"Sex" by Shellz ft. ~ladie_streetz~

[ItsCyrious]

"Sex" by Lost Souls Collaborationz

Ladie's verse = Black
Shellz' verse = Green

like the whip cream on the pussy lick it off well
my clothes off wit my cherry thong watch hiz dick swell
suck the tits and rub ya tongue all around til the milk spill
we fuck in all areas like Jack n Jill fucked on on that hill
beat the pussy up give the motion into to my ocean
got the best pussy right herre no need to play wit ms. lotion
fuck the dick hard slide my pussy up and down on the tip
kiss the think body all around and see my cum start to drip
make a this nigga bust 6 times feels so good he wont know he let go
the way i ride the big dick is like im givin a lap dance freak show
breakin bed boards in and bustin holes and dents in the walls
hittin this ass from the back position makes the slob slide from ya jaws
bend the two legs back til they go behind my head
eat the pussy good lickity-lick wit my legs stretched n spread
fuckin em wit essential oils rubbed on the bodies break N my back
fuck for 8 hrs str8 no doubt up until he hs nomore cum left in the sack

Sex is a strong word, cuz you could do it anywhere
you could could fuck on the floor or u can do it in the air
who cares? If the mood is right than get straight to it
if u don’t take ya chance when it comes ur str8 stupid
come through the door and ya gurl throw her panties at u
thats how u kno that she about to throw her phanny at u
be ready tho.....pull off ya pants pull out the rubber
its best not to fuck without a jimmy unless u love her
so after u strap it on u get ready to go a couple rounds
turn her all around, and try to fuck her up and down
and if she a freak, make sure that u fuck her wild
and proud, cuz like Juelz u bout to “drop a couple pounds”
if she wild, then put her legs behind her head
and if she want it from the back, put her laid up on the bed
thats what I would do if I was gettin sum punani
but knowin me, I like it raw...I would have a child probly

[ItsCyrious]

links

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...69#post3265869
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...46#post3265846

[~ladie_streetz~]

dam i didnt even see this shit right here..........

[waterflow]

yeah that joint was hot and i liked how shellz brong it all together in the end. but i think that yall need to get a better flow cause not to many people is goin 2 read it fast so the rhymes get mest up. and i no the topic is sex but ladies was a lil mo graphical than shellz yall needed to find the level of explicity and yall be staight but basically that was hot

[~ladie_streetz~]

thanks....
it was aight to me though. i was speakin the real. but thnakjs for your honest feed tru we can work on flow a little bit more...
uppin for feed

[Alphabetized]

both had a pretty hot ass flow... uhh lemme just say u did a good job paintin the picture.... haha.. nice vocab too good flow, everything pretty solid here good work

[Jake.Aben$]

ya niggaz ready know im on da remix.....early......hot shit though..ya musta been mad horny...when ya wrote this

[M.O.U.S.E.]

Hahaaha ha tha join was like dat! i can actually say i could picture that on B.E.T. uncut lol. Asses droppin, niggas throwin dollas and the lyrics is like dat 2... flow and erything.... NICEEE!

I cant battle until these get closed out....
Mouse vs. D.E.A.
Mouse vs. Master Theisis
Your Opinion is always Appreciated whether its against me or for me.

[mcbadboy]

both of yo can rap good i like the rhymes 10/10

[ADR]

lady strets.....u need to holla at me then ma worrd.....lmao but nah ya flow was sick ya emotion was def felt .....vision and creativity was easily picked up on this ...ill job

shellz...u had the more lay'd back approach which was ill gave this joit to diffrent looks ya fow as well was hot ....keep up the good work

word

[FanTa ZeE]

10/10 for real?

no way man, don't take this the wrong way but i didnt like either verse particularly, it was lacking in origionality and emotion, you portrayed sex as something totally cliche, using lines that have been played more times than the final fantasy games. The second verse wasn't too bad, some of the lines were a little forced, i didnt like the way the stanza began, and the last two lines didn't rhyme which kinda threw me off. The first verse was totally lacking in any individuality whatsoever, some of the lines were daft, it sounded like it came from the mind of a horny 13 year old male virgin to tell the truth...not hating, just my opinion, you could really benefit from extending your vocabulary and developing some of your own ideas..a topic like sex is so open, you can use some great metaphors and similes, and create a really beautiful or passionate picture of something that can be interpreted in many ways..build on what you have.

[~ladie_streetz~]

thankz for the feed back ya'll..
i feel what ya'll saying though real deal. but thatz just what i like, so i spoke the real about the shit. glad ya'll enjoyed it
uppin 4 more feed on this shit

[Mc-trinity]

yo i like it rate it a ten/ten,everything is good,so good i can picture it

[~ladie_streetz~]

for all those who can picture it all, ya'll must be some freaks for real, like me ha ha thnaks for ya feed though

[ItsCyrious]

thx for all the feed, keep it comin