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    Silence Speaks feat. -Twizted-

    Out.Cry

    My first glance, whispers speak to me freely in my thinking
    thoughts sinking into my brain so abruptly my mind begins blinking
    soul shrinking, devil winking at my mere dismay
    scenery looks like a play but everything goes from colors to grey
    everything fades, tears fill my eyes, i sometimes hope that my life'll be spayed
    my victims strayed, my lyrical cuts infected blood spits and sprays
    and all you listeners, just to let you know your hearing pure silence
    me and Twizted are spitting dead violence we'll come through and rip the nylon
    viewers describe my fear in 1 way, screaming overwhelms the sirens
    voices tell me I'm deceased, I hope to god they're lyin'
    it seemed to me as a game, but then it got serious and hard
    if you think I rhyme crazy, wait till i come rip through these bars
    but the stench of hatred and feud, fills the cracks of the good
    satan threw god in the casket and slammed the nail through the wood
    a flash of white blinks often, i awake from my trance
    wipe my face with my fingers, but then i see blood on my hands
    i passout from the view, red liquid is my weakness
    so like before i scream my soul out, but still I'm speechless
    and over again, the devil grabs me and i will never be able to keep
    and i feel like talking, but I'm zipped up and i can't speak.

    -Twizted-

    Silence speaks, through vibrations, reflections and that sweet hushing kiss
    as broken cries of pain, and joy simmer in an un opened bag of nothingness
    it takes no experience to understand, or any type of language being speaked
    for it runs through our watery blue veins of red, also known as instinct
    there is no other way to define it, for it's origins are stationary
    and only a picture of a thousand words, could save it in a dictionary
    it's double faced... though happiness and sorrow, each side has horns,
    one like the tip of a bull, and the other just as desireable as rose thorns
    with the shape of a ying yang, nothing near as round or purified core
    it only has one eye, yet it stands for both south and north.
    when these opposites attract, we have enough power to energize the earth
    to solve every bleeding heart, so that we may give another in birth

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    To settle everyone's thoughts... I didn't finish mine.

    When I read it, I saw shit. and I have no self confidence. so I just, stopped writing.

    Sorry outcry.


    by the way: mine was a poem, not a topical.

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    Last edited by Out.Cry; September 18th, 2005 at 01:47 AM

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    soul shrinking, devil winking at my mere dismay
    scenery looks like a play but everything goes from colors to grey
    but the stench of hatred and feud, fills the cracks of the good
    satan threw god in the casket and slammed the nail through the wood

    those two couplets were fucking dope as FUCK. overall, i liked your verse alot, but at some points, there were kinda unnessacary lines, such as...

    and all you listeners, just to let you know your hearing pure silence
    me and Twizted are spitting dead violence we'll come through and rip the nylon

    dope verse though. some real cool lines.

    twizted. you started off cool, but then it got kinda evident you gave up on motivation, and just started writing without as deep of thought.

    it takes no experience to understand, or any type of language being speaked
    for it runs through our watery blue veins of red, also known as instinct

    that was deep and dope. should have stayed at it.
    You really think ur tough... come 'n try me man
    I’ll get a hiccup that isn’t spasms of the diaphragm

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    thanks for the feed jay.........BumP

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    uppin for sum more feed.

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