--Topical Battle--
Topic
God Has a Gun
Length
15 line min.
30 line max.
House Rules
Due Date
30 minz afta check in
check in in 10 minz
G/L
--Topical Battle--
Topic
God Has a Gun
Length
15 line min.
30 line max.
House Rules
Due Date
30 minz afta check in
check in in 10 minz
G/L
no dip shit...i used my battle credits.....you just wasted a fuckin thread...battl in mine...dont have somebody set it up and when they get it set up...not use it and set another one up...thats ridiculous
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r u gunna fuckin use my rulez or not cuz i aint got all day
what ever...just make it an hour after check in......
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aight wateva itz an hour afta check in now im bout 2 spyt
thats tight...checkin in..........................
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As I sit infront of this tomb stone,reading your name
i try to imagine,why I sit here in vain
your pain was running so deep like oceans were full
its like intense radiation tryna remember you body still
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*Dose's off *
As I take the short cut and reach the porch front
I relise my doors shut And I want to pause but
somthing telling me to quickly vanish out of sight
I launch to a dark place like someone abolished light
a quick fright reveals a crucial moment in any mans life
laying next to me is my fathers eradiated body,no knife,
I cant move my bodys still like a statue's movie
-Pause-
I gota think,find a reason for this guys leaving
its right in front of my face but Im still not beleaving
Such a strong man's existance been removed with ease
the killer wants me,he just doing this to tease
kneeling above him resting my confused forhead on his chest
i wish i could of wrapped my body around him like a vest
speradic climate changes bring my temprature down
but Im still over heating when i hear a sound
as I glance above lifes destiny a witness the killer
this is the start of a lifes sequal like a new thriller
cant let this maniac get the best of me,i will fight
but how do i fight man whos kills r as simple as turning off a light
*dies*
God Has a Gun
Some say in a metaphoric phrase,God's got a Gun
and hes aimin for tha sun,praise and amen,men gotta run
hide theyselves when they shelves begin to shake
mountains shift,tha oceans lift as tha moon begins to break
scaled eight earthquake,seems its the apocalypse
god has just been droppin tips,and so what if a comet hits
hes on goldenstreets with a cannon,just to examine
how tha sins of man can escape gods plannin,hes demandin
to know what evil has beseached his people,too lethal
to ingest by men but decietful,women in crumbled steeples
sins more serious than mens,offend what thee defends
force depends on trends of troops,its God they will commend
who needs it more,bring death to what you cant perfect
tha dialect suggests,if were less than best,our deaths progress
when your made in an image never seen,whats tha vintage
how perfect can we be,from an image we cant see,so were a percentage
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uppin...fixin to go to bed..need some votes on this topical..
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need some fuckin votes people...yall act like ya got narcolepsy..
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need votes........................................
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....out of all da topicals....god has a gun....wow, all well yall made ya verses so ima just help yall out and vote. i felt that treazon won dis because i thought his verse was more creative and he had better wordplay on da whole thing, kartoon u had a nice verse but i think treazon's verse was a little better
so thats wassup
v/ treazon
thanks............................................
Last edited by sILLable; August 10th, 2005 at 01:29 AM
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up.#4.............................................
Last edited by sILLable; August 10th, 2005 at 01:29 AM
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motherfuckin stuck in this game of uppin.......~1~
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