ToTwoToo[OW] vs. Spicy_One[LS]

[n0nchalant]

Crew Battle: Oh Word? vs. Lost Souls

ToTwoToo vs. Spicy_One

TEXT

You guys agree on line limits. and check in is due today(EST).

Due date for verse is midnight tonight(EST).

Goodluck to both.

[n0nchalant]

ch check! 10 lines..

[Spicy_One]

10 lines? lets make it 12, and im good.........check.......good luck man......

[n0nchalant]

alrite 12 it is..gl

[~ladie_streetz~]

drop somethin good spicy... i wanna see this shit yamean....

[Spicy_One]

had to drop early
Wish we could battle face to face........

Cause its one only a mother could love, its a shame we aint saw it,
cause dude probably so ugly daddy carry that kid pic that come in a wallet...
Ur flow is like "who cares", and ur punches, well they "whatever",
maybe if ya take lessons form me, you might get a lil better...
I will always shine, and always put up some real good lyrical fights,
you...couldnt shine if it were dark, and you had on bright christmas lights....
Ima go easy, its over, and its not really worth typing either,
only time two could get the crowd jumpin, is spittin at a horror movie threatre...
Twos rhymes suck, and nope i dont think i can compete,(lol)
his rhymes is so tired n played, you had the "wake up show" fallin asleep...
You wanted to battle for slips, thinkin we would be petrified,
cause if we were, sorry to tell you, but ur crew woulda died...

~1~

[ToTwoToo]

sit on your pine, then watch me lift this kid like bench press
but he wouldnt even reach the top if he sucked at playin tetris
ill pop a cap at your head, like this kid is a jew
asked if he was packed, n he said i styl got a month before i move
hear spicy say hoe hoe hoe, cuz he know ima get him whored
your verse isn't pretty at all, like the type of guys you chase for
ill make him dance all his limbs off, once i start the beat
n when he runnin from gangs, the only time he hustle the streets
he prolly 30 years old, n wack, ugly n then some
how can you live with your self? oh wait he prolly live wit his damn mom
act like a vet, play your role but man you'll never beat me
funny how i put you in a cast, n i aint even got a movie

aint gotta try

[The sickone]

spicy- was not feeling your verse. your pucnhes was weak. try 2 make harder punches next time and uses better vocabs. also ur structure was iight, not that good but ok. just elevate more and be more direct and creative.222- pretty ok verse. liked some punches that u throwed at him and ur structure was iight 2. u had better wordin and uses of vocabs.

v/2

[ToTwoToo]

uppin 1

[ToTwoToo]

uppin 2

[Prettyboy]

uppin 2

Listen u both got some good lines but damn think ur rhymes all the way through this goes to Spicy one not because he's better b/c he was way smoother with shit but both of are wack

[ToTwoToo]

^stfu faggit. uppin 3

[Shamcobra]

Listen u both got some good lines but damn think ur rhymes all the way through this goes to Spicy one not because he's better b/c he was way smoother with shit but both of are wack

^LOL at this idiot. I killed him earlier in a battle.

Cause its one only a mother could love, its a shame we aint saw it,
cause dude probably so ugly daddy carry that kid pic that come in a wallet...
EH
Ur flow is like "who cares", and ur punches, well they "whatever",
maybe if ya take lessons form me, you might get a lil better...
K
I will always shine, and always put up some real good lyrical fights,
you...couldnt shine if it were dark, and you had on bright christmas lights....
OK
Ima go easy, its over, and its not really worth typing either,
only time two could get the crowd jumpin, is spittin at a horror movie threatre...
NO
Twos rhymes suck, and nope i dont think i can compete,(lol)
his rhymes is so tired n played, you had the "wake up show" fallin asleep...
OK
You wanted to battle for slips, thinkin we would be petrified,
cause if we were, sorry to tell you, but ur crew woulda died...
Ehh Finisher

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sit on your pine, then watch me lift this kid like bench press
but he wouldnt even reach the top if he sucked at playin tetris
OK opener
ill pop a cap at your head, like this kid is a jew
asked if he was packed, n he said i styl got a month before i move
OK
hear spicy say hoe hoe hoe, cuz he know ima get him whored
your verse isn't pretty at all, like the type of guys you chase for
ehh
ill make him dance all his limbs off, once i start the beat
n when he runnin from gangs, the only time he hustle the streets
Ok
he prolly 30 years old, n wack, ugly n then some
how can you live with your self? oh wait he prolly live wit his damn mom
No
act like a vet, play your role but man you'll never beat me
funny how i put you in a cast, n i aint even got a movie
Ok finisher



Alright to ok verses. Punches were pretty even. Totwotoo I think took it cause of the flow and overall structure a few of his punches hit a little harder, still pretty close battle.

V/To

[ToTwoToo]

uppin 4

[Token Muslim]

had to drop early
Wish we could battle face to face........

Cause its one only a mother could love, its a shame we aint saw it,
cause dude probably so ugly daddy carry that kid pic that come in a wallet...
meh........snuk in off that face to face
Ur flow is like "who cares", and ur punches, well they "whatever",
maybe if ya take lessons form me, you might get a lil better...
oK
I will always shine, and always put up some real good lyrical fights,
you...couldnt shine if it were dark, and you had on bright christmas lights....
OK
Ima go easy, its over, and its not really worth typing either,
only time two could get the crowd jumpin, is spittin at a horror movie threatre...
no.....stretched/ok concept tho
Twos rhymes suck, and nope i dont think i can compete,(lol)
his rhymes is so tired n played, you had the "wake up show" fallin asleep...
OK
You wanted to battle for slips, thinkin we would be petrified,
cause if we were, sorry to tell you, but ur crew woulda died...
IIght closer.......need 2 finish strong

8/10


VS.


sit on your pine, then watch me lift this kid like bench press
but he wouldnt even reach the top if he sucked at playin tetris
nice
ill pop a cap at your head, like this kid is a jew
asked if he was packed, n he said i styl got a month before i move
OK.........fix structure up
hear spicy say hoe hoe hoe, cuz he know ima get him whored
your verse isn't pretty at all, like the type of guys you chase for
Meh
ill make him dance all his limbs off, once i start the beat
n when he runnin from gangs, the only time he hustle the streets
Ok
he prolly 30 years old, n wack, ugly n then some
how can you live with your self? oh wait he prolly live wit his damn mom
No/ again fix dat structure
act like a vet, play your role but man you'll never beat me
funny how i put you in a cast, n i aint even got a movie
Ok closer

8.5/10



Overall pretty close battle. but i think too had a little better punches that edged this vote for him.... spicey same to u most was on point but i thought u failed 2 come as hard.. above is what i thought so here's the breakdown

MY score card (by points)

1 point for good comment
.5 point for Meh comment
0 points bad comment

multipy total by 2 for a out of 10 score

LINK
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=228953