya'll', hes a PART TIME MECHANIC !!!!
--Haha okay.
how many times has he panicked?..whaddu high with a fever, i'll beat this GUY WITH RECIEVERS !
then throw him high to the reeper, cuz it's 'loud in clear 'ds wack' like shovin his LINES THROUGH A SPEAKER !
--Nice.
v/ InnOh
Return the favor y'all and leave some feedback on one of my battles.
blah..fuck it.
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